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hyw Sat 04 Nov 08:45:13 2017 No.96506725 View Reply Original Report

Quoted By: >>96506969 >>96507802 >>96508983 >>96511558 >>96513638 >>96518189 >>96531873

did the shitposters win?

are we not doing these anymore? post comics

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 09:18:31 No.96506969 Report

Quoted By: >>96519232

>>96506725
Nah.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 10:25:16 No.96507454 Report

Quoted By: >>96508950

>Not using the regular OP image

You've doomed this thread from the start

hyw

hyw Sat 04 Nov 2017 10:31:25 No.96507487 Report

Quoted By: >>96507802 >>96508999

just let it die, this place has turned into a cesspool of trannies and pedos

gloryhol anon

gloryhol anon Sat 04 Nov 2017 11:17:52 No.96507802 Report

Quoted By: >>96508983 >>96508999 >>96525580

>>96506725
>>96507487
Samefag.

The discord's better right now, but yeah, shitposting killed the threads. They were unsuferrable those last two months. It's sad, but it's the truth.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 13:27:53 No.96508950 Report

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>>96507454
i actually like this op image better

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 13:30:36 No.96508983 Report

Quoted By: >>96509110

>>96506725
>>96507802
what happened?

hyw

hyw Sat 04 Nov 2017 13:32:22 No.96508999 Report

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>>96507487
>>96507802
LMAO that isnt me btw, let it die shitposter is really creative

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 13:43:01 No.96509110 Report

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>>96508983
Three, maybe four shitposters with questionable tastes. One has an /ss/ comic and every page derailed the thread due to slapfights about pedophilia. Also the shitposters would refuse any kind of constructive criticism and shit up the threads replying to everyone like "nah nah nah boo boo fuck you I do what I want"

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 16:26:49 No.96511558 Report

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>>96506725
it helps if 'webcomic' is able to be ctrl-f'd

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

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ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 16:29:13 No.96511592 Report

Quoted By: >>96511637 >>96513503 >>96516266 >>96516350 >>96542798

anyway whatever chance the thread has to hang around, I will post comic finished last night
so much continuity. some nice new outfits. some dumb ones. oh lawd.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 16:30:16 No.96511609 Report

Quoted By: >>96511767

also I believe this is #419

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 16:31:37 No.96511637 Report

Quoted By: >>96511675

>>96511592
>this shit is STILL going on
weeks ago you said you were going to wrap it up. WEEKS

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 16:33:25 No.96511675 Report

Quoted By: >>96512148 >>96539064

>>96511637
>comic that's been going for 10 years
>surprised wrapping it up is taking a while
really hope to finish in 2017 just so the 10-years thing stays accurate. Ideally by the end of november, but that is unlikely. I'm hurryin', man. You wanna deny Hel and Kimchi their wedding?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 16:38:18 No.96511767 Report

Quoted By: >>96512605

>>96511609
If you want to have HYW #419, then start it properly. Don't use this half-assed meta-thread.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 16:59:06 No.96512148 Report

Quoted By: >>96512635 >>96542936

>>96511675
No we just want you to go away.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 17:22:19 No.96512605 Report

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>>96511767
we've done this at least 10 times

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 17:23:26 No.96512635 Report

Quoted By: >>96513214

>>96512148
not happening. i'm gonna be a lot more active once the comic's over

Dupe

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Dupe Sat 04 Nov 2017 17:32:21 No.96512830 Report

Quoted By: >>96513602

Made a bunch of tiny female vegabond sprites for use in comic backgrounds in the future. I tried to make them widely varying while still maintaining certain cliques. The top row will be used in an area for people with specialized skillsets looking for commission work and quests. The bottom row will be used for an entertainment district, most prominently a dance club.

I'll be doing similar background character arrays for men, aliens, and robots of each faction present as well.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 17:40:17 No.96513004 Report

Quoted By: >>96513602

Well, that's a shame, I was wondering where these threads went. These threads actually saved my ass last night.

>accidentally delete my folder containing my entire comic including what I was currently working on
>remember that I posted a few times in these threads
>got them back but now theyre at a much smaller resolution.

crisis averted but now im upset my files aren't hueg anymore.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 17:47:55 No.96513181 Report

Quoted By: >>96524186

More experimenting with the vertical scrolling phone app format, tried to do this transition with a yo-yo but not sure if it works.

http://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/a-gray-life/yo-yo-adventure/viewer?title_no=119329&episode_no=5

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 17:49:13 No.96513214 Report

Quoted By: >>96513535

>>96512635
post new comiic

Awin !Bells6tbMo

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Awin !Bells6tbMo Sat 04 Nov 2017 17:54:33 No.96513343 Report

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I'm gone for a week and these threads are gone?
What the hell.
I'll be posting on Monday, just been busy studying for an exam

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 17:59:24 No.96513458 Report

Quoted By: >>96513486

I just want to finish my damn comic before I start my animation project.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 18:00:45 No.96513486 Report

Quoted By: >>96513602 >>96519434

>>96513458
Bonus pixel art thing that I did instead of actually working on the comic.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 18:01:40 No.96513503 Report

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>>96511592
wow this looks ugly AF

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

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ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 18:02:50 No.96513535 Report

Quoted By: >>96513557 >>96513567 >>96513580 >>96513617 >>96515437

>>96513214
this is all I have so far but this is 3 years old art and I'm gonna practice a lot before I'm ready. this.. is not ready. and i'm not ready now either.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

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ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 18:03:53 No.96513557 Report

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>>96513535
2/2

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 18:04:29 No.96513567 Report

Quoted By: >>96513640

>>96513535
Work on shading. Think about your light source

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 18:05:02 No.96513580 Report

