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What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/
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Character design is my favorite aspect of art
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>>3889634 You don't even know. After focusing on 3d/other hobbies and not touching 2d for about a decade, coming in with new hardware and software I'm basically relearning everything. I'm absolute shit again and it hurts, in a good way.
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I did this yesterday while listening to my teacher's class
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>>3890489 Reminds me of Killer Klowns From Outer Space. Nice.
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>>3890498 like that hair, looks awesome
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Can’t really decide on a broom position
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>>3890538 i really like this
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>>3890538 post blog or lose your life
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Here's a cat thief character I've been workshopping in my head. Colors not final, though I'll keep the blue fur/yellow eyes. Thoughts?
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>>3890565 >>3890588 >>3890593 sorry i dont have one anymore. any opinion on which broom position or pose i should go with?
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>>3890595 Not them but I prefer pose 2. It is a bit more vanilla though.
That which actually reminds me of the OP on a current /tg/ thread. Funny that.
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>>3890595 the one covering the penis the most
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>>3890678 I really like it, but the right arm with the sleeve rolled back looks off
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>>3890686 yeah you're right, i see it; thank you very much!
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>>3890678 Oooh I like this!
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>>3890539 >>3890538 Wouldn't it hurt to have his dick flapping around
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>>3890539 could you make a penis-less version so i can pretend its a normal girl
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>>3890832 its gone bud, buts heres a collection of his stuff I've gathered from archives
https://mega.nz/#F!TyoyjSgY!757Hva-dhwy91NUxSxoJSg Anonymous
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>>3890540 This is so detailed, the perspective is a bit off, but still I’m impressed by the amount of time it probably took you to make this
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>>3890855 Youre literally already beyond GMI tier, you're either already a pro who only draws nsfw in private or some retard who just infinitely grinds without ever releasing anything. Make a new fucking blog if its the ladder.
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>>3890908 Anon ! Well done :) The pose looks slightly tense but I can tell the effort that went into this, I’m proud
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>>3891100 it looks like you traced a 3d model and no it's not a compliment
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Started to draw anime today, tell me if and why it looks like an absolute shit.
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i have exams so i did this in between studying
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>>3891142 Im not the guy who posted
It's just that I reserve my "jesus" and "holy shit" for works of the like of anime sword girl with mp3
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>>3891160 Holly shit that’s cool. Great sense of depth
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>>3891142 I know it's garbage. Just how I'm used to seeing things after so long in blender, time for dynamic sketches and landscapes to break free from that shit.
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Any ideas on how I can improve this? (the design, not the drawing)
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>>3890474 I really like how you do the eyes. ...On the other hand, it looks like bamm bamm.
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>>3891265 The mouth area is hard to read (also unsure if that tongue being misplaced is intentional or not? Can't tell if his mouth is open or he's making a :3 face)
quick suggestion
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>>3891284 Thanks! hope this is a little better
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>>3891312 The mouth seperation makes it much clearer, and the cat mouth shape works nicely with the eyes. Nice job!
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>>3891312 One thing I can maybe nitpick is to push the silhouette more by seperating the arms from the wings, maybe lower the wings and push the hands up a little.
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>>3891327 Sure, I'll have a go. I'll leave it a bit though before I post, don't want to spam. Thanks again
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>>3890482 >>3890484 >>3891100 >>3891208 >tfw I didn't think anything was wrong with it When I finally get out of /beg/ will I lose appreciation for a lot of other peoples works like you guys have?
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>>3891263 Move your hands faster, senpai
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I haven't posted here in a while, what happened to the porn threads?
>>3891527 cool
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>>3891746 God fucking damnit, he's back.
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Someone please make a porn thread to contain this autist
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After all the BS on the porn threads, all the trolling, the hate threads, and stalking against any artists of note across the board, you deserve this. Now lay in the bed you shat in.
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>>3891746 Oh fuck I was hoping that you've quit drawing.
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>>3891797 Meteorchan a cute. A CUTE.
