>>97189557>It's a pretty obvious story direction and something a 13 year old would come up with on their 'omg I'll make a story about demons killing a god but the god is totally evil so it's justified' story so it fits.To be fair, old girl did write this shit when she was 15.
The story has since become a slightly more nuanced tale about the rebellion of not so heroic rebels against a galactic orwellian theocracy.
It can all end up sounding like a bunch of trash if Michelle isn't careful, but the "God slayer" plot has as much potential as another idea in the hands of the right person.
Even if it is a bit predictable.