Quoted By: >>96513640

>>96513535
looks kinda gay, what is this supposed tro be about

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 18:06:01 No.96513602 Report

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>>96513004
Isn't that great? it's worth spreading your stuff around.
>>96512830
These look really nice for backgrounds. The only word is flavorful
>>96513486
>you can do amazing pixel art too
just become king of art already

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 18:06:34 No.96513617 Report

Quoted By: >>96513779

>>96513535
have you try other art styles than just anime?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 18:07:24 No.96513638 Report

Quoted By: >>96513708 >>96515337

>>96506725
i cant draw background so maybe i should just give up on my comic

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 18:07:31 No.96513640 Report

Quoted By: >>96513734 >>96513814 >>96516460

>>96513567
>it's not shaded at all
Good advice though!
>>96513580
Prequel but Zelda instead of Elderscrolls
a little Gerudo is kinda gay? They're like, super aggressively into men. sometimes kidnapping them

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 18:11:46 No.96513708 Report

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>>96513638
looks fine to me

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 18:12:44 No.96513734 Report

Quoted By: >>96513810

>>96513640
Pretty sure the Gerudo have had pointy ears in every bit of Zelda outside of a few concept pieces for OoT.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 18:15:01 No.96513779 Report

Quoted By: >>96513906 >>96514069

>>96513617
Rarely. Dabbled in some Milt Kahl, some Mario, and whatever Young Justice's style is. Some recent cartoons, one or two old ones. I like mimicking styles. Trying to find this one example, , dunno where it went.
but for Zelda obviously I'd stick with Zelda style.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 18:16:14 No.96513810 Report

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>>96513734
Nope, they've only had pointy ears in BotW. Granted that's also the only other game they've ever appeared in
Their roundearedness is important as far as i'm concerned, it separates them from the blessed Hylians with their 'our special goddess gave us special pointed ears to hear us' thing. Drives an interesting wedge between the cultures.
I'm also sticking with the all yellow eyes paradigm

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 18:16:23 No.96513814 Report

Quoted By: >>96513841

>>96513640
>Prequel but Zelda instead of Elderscrolls
quick rundown on what this means?

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 18:17:23 No.96513841 Report

Quoted By: >>96513876

>>96513814
you're not familiar with the comic Prequel? dude it's the best. Go check that shit out.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 18:18:46 No.96513876 Report

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>>96513841
looks like shit

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Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 18:20:16 No.96513906 Report

Quoted By: >>96515583

>>96513779
you could try more cartoonish art styles like genddy's. more geometric

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 18:27:39 No.96514069 Report

Quoted By: >>96515583

>>96513779
That doesn't look like Zelda style at all. Take a few months off to get the style right.

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sandcastles Sat 04 Nov 2017 18:32:18 No.96514172 Report

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original idea of Giant Queek Sakura, the manga parody about a magical wielding the powers of a sumo wrestler, fell through a couple years ago when the artist went to teach instead

closest I've got is a comical RPG book. been tossed around in editing and illustrating for a while and hit Kickstarter a few weeks ago. All about goblins getting kicked out of the fantasy world for being too shitty and learning that they love living in a post-apocalyptic Earth

shortcut's www.goblin.house

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Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 18:48:24 No.96514551 Report

Quoted By: >>96515002

>tfw your friends are wannabe normies who belittle you for pursuing comics and subtly put you down constantly to assert a sort of perceived social hierarchy for their own ego's sake

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Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 19:07:33 No.96515002 Report

Quoted By: >>96515462

>>96514551
You and I both know there's only one solution to this problem, Anon.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 19:22:34 No.96515337 Report

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>>96513638
I actually like how atrocious this perspective is, if you're going for a warped doodle world kinda thing.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 19:26:48 No.96515437 Report

Quoted By:

>>96513535
>loli mc
I expected nothing different

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 19:27:49 No.96515462 Report

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>>96515002
this triggers /k/

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 19:34:40 No.96515583 Report

Quoted By: >>96515995 >>96516026

>>96513906
I kind of hate that stuff. I've been working hard since I was a little kid to avoid drawing that way.
he's a hell of a director and creative genius though
>>96514069
I'm definitely taking a long time off, at LEAST months. but I definitely have zelda style down, have for a long-ass time. Probably the first style I ever really mastered. Er.. no, the third, after peanuts and garfield. The point here is to simplify it to make those prequel-style aliased sprites and look good. That's definitely going to take work, aaand it doesn't look good yet.

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Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 19:56:40 No.96515995 Report

Quoted By: >>96516513

>>96515583
>I definitely have zelda style down, have for a long-ass time

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Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 19:58:42 No.96516026 Report

Quoted By: >>96516513

>>96515583
>but I definitely have zelda style down, have for a long-ass time.
No. I'm sorry if this sounds harsh, but there's a vast gulf in detail, posing, grasp of proportion and just overall appeal between what I've seen of your output and this kind of stuff.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 20:10:03 No.96516266 Report

Quoted By: >>96516513

>>96511592
y'know, I actually like the artstyle
it *really* doesn't work well with whatever fanservice you're doing, though

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 20:14:35 No.96516350 Report

Quoted By: >>96516478 >>96516574

>>96511592
Why not just make a loli porn comic? You're clearly passionate about the subject, and if you went the full hentai route we wouldn't have to see your shitty pages in these threads anymore. It's a win-win for everyone.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 20:19:24 No.96516460 Report

Quoted By: >>96516529 >>96516574

>>96513640
>Loli MC
>Aggresivley into men

That's our Cold Fusion!