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>>3891798 >>3891826 >>3892003 >>3891777 lol get fucked, i aint never leaving
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>>3891162 Wait do you have anime sword girl saved ? I really wanna see it again
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>>3892041 Epic comeback moment
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>>3890561 It varies but I used CSP's oil paint flat brush and the real pencil at default settings for the one you quoted.
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>>3892041 I would like to see Fir getting gangbanged by cultists
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>>3890464 Is this place also considered as /beg/ alternative? Just curious
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>>3890678 hey you're that yume nikki guy, it's been a while
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>>3892256 youre a dumb faggot
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>>3892209 h-hi, I got into videogames too much
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>>3891263 Speed comes with time.
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Cerise Maddow, pt. I [Linework] -> ???
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>>3892173 Excellent lighting and expression. I look forward to your posts.
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>>3892394 This is from two years ago
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Can anyone reccomend me some good Krita brushes?
I would like a soft, light, smooth brush for sketching and a good thick ink brush for linework.
Most of the built in ones I've tried have really odd sensitivity issues and go from a near nonexistant line into a thick fuckin slab in no time. Any idea how to change this?
>>3892395 >>3892394 Nice progress my man. The style is still similiar but the newer one is a clear improvement in proportions and line confidence. Any idea how long they took in comparison?
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>>3890678 anon i thought you died..
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>>3892416 Appreciate it bud, I think I started to improve because I decided to dedicate more time to even sketches. The one from two years ago probably took five minutes, and the recent one took 10.
>>3892432 Thanks !
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I’m in desperate need of handgun references because what is this shit. Also this is a redraw of a character that I think I made back when I loved Roberta from Black Lagoon, I don’t understand why I didn’t just draw her instead
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how do I make hair look sexier?
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>>3892502 Looks pretty normal to me. Maybe find some references of hair you think is sexy, and do that?
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>>3892502 the hair is the only part i dont like, it looks wet and slimy to me.
Otherwise it's pretty cute despite every character having dick sucking lips.
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>>3892950 Did you create new twitter blog?
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>>3893011 h-hello
>>3893033 I still have the sfw on I made the other month:
http://twitter.com/wholesomeorenji lewd stuff can be found here:
https://pawoo.net/@orenjipiiru I might take a break from lewd stuff for a bit, I don't know
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>>3893049 WAIT DID U DELETE UR OTHER TWITTER??
Its okay i have all the lewds saved :)
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>>3893082 it got suspended, I'm assuming it won't get appealed but I'm going to wait until I hear back before making a new one
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>>3893097 Oh no! Sorry about size
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>>3893091 Oh, sorry to hear that, then. I always look forward to your stuff
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>>3892502 use white for the highlights more sparingly, maintain harder edges on the hair
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>>3892917 >>3892689 got any ref sheets for your characters? I wanna draw fanart
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>>3893368 Left butt looks extremely off compared to the right.
>>3893301 This one looks good I can not say anything much about it.
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>>3893424 Needs more Loomis.
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>>3893368 be more carefull and gather reference for her feet,
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>>3893097 kek
What is the liquid that comes out of the mouth?
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>>3893459 the colours are appealing, but you need to exercise a lot more on the anatomy, anon.
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How do I rock this pseudo chicken scratch style. Very nice brush here on the linework.
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>>3893565 I am going to take a guess and believe it has a certain brush type and there is a lot of play with the opacity. If it's Photoshop it's possible they might be using flow(the more you brush the more "ink" is shown)
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>>3892443 It has been awhile, who ever you are...
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>>3890678 does she have thumbs
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>>3890678 What do you do for that line quality?
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>>3891160 wtf I love cross hatching now
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The thing that convinced me to get into drawing was the art from Samurai Champloo. Does it show?
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>>3892256 my favorite thing in this thread so far.
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>>3893729 didn't think they should be showing at the angle the hands are, but maybe I'm wrong, desu i didn't check if its accurate
>>3893731 any hard pencil with pressure size will give you that result, my process is usually a sketch layer then draw it again more cleanly a new one with more details and correcting mistakes
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>>3892950 Good night sweet prince...
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>>3893938 >>3893937 depressing
You hate drawing, that much is clear. You are a masochist.
