>>98587962>animated operait's certainly an interesting concept but gonna be a hard fucking sell
so is the protagonist supposed to be the new hummingbird of the west god?
the concept of these gods is also kind of nebulous. Are they actual gods, just super high level cyborgs, or what? How many are there?
What's this character and whi was he before the series? What is this world like?
>for whatever reasondeath of a good plot in a few words. Get something concrete down
>>98587766there's uh, a lot of things here. I'm not so sure secret war between the amish and other churches will fly, for starters
Sounds like something that would work best as a short web series, since I don't know how far you can get before this becomes repetitive
>>98587519bitchmoaning is bitchmoaning, nothing to say here
>>98587407Last few years haven't made this place kind to downer reversals of traditional heroism.
What is this guy's power? Aside from some sense of pity, what's in this guy's personality that compels us to watch this sad state of affairs for however many episodes? Even moreso when the show is moralizing about violence, which is another common turnoff?
>>98587265You'll need a really good character and REALLY good writing to have people stick around for a whole episode of nonsense antics
The animated bit at the end sounds kind of interesting but then there's the risk of those becoming more interesting than the regular part of the episode which may then beg the question of why the show doesn't just stick to these sections and cut out 3/4ths of the rest
Lore generally needs payoff, and the payoff usually requires that the character(s) are actively caught up in it, but not fully understanding of it
What I mean to say is a big reveal that you craftily hid hints of in the past doesn't have a lot of impact if it just turns out that the crazy sounding things the crazy guy said turn out to be true. Not sure I'm explaining my feels here right