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 20:20:08 No.96516478 Report

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>>96516350
i think more people would actually read his comics if he did

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 20:21:18 No.96516513 Report

Quoted By: >>96516616 >>96516640 >>96516856

>>96516026
I don't think I was explaining right, that picture there was not an example of how well I can draw zelda style (which is more than one style but you correctly surmised that I'm aiming at OoT style), it was a semi-failed attempt at simplifying.
>>96515995
since I posted that I've been looking around for some decent examples of zelda i've done but I don't think I scanned the really good ones where I was practicing on-model Link. Plus it's all really, really old as I've been neglecting Zelda fanart pretty hard, and even then most of the recent stuff has been OCs (pic related)
Any requests? I can quickly sketch you up a Link I suppose.
>>96516266
Works pretty well for Ebichu, but it's usually not meant to be fanservice. just good oldfashioned people-are-changing-clothes-or-bathing nudity. Sometimes a little ecchi here and there I dunno

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 20:22:03 No.96516529 Report

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>>96516460
Don't get ahead of yourself. We don't know for sure yet whether she wears panties and/or a menstrual cup.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 20:24:00 No.96516574 Report

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>>96516350
Considering it. I'll still share it here though, and it would only be unconnected one-offs.
>>96516460
This one is not particularly thirsty, more concerned with being worked like a slave and not being allowed to go out and do the interesting thief shit because she's too young. Just wants to escape for freedom's own sake. She started out as this drawing of a gerudo girl throwing pots, the idea being they work her so hard and then Link comes in and smashes them all

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

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ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 20:25:12 No.96516616 Report

Quoted By: >>96516718 >>96516839 >>96516856 >>96516887

>>96516513
>pic related
fuck, forgot
also when I said OCs I meant 'of the non-human races, and thus not a fantastic example of mastering the zelda style'

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 20:26:41 No.96516640 Report

Quoted By: >>96516676 >>96517727

>>96516513
sketch a link. I wish I could post the vid of Dobson drawing link while whining about his life, but he took the video down after an /ic/ thread shitting on him and mocking all his videos

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Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 20:27:38 No.96516661 Report

Quoted By: >>96516877

Anyone else want to write without planning? I know its dangerous but, its webcomics. Might as well do it here instead of in a professional space

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 20:28:40 No.96516676 Report

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>>96516640
you got it m8. howbout I make my own instead of sticking to one game, but still try to stick to the style

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 20:30:26 No.96516718 Report

Quoted By: >>96516820

>>96516616
Looks ugly as fuck m8, not even the bucket or leaves look decent

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 20:35:12 No.96516820 Report

Quoted By: >>96517113

>>96516718
I'm deeply ashamed of the water. I'm pretty sure I could have done better than that 9 years ago when I drew this.

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Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 20:35:58 No.96516839 Report

Quoted By: >>96517099

>>96516616
>that fucking water

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 20:36:42 No.96516856 Report

Quoted By: >>96517099

>>96516513
>it was a semi-failed attempt at simplifying.
It didn't look any simpler, it just looked worse. There was no appeal to the shapes.

>>96516616
You really need to fix the wobbling on your lines if you want them to look decent.

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE

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Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Sat 04 Nov 2017 20:37:34 No.96516877 Report

Quoted By: >>96517100

>>96516661
I've learned not to do that since my ideas tend to be larger on paper than they are in my head. A short story in my head becomes a novella. A three issue comic script becomes six issues.

Now I plan things out far more than I used to, and I try to finish one project before moving on to another. That's part of the reason updates have gotten slower on my site.

There will be some Shika in Croatoan stuff later though-with art of Alice from my 2nd artist Edspear.

Pic related is youngest Alice when she first came to Earth in 1969. She's as brash energetic tomboy who just started really channeling her magic power through her family's imperial heirloom the Staff of Solomon (yes, the one from Solomon Kane-who is one of her ancestors)

Questions? Comments?

Also, do you think Alice's hate looks better with stripes or without stripes?

http://www.capeworldcomics.com/

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 20:38:13 No.96516887 Report

Quoted By: >>96517099

>>96516616
that water is abysmal

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 20:47:11 No.96517099 Report

Quoted By: >>96517586

>>96516856
Well other people said I didn't have the same detail level, so obviously it is simplified. The shapes look pretty appealing to me, and i'm kind of obsessed with the appeal of shapes.
>>96516856
I think I was still using a mouse back then, or had only just gotten my tablet. It took me a long time to learn that fast, sweeping strokes were the way to go.
>>96516839
>>96516887
nope, too late, got in ahead of you

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 20:47:11 No.96517100 Report

Quoted By: >>96517395

>>96516877
Did you release any of those stories where you didnt plan?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 20:48:00 No.96517113 Report

Quoted By: >>96517195

>>96516820
>9 years ago when I drew this.
>Making this little improvement in 9 years

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 20:51:48 No.96517195 Report

Quoted By: >>96517336

>>96517113
What are you comparing it to?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 20:58:19 No.96517336 Report

Quoted By: >>96517727

>>96517195
Basically every other artist in this thread. I know plenty of teenagers who have art miles better than yours, not because they're artistically gifted but because they fucking work and push themselves to improve, and don't waste their lives drawing ugly anime knock-off wank material.

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Sat 04 Nov 2017 21:00:46 No.96517395 Report

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>>96517100
Yeah. The text story that goes with the comic Metal Animals found here:http://www.capeworldcomics.com/chapter/metal-animals/

Which is Usagi Yojimbo plus Mad Max plus Escaflowne.

And the story here which is currently in the process of being rewritten about superhuman children visiting a museum of superheros:http://www.capeworldcomics.com/chapter/eyes-of-dawn-text/

Looking on feedback for these to by the way.