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>>3893958 why do you say that? I love making art
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>>3893341 i have several pictures of my characters full bodies, but i dunno if i ever made a full reference sheet
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>>3893993 If you feel the need to number the dialogue, you might want to reorganize their placement.
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>>3894077 naw, it's there as notes, this is gonna be a 2 image set, so you can see the cock swelling labeled 1 and the cum inflation labeled 2, same thing i have in
>>3892917 Anonymous
Ruisu
Some anons said to me that here was my place. I just started posting here. Other threads had some dickheads who didn't wanted to politely criticize, just talk shit. Anyway, here's my firekeeper.
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>>3891669 Somehow your work is unappealing. At least for me. Even though you have the fundies there. One thing I noticed is that the ear is too high on the head and is too visible, giving her an ape like look. Like a brainlet.
Have you considered stylizing the face differently? Maybe embracing animu or going full Loomis, because something seems off.
I'm saying this because I have the same problem and I've been trying to fix my shit by trying other styles and proportions.
I actually made a few tweaks for myself in this particular drawing and now I think is more fappable.
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muh ashina
>>3893723 i'm the guy
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>>3894235 welcome, you need to work on your hands, the folds on the clothes don't really follow the form, also the posture is kinda awkward. keep going anon, looks cute
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>>3894262 How do you draw so clean anon?
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I don't know why it's so much fun to draw distorted perspectives. I mean, I know this didn't turn out that well but yeah. (fun nevertheless)
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>>3894485 Thanks anon, I still have a lot to learn. Glad you liked it.
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I feel like the anatomy is extremely off. I would enjoy some crit, and a redline would be a godsend.
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>>3894661 Contrary to the /ic/ mentality, drawing is allowed to be fun. I like it but I think you can push the perspective even more
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>>3894661 Very nice, got a blog?
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>>3894681 god tell me this isn't a woman
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>>3894241 May I see the tweaks?
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>>3894853 Not that anon but I did them for you. I don't have PS installed and am using sai so you're gonna have to make due with a redline.
Your ear is too high, your entire face is skewed forward as well. It adds a derpy look. A few of your pictures in this thread have this issue. Focus more on the distances between features rather than the features themselves. Artists (specifically line artists) who hyper focus on making every little part look 'right' tend to miss things like this.
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>>3894900 >>3894853 P.S, this is easily avoidable by leaving hair until after the face and head look right. If it looks right bald it'll look right when you draw hair over it. It's easy to miss because the hair hides the janky part. But those with a keen eye will still catch it, and those without will feel that something is vaguely off but wont be able to put their finger on it.
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>>3894853 Here.
Basically I lowered the ear (that wasn't supposed to be visible anyway), made her look younger and more animeish by drawing the eyes below the mid part of the head, and I also made her look at the viewer because muh dick.
I know it's rude to mess with other people's work, specially when talking about styles, so sorry for that. But consider changing the way you draw faces if more people tell you the same. You're doing great anyway.
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>>3895017 arent the eyes too far apart
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I'm currently being destroyed by an artist friend for making eyes. I just want to draw eyes that aren't complete blocks
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>>3895017 I already like these more. Nice job desu.
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>>3895049 Trying to apply perspective to the face just so I can make my eyes less flat. I need some feedback for this one. I've been stuck for 3 days just to make it look alright
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>>3895075 mein gott...........
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>>3895089 Pls tell me there's something I need to do. I'm getting lost
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>>3895095 Not him, but loomis.
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>>3895110 Which book? Fun with a pencil?
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>>3895112 Not him but I think it's too soon for you to think about Loomis. Maybe Keys To Drawing would be a better idea.
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>>3895115 Now I'm confused which one to take
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>>3895118 Just drop anime bro. You can resume it when you get better.
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>>3895118 Don't listen to that faggot. Start with fun with a pencil to get you introduced to the basic forms. He is literally shilling you a book that upsells you crap you won't even use ever besides in that book.
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>>3895129 What? Like shape design, edge control, drawing from observation, etc?
Are you retarded?
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First round of corrections.
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>>3895128 And to do that, where should I begin on?
