>>3594050His eye on the right is in an awkward position, and you fucked it up by shading it too much with black
It looks kinda weird
And his hand misplaced, too
Pose like him and see how weird the hand is, you'd be with you arm close to your chest and only your hand stretching out holding a blade upwards, like what the actual fuck
But it's a nice drawing, I like the scribbling and all
>>3594056I like this one's idea, but the thing coming out from the bottom right is just shit
The humanoid feature on the land feels like it doesn't belong, it could be more interesting without this "face"
Things can be pretty coll and look alive and sentient without being humanoid, you could work on that, 'cause it's a nice drawing with an actual good idea
The contrasts are good, maybe just a little too black on the left side
And I dig how playful those dimensionless spheres are
The land and tree have all these shadows and textures, and the spheres are simply flat, I like how it works together
>>3594057I love the masked guy, like a blind sentinel or something, guided by something else, with eyes on top of his helmet, and how he embraces the person below
Hands are good, maybe too big in comparison to the person's head but I don't think everything has to be realistic and descriptive
>inb4 muh proportions and LoomisYeah, proportions are good, but fuck off, we can play around, conveying different things other than objectively portraying reality
Fuck that shit
>>3594058This one is your best, in my opinion
The idea is nice, the composition works well
The moon (I guess) is fucked up, though
Doesn't look good, it's like a ball of cotton with some compressed chantilly around it
The clouds could be better if you gave them enough space between lines
But I like this drawing and the whole idea and the technique reminds me of Shintaro Kago
This board is full of retards who will only appreciate objective and realistic drawings, but I'd recommend you to keep drawing and doing it your way
