>>4452739Inclined to agree with this guy
>>4452870I can tell you used a reference for the shading, which is really good. Fantastic shading. But the pants and breasts are sort of a dead giveaway that you've got some work to do. You have a super great start though. Confidence with lines is hard, ik. I still fucking suck with chicken scratching, desu, but it gets much better with practice. Keep up the good work