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Anonymous Mon 11 Feb 21:08:10 2019 No.3808828 View Reply Original Report

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What do you think of my art?

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 11 Feb 2019 21:08:51 No.3808829 Report

Quoted By: >>3808917

I want to become a really well known pinup ecchi artist

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 11 Feb 2019 21:11:43 No.3808830 Report

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/aco/ is over there

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 11 Feb 2019 21:33:42 No.3808831 Report

Quoted By: >>3808918 >>3811006 >>3812364

stiff, lifeless, flat, unispired, doll-like, erotic yet unnappealing. Nice pillow shading. bad construction, weak/lacking perspective, that shoe is horrendous, looks like an after thought.

overall weak fundamentally, looks like you jumped the gun and started rendering before you had your fundamentals down properly.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 11 Feb 2019 22:05:36 No.3808832 Report

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2/10 wouldn't commission for $10

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 11 Feb 2019 22:16:06 No.3808833 Report

Quoted By: >>3808917

>>3808828
>>/ic
That said... It looks good but there is a huge room for improvement.

Sketching,proportions, perspective - all are lacking. I wont nag for shoe; but what happened with her right arm ?
Coloring is really nice and i can't give you any useful critique on it
Also shirt and panties are done great; folds are perfect (thought there might be too many), shirt collar is bit weird and there should be some shade between it and her skin if that is folding in that V shape

Whole image looks like a clusterfuck of average and good.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 11 Feb 2019 23:04:41 No.3808834 Report

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Bit bummed but oh well, I appreciate the honesty anons. I definitely agree I've got much to work on still.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 11 Feb 2019 23:32:51 No.3808835 Report

Quoted By: >>3808836

You fault for coming to /e/ with that, should've gone to /aco/ they eat up that crap and pay for it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 11 Feb 2019 23:40:04 No.3808836 Report

Quoted By: >>3808837 >>3808840 >>3808841 >>3809209

>>3808835

what's the difference ? I thought it was pretty much a matter of perspective what's 'western' and what isn't

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 11 Feb 2019 23:42:20 No.3808837 Report

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>>3808836
and that's why you fail

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 12 Feb 2019 00:33:59 No.3808838 Report

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Inconsistent lighting direction

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 12 Feb 2019 00:58:07 No.3808839 Report

Quoted By: >>3808920

It looks like you focus more on color then proper proportions. Stop coloring until you get the basics. Example the legs are way too big, the foot is awkward, the pose is unnatural, you're hiding the feet and hands (probably because you aren't comfortable drawing them) The clothes look like crumpled up tin foil, the hips don't make sense, etc. Also don't post on an anonymous internet board if you don't want your feelings hurt

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 12 Feb 2019 06:18:02 No.3808840 Report

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>>3808836
that’s actually why you fail. /e/ doesn’t see merit in western shit

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 12 Feb 2019 07:35:30 No.3808841 Report

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>>3808836
Come on, it's obvious to tell at a glance which is which. Can you really not see the difference even? I can hardly believe that.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 13 Feb 2019 13:22:31 No.3808849 Report

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>>3808828
It lacks that subtlety and beauty an erotic drawing has. This looks very stumpy, it’s especially noticeable in how rough the shading on the thighs look, the dirty shading, and the lack of balance in weight (very delicate hair, very stumpy pillows)

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 13 Feb 2019 13:26:24 No.3808852 Report

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>>3808828
Bretty good anon, would fap!

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 13 Feb 2019 14:45:32 No.3808907 Report

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>>3808828
There's obviously some competence in here but there's also a lot to work on. The light source is incredibly wishy washy. I'm not gonna lie this isn't beg but it's really lacking in places in a very amature way. the hands the face the hair the crotch especially, not even things that could be overlooked, things that really hurt the image. all I can really say is fundamentals, . a lot of things are pillow shaded or flat where they shouldn't be.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 13 Feb 2019 14:59:04 No.3808917 Report

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>>3808833
Disagree. I think the coloring and the face are lovely, but if he worked on clothing/folding cloth studies, he would make a lot of progress very quickly.
>>3808828
>>3808829

You have the potential to do it, anon.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 13 Feb 2019 15:02:22 No.3808918 Report

Quoted By: >>3810441

>>3808831
lmao look at this bitter incel

>>3808828
looks great OP, better than 99.9% of /ic/

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 13 Feb 2019 15:04:46 No.3808920 Report

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>>3808839
>Example the legs are way too big,

Lmao you fucking stupid faggot. Its anime. Of course the proportions will be different.

