>>4898762nice lines, the raised hand is really well done. I would finish up those feet, though, the ankles look kinda formless
>>4898785the pose is actually working pretty well here, I think the straight up and down on the left side of the torso kills the gesture a bit.
>>4899580very loose, flows really well. I think the midsection around the hips could use more definition, the figure sort of gets lost around there. a few choice hard, heavy lines like you used to for the legs would do wonders
>>4899737it's really close to working! I'd focus less on the face and more on making sure all the limbs connect well. the elbow and wrist on the extended arm and the ankles just need a little bit more love
>>4899819nice, very illustrative. the facial features are a bit wonky, but I like the expression anyway. I think the details and the tone work pretty well, some more cross contour lines to define how the forms overlap would be nice. the extended arm especially, the tone helps it feel 3D, but then the outline flattens it somewhat.
