>>123458873Im not that author but a fellow author.
It was very cute even thought I'm not a fan of Spranne. The beginning felt a bit rushed in my opinion and could have used a bit more set dressing but could be just me.
The spelling and couple of word choices were distracting, I can point these out if you want or a quick run through grammarly might do it.
The dialogue felt very natural and in character, so feel very proud of that part.
I hope I was helpful.