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Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 21:10:11 No.96517586 Report

Quoted By: >>96517727

>>96517099
>Well other people said I didn't have the same detail level, so obviously it is simplified.
Those other people are wrong. Your drawing isn't any less complicated than this drawing of Saria aside from the shading, it's just badly executed.
>The shapes look pretty appealing to me
Your limbs don't taper right and they're not proportioned right. Your shoulders don't connect to the neck right. Your waist doesn't narrow right. Your faces and feet are blobs.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 21:11:48 No.96517612 Report

Quoted By: >>96517752 >>96518754

cover WIP. Wrestling with the colors, how do they look so far?

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ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 21:17:16 No.96517727 Report

Quoted By: >>96518112 >>96518474 >>96523892

>>96517336
I meant what of mine, but keep trying.
>>96517586
I mean, I disagree? but again, old drawing
>>96516640
hooo man am I ever rusty at drawing guys. my 11 year old self is just shaking his head. I intentionally did a beefy-ass Link just for a change

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 21:18:27 No.96517752 Report

Quoted By: >>96518548

>>96517612
Kind of relieved he isn't going to be green, but is he undead in any capacity? because his skin looks pretty normal
Spectacular shadingwork. I love that technique. Her hair looks a little awkward around the bangs
There's also a fold on her sleeve that (and I can't believe I'm saying this) makes a tangent with her upper arm, causing it to look like the lower arm is behind it

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 21:31:25 No.96518040 Report

Quoted By: >>96543082

shit howbout instead of making excuses I just redraw Manju? (I think I'm just gonna call her Manju)
I'm feelin so damn zeldatastic now and because it's an upcoming webcomic for once I have an excuse

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Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 21:35:20 No.96518112 Report

Quoted By: >>96518172

>>96517727
What is that pose supposed to be?
Why are his arms so long? Why are his legs so fat and shapeless? Why are his shoulders doing that? Why is his mouth off to one side? Why isn't his sword straight? Why is his shield all twisted?
I'll grant you that it's slightly better than the gerudo girl, but you're still a long way from being where you need to be to make something people will want to look at.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 21:38:32 No.96518172 Report

Quoted By: >>96518474 >>96518787

>>96518112
>asking why instead of giving crit
because it's a fucking quick sketch. The challenge here was whether or not I could do a -style- appropriate for zelda fanart. I don't see any anatomical mistakes here. I looked up some pose references but I ended up doing something out of my own head instead. I'm pretty bad at poses but I think this was a good one. Gave the limbs actual shape and everything.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 21:39:06 No.96518189 Report

Quoted By: >>96518576

>>96506725

I'll keep posting if there's still threads lol.
Even if there's shitposting and trolls, I think it's good to keep sharing.

Don't let you passion/hobby get stifled.

New chapter is out and I missed Halloween.
Cheers lads, keep up the good work.

http://boysland.thewebcomic.com/archive/#ch_103200

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 21:49:53 No.96518474 Report

Quoted By: >>96518775 >>96518852

>>96517727
It still looks like shit man.

>>96518172
And this is why you'll never improve. The body is lumpy and shapeless, the pose is wonky and out of perspective, and it's only a mediocre knock of of oot's style at best.
>I don't see any anatomical mistakes here.
That's because your anatomical knowledge is shit. You've satisfied yourself with mediocrity for so long you don't even know what good artwork is.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 21:53:12 No.96518548 Report

Quoted By: >>96518579

>>96517752
>but is he undead in any capacity? because his skin looks pretty normal
He's supposed to look sickly pale. I plan to fix the other issues when I get to overpainting

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 21:54:10 No.96518576 Report

Quoted By:

>>96518189
you are so pure.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 21:54:24 No.96518579 Report

Quoted By:

>>96518548
yeah you'll definitely want to go paler and sicklier than that if you want it to stand out

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:02:05 No.96518754 Report

Quoted By:

>>96517612
you are a beautiful and talented individual.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

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ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:03:21 No.96518775 Report

Quoted By: >>96518913 >>96519273 >>96543870 >>96544061

>>96518474
I could probably draw you a diagram of most of the human musculature from memory, but sure, whatever. man I'm used to being called shit on the things I'm actually shit at, not the very few I put time into.

alright now I've drawn a cutie and I feel better. time to go back to commissions

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:03:54 No.96518787 Report

Quoted By: >>96518910

>>96518172
>because it's a fucking quick sketch.
You say that, but I've never seen you do better.
>I don't see any anatomical mistakes here
His arms are different lengths. He's missing at least one trapezius. His mouth is located under his left eye. His ears is too high up his head. His hamstring doesn't look right.

I'm not saying you're hopeless or anything, but you need to get a proper assessment of where you're at if you want to improve.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:06:42 No.96518852 Report

Quoted By:

>>96518474
>You've satisfied yourself with mediocrity for so long you don't even know what good artwork is.
gotdamn

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ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:09:30 No.96518910 Report

Quoted By: >>96519273

>>96518787
Fuck, I knew something was wrong with his neck. You're dead right. I had trapezius muscles down 18 years ago, what happened?
>arms different lengths
how can you tell? one's entirely behind a shield. the other's slightly behind the body
>ear too high
it connects to the head right at the edge of the outer eye corner, just like real life.
>mouth under eye
I tried moving it, it looked wrong. For one thing his head's turned to the side, I'm pretty sure that's right as long as one mouth corner is pulled up, and most grimaces are.

Okay so help me out with the hamstring, i'm not seeing that. You were right on the ol' trapeze so you can help, I'm not seeing it but I think I should

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:09:41 No.96518913 Report

Quoted By: >>96519146 >>96519439

>>96518775
>I could probably draw you a diagram of most of the human musculature from memory, but sure, whatever. man
Prove it, I dare you. Draw a human body's musculature, front on and from the back from memory. And skip the shitty anime stylization

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:15:06 No.96519038 Report

Quoted By: >>96519198 >>96519334 >>96519836 >>96540046

>making a webcomic
>current year
Unless it's porn, nobody is gonna give a shit.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:21:29 No.96519146 Report

Quoted By: >>96519439

>>96518913
well okay, I was going to make a boring standing-pose Link pointing out that yeah I could get proportional like this but it'd be "stiff' and "Static" so I was trying to do a more dynamic pose just for you
but this is a fun challenge, just like that time our geography final was drawing all the countries, so let's see if I can do this. the back is gonna look worse than the front I can tell you that, but it's gonna be awwwlright.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:24:07 No.96519198 Report

Quoted By: >>96519224 >>96519278

>>96519038
But I have a cool story to tell.....

