>>59645566/10, minus points mainly for anatomy, especially with the arms and hands and, of course, because of lack of polish, you can see smudges and where you erased old lines, the borders cut off part of the characters in a way that looks like it wasn't intended and there wasn't enough space on the paper to fix it, things like that.
It just doesn't look that good, when you're not zoomed in and pretty messy and confusing.
But when you look past those surface things (which are very important when you want to be active on social media) it actually looks really cool, creative and soulful. I like the folds, the cool comic way in which you draw faces and use proportions and that you drew the characters really big and clear on that page and while your lineart could use with some polish as well, they are clear and there are no confusing additional lines. Overall, the depiction itself just reeks of potential.
It's very cool and interesting and I really hope you keep drawing, OP; I'm sure you'll come up with really awesome stuff.
