>>3989365"I get it but, "
"It'd make more sense if"
"In my opinion, it'd look better if"
"have you done some X studies recently? you might be a bit rusty"
"you should get refs for that, it'll really take it up a notch"
"play around some more. never go for your first draft, as they say"
"maybe try this?"
"Oi cunt, you're shit."
if all else fails, disown them. chuuni crabs are not worth your time