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:25:38 No.96519224 Report

Quoted By: >>96519334 >>96519519 >>96519836

>>96519198
Most webcomic creators are satisfied with mediocrity and obscurity, when what they should be doing is using it as Proof of Concept for official work

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:25:53 No.96519232 Report

Quoted By: >>96526818

>>96506969
link to this comic?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:28:01 No.96519273 Report

Quoted By: >>96519522

>>96518775
What is that pose? What is that perspective?
Why is she falling over?

What is that collar bone doing?
Why are her knees at the same height when neither her hips or her ankles are?
Why doesn't she have an elbow? What is going on with her armpits?

>>96518910
>how can you tell? one's entirely behind a shield. the other's slightly behind the body
You drew it behind the shield and it's so long his elbow would be at his crotch. The other one looks like it's the right length.
>it connects to the head right at the edge of the outer eye corner, just like real life.
The bottom of the ear is too high.
>I tried moving it, it looked wrong.
Nope. Pic related. You're probably just too used to anime sidemouth.

>Hamstring
It's attached too far down the knee. That's fat guy powerlifter hamstrings, wiry people like Link have them attach higher up.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:28:16 No.96519278 Report

Quoted By:

>>96519198
Yeah. You and everyone else.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:30:30 No.96519334 Report

Quoted By: >>96519468 >>96519729 >>96522298

>>96519038
>>96519224
I just make webcomics because it's fun, I have a story I want to tell, and to improve my skills so I can someday get published. If you make webcomics because you want to get popular you're in it for the wrong reasons.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:35:27 No.96519434 Report

Quoted By:

>>96513486
the tangent with his halberd and helmet gave me the bubonic plague

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ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:35:45 No.96519439 Report

Quoted By: >>96519510 >>96519705 >>96519993

>>96518913
>>96519146
bam.
B+ at least, right? Pretty good for from-memory? I guess I cheated a little by feeling myself in a few places

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:36:46 No.96519468 Report

Quoted By:

>>96519334
I mean, of course we're not going into this for a stable career, but its nonsensical to not emphasize productivity and a lie to say you dont want some measure of popularity. Otherwise you'd keep your stuff to your My Pictures folder

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:39:04 No.96519510 Report

Quoted By: >>96519682

>>96519439
wow, you know way more than me

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:39:23 No.96519519 Report

Quoted By: >>96519687 >>96519742

>>96519224
Why would I want to do official work?
Then I'll have people ordering me around and imposing deadlines and telling me what I can or can't draw. I'll have to leave my country and all my friends and family for somewhere with a proper comics industry.
Fuck that.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:39:42 No.96519522 Report

Quoted By: >>96520556

>>96519273
That pose is "I'm shy"
she's falling over because the camera is rotated slightly and also from above, to emphasize the shrinking-violet-ness.
however, I forgot to change the collarbone when I realized it was an above-view. fuck. Thanks for that.
her knees are togetherish but one leg is behind the other.
her elbow's right there. I hoped nobody would say anything about the armpits so I didn't detail them. I was wrong again! Just a sketch, man.

as for that photo, her face isn't turned as much as Link's is, so that might explain most of that. For example, draw a line from the two mouth-edges upward to the eyes. they line up fine.
I'm not seeing how I drew his hamstrings at all, but that is good advice overall. like I said this is a beefier Link than usual but I should keep in mind musculatural differences. that's gonna be one thing I practice a lot of. My body-type variation is pitiful

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ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:45:41 No.96519682 Report

Quoted By:

>>96519510
when I was little my mom was in community college for.... nursing? I think? She had an anatomy and physiology coloring book as a study aid, and I read the fuck out of it because I was a bored kid. I still drew like sonichu but the images stick with you. You notice them while reading superhero comics and shit. Then DBZ awoke the rest.
I can already tell the proportions arent fantastic, but I'm pretty sure I got the major muscle groups

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:45:52 No.96519687 Report

Quoted By: >>96519863

>>96519519
>Why would I want to do official work?
so you can allot proper time to your passion and not have to worry about jobs?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:46:25 No.96519705 Report

Quoted By: >>96519815 >>96519835

>>96519439
>those flat as fuck feet
>dem cartoon abs
>DBZ arm muscles
>completely half assed hands
>torso just collapses in on itself
>short as fuck neck
keep telling us about how good you are at anatomy, please

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:47:32 No.96519729 Report

Quoted By:

>>96519334
>because it's fun
Fun runs out eventually

>so I can someday get published
>If you make webcomics because you want to get popular you're in it for the wrong reasons.
Yeah, since all of those no name artists get their stuff published all the time.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:47:54 No.96519742 Report

Quoted By:

>>96519519
I would love to do character-design work, but the one part that would drive me up the wall is how much of your work is discarded but you aren't allowed to reuse it. You might have to do 20 designs and only one gets used, and then the next character... they all have to be new. And you can't ever use them ever again because that studio owns them now.
This indy game I'm working on has explicitly said we get back anything that doesn't get used, and the commission payments come out of any future royalties. That way both of our asses are covered.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:51:27 No.96519815 Report

Quoted By:

>>96519705
hey I used 76% of my ass on those hands. and he has high traps, not so much a short neck. i based him partially on my neckless self, hence the sagittal keel. I forgot most people have arches in their feet but you're right.
I still think that's pretty good for mem'ry and having drawn almost nothing but cute girls for most of the last decade.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:52:14 No.96519835 Report

Quoted By: >>96519983

>>96519705
he's pretty decent desu

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:52:15 No.96519836 Report

Quoted By:

>>96519038
>>96519224
Most webcomic artists are not economist or entrepreneurs. To succeed in life, you've got to have a /biz/ mindset. That's why I'm going to learn marketing and self promotion before I jump head first into the webcomic scene

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:53:14 No.96519863 Report

Quoted By: >>96519947

>>96519687
But why not just go on Patreon and have people throw money at me?
Sure, I'll never be super rich, but I can draw whatever I want all day and I've never cared for expensive things anyway.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:56:19 No.96519947 Report

Quoted By: >>96520230

>>96519863
if Patreon works out thats cool
Id say official work is good for the stable salary/resume material though

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:57:31 No.96519983 Report

Quoted By: >>96520175

>>96519835
dude, it looks like utter crap. it's 12-year old tracing an anatomy textbook level. if he was decent he'd actually be able to apply it to his works

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 22:57:43 No.96519993 Report

Quoted By: >>96520142 >>96520269

>>96519439
Your back muscles are visible from the front when you raise your arm.
Elbows follow the rotation of your forearm. Hamstrings attach to the side of the knee, not the back.
Wrists are not the thickness of your neck.

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ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:03:57 No.96520142 Report

Quoted By:

>>96519993
I did draw those back muscles from the front, and I didn't rotate the forearms. also no they don't. the elbow stays put as you rotate your forearm. touch it and try. You're thinking of the way the radius and ulna kind of orbit as the hand rotates
wrists are about 60-70% the thickness of your neck, and that's what I drew. I've got a thick as fuck neck and super thin wrists and mine line up
at least I think they're thin. then again I'm on the last holes in my watchband so I dunno if it's meant for little kids or what

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:05:25 No.96520175 Report

Quoted By: >>96520282

>>96519983
>tracing
wouldn't tracing an anatomy textbook be good?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:07:45 No.96520230 Report

Quoted By: >>96520356 >>96520385

>>96519947
I don't really know of anybody who puts the work in on patreon and doesn't make at least a modest living, so I suspect the only way you can work hard and fail on there is a lack of shilling yourself.
And from what I hear nobody in the biz cares about your resume, only your portfolio.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:08:59 No.96520269 Report

Quoted By: >>96520294

>>96519993
oh man I can see exactly what I did wrong around the scapulae too. I've been mistaking the teres and infraspinatus muscles for big triangular muscles following the shoulderblades, but they are totally not that at all.
This has been a fantastic exercise, y'know? Thanks for the challenge.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:09:15 No.96520275 Report

Quoted By: >>96520367 >>96520415

I finally finished 1st part
https://julia012.deviantart.com/

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:09:32 No.96520282 Report

Quoted By: >>96520356

>>96520175
just tracing anatomy gives you a superficial idea of what muscles, it doesn't let you understand the actual masses and forms of muscles, or how they move, constrict, and relax. you just end up with shitty ugly painted-on muscles

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:10:02 No.96520294 Report

Quoted By:

>>96520269
I literally remember putting my name on. firefox did you trick me again?
firefox is a tricky bitch

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:12:55 No.96520356 Report

Quoted By: >>96520375

>>96520282
So what you meant to say is "it looks like a 12-year-old traced a textbook then later did it from memory of the tracing"
That's fair.
>>96520230
You cannot possibly believe that.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:14:00 No.96520367 Report

Quoted By: >>96520499

>>96520275
DeviantART is the worst possible place for posting a comic. There's no navigating.
If you put this 1998 manga up on its own proper website with forward and back buttons, I will read the whole thing and probably draw you fanart.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:14:27 No.96520375 Report

Quoted By: >>96520471

>>96520356
>You cannot possibly believe that.
Which bit and why not?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:14:45 No.96520385 Report

Quoted By: >>96520729

>>96520230
>I don't really know of anybody who puts the work in on patreon and doesn't make at least a modest living,
heh

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:16:12 No.96520415 Report

Quoted By: >>96520493

>>96520275
Cute style, it's charming, but can be improved

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:19:12 No.96520471 Report

Quoted By: >>96520729

>>96520375
That everyone who puts work into their patreon makes enough money to live on. There's at least a certain significant luck factor, as well as the fickle tastes of others, patreon's policies, and any number of other factors.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:20:15 No.96520493 Report

Quoted By:

>>96520415
This.
For most of them I just want to keep the head and compress the body down to a more reasonable, less CLAMP-esque height

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:20:25 No.96520499 Report

Quoted By: >>96520529

>>96520367
>If you put this 1998 manga up on its own proper website with forward and back buttons
And how do I do this?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:22:25 No.96520529 Report

Quoted By: >>96520562 >>96520564

>>96520499
the old thread had a basic webcomic theme for tumblr that had buttons built in, I believe

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:23:54 No.96520556 Report

Quoted By: >>96520585

>>96519522
> from above
Then why isn't she narrower at the bottom.
>her elbow's right there
No it isn't though. Her arm just bends without any suggestion of an elbow.
>her knees are togetherish but one leg is behind the other.
In that case the shin needs to be more foreshortened and the knee needs to be lower on the trailing leg.

