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Criticize my new art

Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 16:32:55 2020 No.4950562 View Reply Original Report

Quoted By: >>4951092 >>4951171 >>4951268 >>4951332 >>4951341 >>4951349 >>4952054 >>4953447 >>4954048 >>4954165 >>4954243 >>4954819 >>4955363 >>4957273

Hi /ic/ again
I haven't posted any work lately because of my university work
But here's my latest work made in 7min inspired by a refreance that I memorized
So what you think about it
Please criticize me and give me advices as always
Thank you

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2020 16:40:53 No.4950571 Report

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Post in /beg/

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2020 16:47:19 No.4950580 Report

Quoted By: >>4951055

l like

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2020 21:47:25 No.4951055 Report

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>>4950580
Thank you anon
I will try to improve
So I can make better art pieces for you

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2020 21:55:53 No.4951070 Report

Quoted By: >>4951081 >>4957127

this takes me back to 7th grade doodling in history class

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2020 22:03:52 No.4951081 Report

Quoted By: >>4953261

>>4951070
Since I was a kid I used to doodle everywhere
And even now , I'm 20th year old and I still doodle in university
Because simply I love drawing and work hard to improve even during my tight university schedule

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2020 22:08:07 No.4951092 Report

Quoted By: >>4951188 >>4951945 >>4952064 >>4955907 >>4957622

>>4950562
Hey can you stop posting threads of yourself?

I know English most likely isn't your first language let alone one in which you have achieved some sort of proficiency, but posting a thread solely for your own art is *really unmannered* on /ic/, you should post in /beg/ and /asg/ instead.

I understand you have no malicious intentions but please keep in mind that making these threads is kinda rude in a way.
Please adjust your behaviour accordingly.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2020 22:48:17 No.4951171 Report

Quoted By: >>4951259 >>4951945

>>4950562
How do I learn your style? You have any reference? Looks great!

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2020 22:52:39 No.4951188 Report

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>>4951092
Fuck you nigger.
Not OP.
Keep your mouth shout.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2020 23:27:34 No.4951259 Report

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>>4951171
please bump

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2020 23:31:40 No.4951268 Report

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>>4950562
To tell you the truth I got a hard on just by looking at your drawing, even when I've seen other artworks that are a higher quality they dont make me feel like what your soulful coom art does to me.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2020 00:02:40 No.4951332 Report

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>>4950562
Maybe im retarded but it kind of looks like she is wearing a book

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2020 00:08:13 No.4951341 Report

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>>4950562
>refreance
ngmi

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2020 00:09:33 No.4951348 Report

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>>4951332
It is

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2020 00:10:35 No.4951349 Report

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>>4950562
post reference, im curious- did you just copied this or ref was human model.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2020 06:12:14 No.4951904 Report

Quoted By: >>4951945

Looks very nice anon! Keep up the great work!

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2020 06:56:00 No.4951945 Report

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>>4951092
I just want it to get criticized just all
>>4951171
>>4951259
It comes naturally when I draw
Also you can find your own style by copying and studying other artists you like
>>4951188
Thank you anon for defending me
>>4951332
>>4951348
Hhhhh
In reality I didn't want it to look like that
But if it's do and you like it and find it hilarious and kinda bizarre
That's nice , happy to make you laugh even with my mistakes but I'll try to fix this
>>4951349
>>4951341
I didn't copy exactly from a refreance
I just memorized and try to redraw it
I think here's the reference
>>4951904
Thank you anon

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2020 08:27:40 No.4952054 Report

Quoted By: >>4952742

>>4950562
Only thing i can see is that her eyes look dead. Maybe try crossing them a little? In my art, it adds vitality in my characters

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2020 08:41:15 No.4952064 Report

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>>4951092
>making these threads is kinda rude
it makes the board look like it has activity, lord forbid.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2020 17:42:57 No.4952742 Report

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>>4952054
That's always my problem
I love drawing eyes
But sometimes it gone wrong and end up looking dead

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2020 22:28:12 No.4953261 Report

Quoted By: >>4953424

>>4951945
>>4952064
>>4951188
OP samefagging now.
Post in /beg/ and stop making these threads, I was nice about it.
You're literally just a beginner, just look at those poor practice heads and bodies on the top left.

>>4951081
That's right, you're just another doodler, so post in the appropriate thread before making a new one; you should post in /beg/ is what I'm saying.
How many of these threads have you made in total? I doubt the red/white soccer girl was your first thread that you created.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2020 22:30:37 No.4953266 Report

Quoted By: >>4953424

Soul

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2020 23:44:36 No.4953424 Report

Quoted By: >>4954803

>>4953261
Ok anon listen
I was not the other two who say bad thing about you , I never done this before because I respect everybody even if they say bad things about me I know that they don't mean it and i hope that someday I'll meet them and draw with them and talk about art
Also I'm doing this kind if threads for two purposes
First I know I'm still learning and doing my best with the tight university schedule that i have and want to correct my mistakes by getting criticized from real people who knows drawing better than me
Second I want more people to post here
It's called /ic/ not /beg/ you're free to post in beg but what I see that many don't get any replies so it's like they didn't ever post it
Btw tomorrow morning I'll finish another of my work this time it's made on a canvas
So I hope I explained myself to you pal
And I'm happy to get criticized
>>4953266
Thx