What next? The eyes are too big?

fucking imbecile

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 13 Feb 2019 15:09:21 No.3808924 Report

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>>3808828
Also, try the dodge tool in a pink or red, anon. Makes skin have a transluscent, china-doll like glow wherever light hits. Can be easy to overdo, but makes a tremendous difference in appeal. Color dodge layer combined with it for stronger effect. Color burn tool and/or color burn layer is good for shadows on skin, either in the color you're already using for skin (it darkens it), or in a totally different harmonious color. Another good trick is warm light color, cool shadow color, or cool light color, warm shadow color.

Proko has good videos on youtube for things like hands and feet, if you want more confidence there.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 13 Feb 2019 20:08:13 No.3809188 Report

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>>3808828
Love the legs. You could make it if you try harder.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 13 Feb 2019 20:22:15 No.3809209 Report

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>>3808836
asian sense of aesthetic is incredibly different from western one and it shows in the smallest of details. If you cant understand it yet you simply need to analyze more

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 14 Feb 2019 17:04:39 No.3810228 Report

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>>3808828
her legs are fucking huge

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 14 Feb 2019 17:57:21 No.3810257 Report

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>>3808828
Autistic keyboard jockey? She's just thinking about fingering and glazing her orifice. That's not a sport.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 14 Feb 2019 19:52:41 No.3810332 Report

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you give good advice thank you!

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 14 Feb 2019 21:48:00 No.3810441 Report

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>>3808918
that was a valid and accurate critique.

If OP wants pats on his back he can always go show mommy his artwork, maybe she'll hang it on the fridge too!

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 14 Feb 2019 22:53:45 No.3810490 Report

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People in this thread are mad jelly. Easily better than 85% of /ic/ keep it up anon.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 15 Feb 2019 00:18:38 No.3810563 Report

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fish eyes

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 15 Feb 2019 00:55:43 No.3810594 Report

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>>3808828
Not great, but you'll probably be really good in a couple of years.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 15 Feb 2019 00:56:10 No.3810595 Report

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>>3808828
It looks like shit.

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Anonymous Fri 15 Feb 2019 06:42:45 No.3810971 Report

Quoted By: >>3810985

>>3808828
Good stuff OP it makes me want to kill myself in a good way for you BECAUSE I’LL NEVER GET THIS FAR

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Anonymous Fri 15 Feb 2019 06:57:35 No.3810985 Report

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thank you for advice guys

this image is finishing nicely

>>3810971
you can do it! i'm not very good

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 15 Feb 2019 07:28:27 No.3811006 Report

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>>3808831
>Nice pillow shading
most of your critique was correct up until this. sure there is a bit of pillow shading in there, but there is a lot more structured shading, in the knees the hair, the shirt/panties, etc... im not saying its great shading, but its fairly competent.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 15 Feb 2019 07:32:10 No.3811008 Report

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>>3810985
this is a million times better than what you posted in the op image. should have posted this.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 15 Feb 2019 07:32:59 No.3811009 Report

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>>3810985
this one looks way better, but MORE HIGHLIGHTS, she's fading into the background. But yeah holy shit you were hiding your true power from us.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 15 Feb 2019 07:34:27 No.3811011 Report

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>>3810985
Ya I like this more than OP image, would be more selective on the sweat beads on the shoulders/back since it looks a bit busy but looks good overall

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Anonymous Fri 15 Feb 2019 21:26:11 No.3811631 Report

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>>3810985
Haha, OP, it keeps getting better for you and me.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 16 Feb 2019 12:16:53 No.3812364 Report

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>>3808831
post you're work's

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 17 Feb 2019 00:16:26 No.3813063 Report

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>>3810985
This is much better, except for the pantsu crushing her hips.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 17 Feb 2019 05:27:06 No.3813413 Report

Quoted By: >>3813442

this isn't art

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 17 Feb 2019 05:50:53 No.3813442 Report

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>>3813413
you're not art

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 17 Feb 2019 06:37:36 No.3813497 Report

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>>3810985
I really love how you color and render your images

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 17 Feb 2019 16:26:55 No.3813891 Report

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>>3810985
damn, this is good
only thing I'll suggest is to make the eye more prominent and to add more contrast in the hair

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 18 Feb 2019 01:15:37 No.3814448 Report

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I really dig it op, I think you could be great one day

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 18 Feb 2019 01:32:34 No.3814478 Report

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Can we get a board for dabblers/tabletfags?

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 18 Feb 2019 01:43:49 No.3814496 Report

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>>3808828
What the fuck is up with her face jesus christ

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 18 Feb 2019 01:55:03 No.3814519 Report

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>>3808828
work on your shoes and clothing

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 18 Feb 2019 02:12:23 No.3814551 Report

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>>3808828
Improve the purple parts
The head looks simple
Smaller (don`t exaggerate anon) and technical hands
Transition between legs and clothes
You are almost there anon, don`t give up

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