>For example, draw a line from the two mouth-edges upward to the eyes. they line up fine.
Yes? I edited your image so the mouth was properly placed under the nose. In the original, one edge of the mouth was under the nose and the other was under the edge of an eye.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:24:29 No.96520562 Report

Quoted By: >>96520579

>>96520529
oh yeah we don't have our usual copypasta
Lemme go find it

>Links to get a rough WEBSITE started up:
Easy to use tumblr webcomic theme: https://www.tumblr.com/theme/39018
Dos and Donts for starting a site: http://pastebin.com/kNR2W5mV (embed)
>Contact sheet if anyone wants to put information down, like their site and webcomic:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uwfOSHXfrgvcf--PkPz9jXL6p5RqIsrYvXYwgQpgT3k/edit#

I personally prefer the free comic-hosting websites that use templates

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:24:30 No.96520564 Report

Quoted By:

>>96520529
hopefuly someone will post it again...

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:25:34 No.96520579 Report

Quoted By:

>>96520562
oh thanks

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:25:57 No.96520585 Report

Quoted By: >>96520600 >>96520791

>>96520556
The shin is pretty foreshortened, and no, the trailing leg's knee would be higher if the entire leg was pulled back. but it's not. only bent differently at the knee.
>I edited your image
well fuck me, okay. It looks perfect how you did it.

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ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:27:00 No.96520600 Report

Quoted By:

>>96520585
name. fuck. stay on.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:33:33 No.96520729 Report

Quoted By: >>96520825 >>96524280

>>96520385
If I don't know of them they're clearly not putting enough work into marketing.

>>96520471
>That everyone who puts work into their patreon makes enough money to live on.
Do you know any counterexamples?
>a luck factor
Yeah, but that's everything in life. I could get hit by a meteor at any second.
>the fickle tastes of others,
If you're not willing to adapt to your audience or market to it properly, how are you putting in enough work?
>patreon's policies
If you're thrown off patreon for being against their policies, you're not on patreon.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:37:17 No.96520791 Report

Quoted By: >>96520923

>>96520585
Could you draw a quick stick figure in profile of how her legs are supposed to be? I'm not really able to make sense of what you're saying.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:38:44 No.96520825 Report

Quoted By: >>96520864

>>96520729
Don't plant a tuning fork in the ground and call it goalposts

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:39:00 No.96520832 Report

Quoted By: >>96521468

Do you guys have future plans with your comics? I've decided that if mine doesn't get to a certain level of popularity in 49 months then I should just fold and give up the dream. I would like to earn 10x more on Patreon than I currently do, but for an ideaguy who refuses to pander. It might as well be a pipe dream.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:40:48 No.96520864 Report

Quoted By: >>96520917

>>96520825
That is the most opaque analogy I've read all day. What in the world are you trying to say?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:40:54 No.96520866 Report

Quoted By: >>96520948 >>96523139 >>96527799 >>96533344

Is this legit /hyw/ or a casual care free do whatever thread? If it's the latter, I'd be down to draw peoples characters and/or my own doing whatever you request

More shitty paper practice. Do her feet look better now? Not really digging her face

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:43:35 No.96520917 Report

Quoted By:

>>96520864
He's basically saying don't falsify something that clearly isn't a goal.

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ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:43:44 No.96520923 Report

Quoted By: >>96521077

>>96520791
just fyi this is in no way an argument, I'm sure I did actually fuck these up. This is just so you know I DID put thought into it.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:45:07 No.96520948 Report

Quoted By: >>96520978

>>96520866
it's bofe. would you draw my characters? I like your art a whole hecka lot
>DO her feet look better now?
I mean they're super simplified feet so They can't really be right or wrong. I'm seeing a weird contrast between the flat-markered dress, the soft-furred cheeks, the pen-drawn muzzle, and the super cartoony limb extremities.

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Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:47:08 No.96520978 Report

Quoted By: >>96521038 >>96521077

>>96520948
Yeah I dunno. Still trying to play around with her design. The feet are a hell of a lot better than what I drew before though.
What does bofe mean?
And who would you like me to draw?

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ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:49:45 No.96521038 Report

Quoted By:

>>96520978
I was intentionally using bad english and comically pronouncing the word 'both' with an F in it. I'm really, really funny and good at jokes.

And yes that is better than burnt-matchstick paws for sure. Would you like some suggestions? I don't draw nearly enough furry anymore. Not that I post what I do draw.
Ummmmm I think you would do Sasha or Hel (two on the furthest left) pretty well. Cute girls that are animal-y. Your pick though

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:51:33 No.96521077 Report

Quoted By: >>96521118

>>96520923
1, the knees aren't following the angle of her hips even though by the profile view both of her thighs are going straight down.
2, that projection only makes sense if her legs are within a few degrees of the viewer's eye height.

>>96520978
It's a cutesy way of spelling "both". He's saying this is both the real /hyw/ and a casual carefree do-whatever thread.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sat 04 Nov 2017 23:53:40 No.96521118 Report

Quoted By: >>96521386 >>96532204

>>96521077
Yeah you're right, her hips are at a different angle aren't they
yknow what's really sad? I used a reference for this entire part. I recognized it had bad proportions and was a doll-base abomination, but I thought the legs looked good
I'm gonna learn how to notice this stuff myself someday. You are helping.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 00:01:10 No.96521282 Report

Quoted By: >>96543418

>this much coldfusion in one thread

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 00:05:34 No.96521386 Report

Quoted By: >>96521462

>>96521118
If it helps, try drawing the whole pose in profile and rotating it like pic related to get a better grasp of what the proportions should be.

gloryhol anon

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gloryhol anon Sun 05 Nov 2017 00:08:50 No.96521447 Report

Quoted By: >>96521490

have some diddly doodles of some creature for a comic

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 00:09:22 No.96521462 Report

Quoted By: >>96521673

>>96521386
I mean honestly I wasn't working out a careful pose here, I was just trying to draw-the-character, and was happy to let the pose draw itself. If I start going into a drawing with a pose in mind, with my OCD, it will not end well. I gotta let go of the result or the stress is real
the stress is REEAAL, Morty.
That is good-ass advice though. I can see that going really badly and that certainly isn't the result I wanted (was focusing on some long legs bein' long) but it's definitely the right way to do it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 00:09:42 No.96521468 Report

Quoted By: >>96522021

>>96520832
Hey man, it's gonna get rough some times and you may not get anywhere fast. But if you truly love your work and want it to grow, be patient, continue to push forward one step at a time, and you will see the fruits of your labor. Others will eventually see it too.