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 23 Oct 2020 00:01:10 No.4953447 Report

Quoted By: >>4953941

>>4950562
I will be lying if I said you are not very early on, you really have to work and practice, but I think you re on the right track.
>shoulder
nice

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 23 Oct 2020 06:37:33 No.4953941 Report

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>>4953447
I know I have just to keep practicing
Thank you for the advice anon

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 23 Oct 2020 08:39:37 No.4954048 Report

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>>4950562
cute

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 23 Oct 2020 08:42:29 No.4954051 Report

Quoted By: >>4954165

if you sign your beg shit work and take a 2500+ pixel image with your pen in the frame i will brake your fingers next time thanks

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 23 Oct 2020 10:03:27 No.4954165 Report

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>>4954048
Thx you're the cute anon
>>4954051
Why so mad anon
I just took a picture
>>4950562
Btw here's my latest work
>>4954161
Please criticize it too

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 23 Oct 2020 11:24:39 No.4954243 Report

Quoted By: >>4954803

>>4950562
Why do you think this deserves its own thread?
There's /beg for a reason

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 23 Oct 2020 16:46:18 No.4954803 Report

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>>4954243
I already explained myself anon
>>4953424

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 23 Oct 2020 16:52:43 No.4954819 Report

Quoted By: >>4955221

>>4950562
her pupils are looking in different directions and are also different sizes. Is she on drugs?

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 23 Oct 2020 20:08:53 No.4955221 Report

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>>4954819
Hhhh No she is not
But sometimes I mess up the eyes
So I'm working on fixing this

GMI

GMI Fri 23 Oct 2020 21:17:59 No.4955363 Report

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>>4950562
Hey op- post more if you dont mind.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2020 00:55:35 No.4955780 Report

Quoted By: >>4955783

>>4955363
I will do
Trust me
I'm planning to make something that will make this board the best art board ever
Maybe I still not the best but I will try to courage others to post there work here more often

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2020 00:56:59 No.4955783 Report

Quoted By: >>4957131

>>4955780
I want to drink her breast milk, holy shit give me give me give me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2020 02:00:39 No.4955907 Report

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>>4951092
There's a reason people rather make threads instead of posting in those shitty threads like /beg/ and /asg/. People just respond with one liners or not at all.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2020 06:22:08 No.4956264 Report

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>>4955907
Finally someone who get the point
I already explained this
But big thx anon

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2020 17:50:11 No.4957127 Report

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>>4951070
I hate how my current doodling stuff is still middle school tier. Hoping to improve my sketching skills by 2 years time.

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2020 17:53:36 No.4957131 Report

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2020 19:24:52 No.4957273 Report

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>>4950562
You wanted something, well here you go. Entire thread over 1 random doodle clearly begs for a redline and mine will do. Aside from everything mentioned in it, here's a few things:
1. Resize your images
2. Actually study basics if you have any intention of getting there. This stuff is just random doodles with no backbone. (Start with perspective, Vilppu, Proko youtube course)
3. Stop circlejerking shit and go to proper threads. Or even better, drop this board and actually study, this helped me a while back. This place sucks for art growth, aside from DAD or resource threads.
And no, I'm not being mean. I needed someone to tell me all that when I was doing same shit, instead I spent 7+ years figuring it out before actually taking art seriously. Gl, anon, remember to have fun and work your ass off.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2020 22:29:46 No.4957579 Report

Quoted By: >>4958328

>>4957273
Thank you a lot
I'll never forget your advices (you're really kind btw)
P.s I'm doing vilppu in my new sketchbook I'll start with his drawing courses than his anatomy alongside with some books like force and hampton (I hope it helps me ) and I will watch many videos about perspectives from someone called Marshall I guess
Then I will turn to the more stylized ones by copying artbooks and studying Japanese books
<3

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2020 22:52:24 No.4957622 Report

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>>4951092

I'm gonna post my own threads now because you're such a smarmy cunt. And it'll stay up forever because this is the slowest board on all the chans.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2020 07:10:33 No.4958328 Report

Quoted By: >>4958415

>>4957579
Some additional advice, since I was busy with work yesterday. Your best choices for perspective are either Framed Perspective, Perspective made easy or Marhsall Vandruff's old video course (I think you can find all these in resource threads). Learn basic forms and everything up to 3-point perspective, that's all that beginner needs. Force is a great book for gesture, just don't follow this author's advice on anatomy itself, he's really not good at it. Hampton is great, but make sure to get some proper anatomy atlas, like Anatomy for Sculptors, this is the actual shit you will learn anatomy from. Drapery basically can only be learned through actual observation and studies (aside from learning 7 basic ways folds are made, just watch moderndayjames's video on it) . Try to first grasp realism base and only then shift into stylization.
And I can't recommend enough getting digital tablet, this will simplify a lot, even if you get very cheap one. Hell, I started out on decade-ish old wacom, that was so small, I could cover it with my palm almost completely.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2020 08:29:20 No.4958415 Report

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>>4958328
Thx again
I have a digital tablet but I don't use it that much
And the books you recommend for me I have them all
But my biggest problem still that I don't have much free time to practice
I used to practice every day for at least 4 hours but now with university I barely find 1 solid hour but don't worry anon I'll figure it out

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