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>>3895075 you need to think in 3D, not sure if loomis takes on this but isn't really hard to get the idea
rn your problem is that you barely grasp the eye basic proportions and you already jumping into perspective and emotions and thats far from your knowledge atm.
tldr boomis
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>>3895149 >>3895150 The only three things you need to get you started are: Fun with a pencil, Figure drawing: Design and invention, and a functioning brain. Anonymous
>>3895150 >>3895165 Thanks a lot, it's becoming clear now. One more question: do I only go to certain parts of the book to get the idea of it or I have to read everything?
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>>3895193 Dude, if we wanted you to get idea we wouldn't recommend books, also you aren't a kid anymore(i hope), just a little bit of reading doesn't do any harm unless you are too busy with work.
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>>3895204 I do am a busy dude with a lot of work
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my brain hurts from trying to bend the 2d figure
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>>3895225 Your linework always looks so pleasing
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>>3894821 Why? Does it looks like a transsexual?
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>>3894260 you gotta construct
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>>3895075 small thing: the perspective of the eyes will never converge that much unless you're shooting super super close to the face with a short lens.
But in that case, we also would see the distortion on the rest of the head and not just the eyes, which we don't see in your drawing.
Most of the time the convergence of the eyes will be invisible to the point of practically looking parallel.
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>>3895354 Same anon you quoted, I'm finding a hard time digesting what you said. Care to explain in a more layman's term?
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>>3895225 Cool anon, the creature around her neck reminds me of the balloon heads in that Ito story that fly around and strangle the person they look like. Actually YN has such a wealth of bizarre imagery to draw from, that fanmade sequel 2kki too. I should replay them for a bit and then draw
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Cellshade Stage Progress
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>>3895233 t-thank u
>>3895395 You are totally anon, in fact I essentially just re draw scenes from the game. And about the content, nikki weighs 41MB, 2kki is about 600MB, so figure how much stuff that one has
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>>3895572 I think this one is by far the best of the three, first one is too hard to read and messy, second one looks flat and has a weird pose. You can actually see the forms of the doggy on this one and the tongue sticking out and overlapping gives it a feeling of depth.
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>>3895584 Hue, my background is in cartooning, expressions mostly, and I'm just getting into semi-realism these days. The second he is sidestepping over his left foot, sneaking towards an objective. The first, I think I have to put a sky gradient so the fire stands out more, or intensify the reds in the fire, as well as define the edges of the muzzleflash more (since you can't see his handgun at all rn). Thanks for the crits, I appreciate it.
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What happened to porn containment threads?
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>>3895366 the perspective line thingy on the eyes should be almost parallel almost all the time.
huge generalization, but hey, you asked for it.
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>>3895963 Neat, now I see what you mean now. But what about the other ones?
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>>3895721 thats right bitch.
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Here's a recent drawing I took unreasonably long on and didn't even end up finishing (let alone coloring). I'd have to finish the rest in PS. [spoiler:lit] I need a new sketchbook, if you can't tell this is caked in smudges... [/spoiler:lit]
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>>3896219 She kind of looks like a penis
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>>3896219 are you the guy who drew the E.T girl? this looks abhorrent
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>>3896231 Her boobs are the nuts, her head and neck are the shaft, her hair is the head
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>>3896235 Literally says first anime girl, what’s wrong with it tho?
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>>3896237 Kind of a stretch but ok, she’s phalic
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Heyo, liquefied it a bit, tell me what’s wrong with it. Redlines appreciated
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>>3896219 I made some edits, redlines apreciated
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>>3896301 >redline >redrew the whole thing kek
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>>3896301 Holy shit thank you so much, she looks great!
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>>3896394 Don’t be mean to him
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These aren't for anything, just doodles to take a break from work.
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>>3896399 CUTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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>>3895225 Can't wait to see this colored.
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>>3895225 some cleaning would do you good, remove those dots
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>>3896399 she is for cuddle
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>>3891160 I love the colors you chose especially the random but somehow very fitting hot pink. Mad cool.
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>>3896533 a-anon you do know that color is literally the obvious pick to compliment the green, right?
