>>5444907>>5444965I like the approach I just feel like the anime proportions aren't translating well into the painted medium. maybe drop the manga-style triangle nose and go for a more regular-looking one, and slightly increase the size of the mouth. Also, I feel like the ear on stage right isn't quite working, feels like it would be foreshortened behind the cheek more.
>>5445029I like the values, just be aware of the way the neck of the vase is slightly leaning, try and make both sides of the neck parallel
>>5445484it's got a really strong composition and colour scheme. the values are a little harsh between light and dark, kinda feels a little half baked right now but I'm sure its still a WIP. I'd maybe round out the features more (for example the fingers and thumb on the raised hand look quite flat)
also, I feel like the sword hilt should be given more space on the silhouette or none at all. I feel a little tacked on at this stage. other than that I really like it.
Current WIP. That robodog from the BF6 Trailer
Also a reminder to ignore crits from faggots who don't post work.