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>>3896790 glad ya do, she's quite lovable
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do the colors look alright? i dunno if i've just been staring at it for too long or the colors are genuinely fucked
>>3895694 nice
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>>3896866 Eh it's okay, the eyes part is a little too hard for me.
I would desaturate it and change the white part to a color that goes with the eyes color it instead of using pure white if i were you, just my opinion
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i know pose is weird af because i just extruded limbs from a trunk instead of doing any sort of gesture, but i was really focusing on foreshortening & perspective. i'm gonna keep practicing but does anyone have any tips or exercises for figures in perspective?
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>>3896772 nice one faggo.. uh, i mean fisher!
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>>3893937 do some line drawings with that pencil - Charcoal or the Noire?
>>3896179 Love the details in the back
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>>3896719 >>3896807 Glad to see you making so much progress, keep it up anon
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Drew this mostly as a test to tweak a brush pen-like brush I made on Painter. Added some glitch effects to it because why not?
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>>3895225 aren't the legs too long?
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>>3896920 Thanks! I wish I could've gotten more in depth but fine detailing doesn't work on my sketchbook.
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I'm trying not to use filters, but everything looks so bad
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>>3897675 it must be suffering to be at your level, anon. keep going though, you'll get there... i think
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>>3892502 can u draw something like this but with european faces/women not being racist im just curious to see what it would look lik
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>>3897685 was her boobs and torso intentionally draw to seem as a second face
looks like squidward
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>>3897698 Thanks it’s supposed to be squidward
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>>3897698 “Hey buddy how’s it going”
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>>3892502 It looks like you’re trying to highlight each individual strand and doing it with pure white on top of that, which gives it that slimy look like
>>3892517 mentioned. Notice how in pic related this chick’s hair has blocks of lighter values where the light hits it? Figure out where your light source is and do your highlights in blocks/shapes. Also instead of white, take your base hair color and shift it brighter so your highlights aren’t too bright. Try studying pics of real hair with this in mind to make your drawings more convincing, it’ll get you closer to that sexier hair you want.
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>>3897793 her torso looks like a separate body than her lower half.
This one the shoulders and head look like they're sliding away from her body. Overall I think you should zoom out more when drawing. individual details look fine but zoomed out the bodies look uncomfortably skewed.
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>>3897796 meant to link this post for the shoulders comment
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>>3897797 really cute monkey girl
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It's supposed to be android 18
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>cant into anatomy >cant into perspective just fuck my wife senpai
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>>3897937 i am nod a good artist but i try to help u fren!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! does it look better? is she supposed 2 be floatign
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>>3897957 thanks, perspective is more clear.
as for if shes floating or not, i don't really know. i guess another problem i have is i don't plan ahead so i just put every part of the body in a random position and call it a pose. sucks cause i have all these cool poses in mind for male characters, but when i draw women my mind always goes blank and i unconsciously end up drawing more or less the same pose in the same perspective over and over
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>>3898004 >i don't plan ahead so i just put every part of the body in a random position and call it a pose i do this too! let's try to not do that from now on!
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>>3893082 Mega that shit senpai
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>>3897898 You picked a more difficult perspective which makes for good practice, also nice job having the hands doing stuff.
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>>3890538 The way you’ve drawn the cloak kinda hides the contour of their body, makes it look like their torso is missing. I was gonna do a redline but I think the anatomy is mostly ok.
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>>3899243 You gave her 4 boobs
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>>3899245 >iq high enough to understand tits>ass >iq too low to understand how to draw tits aaaaaaaaaaaa
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>>3899198 Nice.
>>3898750 Thanks, I’ll keep that in mind if I go back to that picture
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Someone make a new thread
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Can't tell if this is too muted
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>>3899717 Or if this is too saturated. I draw on a laptop, but for finishing up things I move it over to the pc.(can't tell which monitor is more accurate)
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Could anyone spare me a critique or even a red line? Putting characters in environments (and drawing environments in general) is absolutely my weakest point. I want to get the perspective and everything else as best as I can before moving on.
Here's a link to the psd if it's easier:
https://www.mediafire.com/file/yv7uov4cyaiveg9/help.psd/file Anonymous