If do end up wrapping it up, then it proves maybe the story wasn't meant to be.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 00:10:43 No.96521490 Report

Quoted By: >>96521537

>>96521447
Nevermind all the hole-in-the-face remarks one could make I'm going to point out how he seems to have a hollow head that's threadbare in back, letting some light show through the stitching. They just don't use quality faceless construction anymore

gloryhol anon

gloryhol anon Sun 05 Nov 2017 00:13:35 No.96521537 Report

Quoted By: >>96521585

>>96521490
hollow-headed daddio.
Trying to get some sort of uncanny valley feel for that dude. I'm exploring some ideas

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 00:15:55 No.96521585 Report

Quoted By:

>>96521537
You know what comic you should check out if you're going with that kind of feel? Outer City Limits. It's that really special extra smart kind of fucked up. (Ignore the most recent pages, they require context unlike the majority of them)
Also they periodically take suggestions from the comments and twist them into bizarre storylines

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 00:16:56 No.96521600 Report

Quoted By: >>96521678

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 00:17:46 No.96521616 Report

Quoted By: >>96521647 >>96543497

https://utsukishirosaura.tumblr.com/

So uploaded first 3 pages
How do I into navigation and buttons?
I tried something already but it didn't work

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 00:19:30 No.96521647 Report

Quoted By: >>96521682

>>96521616
https://www.tumblr.com/theme/39018

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 00:20:53 No.96521673 Report

Quoted By: >>96521721

>>96521462
>my OCD, it will not end well
>he thinks he has the barest inkling of the depths of perspective OCD

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 00:21:05 No.96521678 Report

Quoted By:

>>96521600
it's no Ariel Needs Legs, but I like her weird clam body and flounder as a stripy goldfish cracker

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 00:21:08 No.96521682 Report

Quoted By: >>96521801

>>96521647
yeah, I installed that theme already

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 00:22:39 No.96521721 Report

Quoted By:

>>96521673
I think it's a different kind. That shit, at least, is productive. But since I grew up stereoblind it never gets to the point that it feels right. The satisfaction of doing it properly never arrives. Gonna have to learn it the way autistic people memorize facial expressions.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 00:25:56 No.96521801 Report

Quoted By: >>96521868

>>96521682
my bad I didnt notice
what do the options on the left-hand side say?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 00:28:32 No.96521868 Report

Quoted By: >>96521928 >>96521979

>>96521801
I just noticed it kinda works if you instead of going to the main site go to:
https://utsukishirosaura.tumblr.com/post/167137490344/part-1-cover

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 00:30:46 No.96521928 Report

Quoted By: >>96522015

>>96521868
glad it works

I like the vibe. Do you have an upload schedule planned out (daily, weekly, chapter-by-chapter,etc)?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 00:33:05 No.96521979 Report

Quoted By:

>>96521868
bookmarked

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 00:34:47 No.96522015 Report

Quoted By:

>>96521928
not really

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 00:35:03 No.96522021 Report

Quoted By: >>96522163

>>96521468
Thanks. You know, some randos in the last con I went to gave me some back pats. Even an old man who wasn't even an attendee, just a regular hotel guest of the venue. I should give myself more slack. I almost went from being "literally who" to "I thought I saw your stuff online once". Sometimes, we get too hard on ourselves.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 00:41:22 No.96522152 Report

Quoted By: >>96522303 >>96522324

I don't have the exact colors on hand, but here you are Mister Coldfusion

I was gonna include a little bit of nip but it seemed out of place

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 00:41:48 No.96522163 Report

Quoted By:

>>96522021
If you ask me, the best attitude is not to care whether you're a literally who or not. Nor should you get a swollen head if you become a bigshot. Your self-worth needs to derive from something more reliable.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 00:48:51 No.96522298 Report

Quoted By:

>>96519334
I don't think you are the alpha and omega for deciding what is the "right reason".

Some people have fun creating something that becomes popular. I personally wouldn't draw if nobody looked at it. Having a following is half my fun.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 00:49:16 No.96522303 Report

Quoted By:

>>96522152
EEE so cute!!! The hair shinies are particularly lovely. This is just alternate universe Hel where her hair is more like her dad's.
I've got a couple bits of fanart with some nip here and there, I just don't know what I'd do if I got straight up porn. I guess I'd just link to it on paheal (there is one there but it's hardly porn)
Puttin' on the fanart page right now!

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 00:50:22 No.96522324 Report

Quoted By: >>96522514

>>96522152
oh also what are we calling you again? I don't remember if you ever used a name.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 00:59:58 No.96522514 Report

Quoted By: >>96522819

>>96522324
Lavenderstarchild/attention whore/BRONX, you know, whatever you want.
I'm probably never gonna put on a tripcode though.

I'm also looking to practice lewds tonight, so request away

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 01:14:14 No.96522819 Report

Quoted By: >>96522912

>>96522514
I've spent too long on /co/, all I can think about is fanart of various currently-popular cartoons. Fuck that, 70s anime. Draw some Cutey Honey why don't you

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 01:18:47 No.96522912 Report

Quoted By: >>96522990 >>96523273

>>96522819
Is that a request or are you heckling me?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 01:20:01 No.96522947 Report

Quoted By:

I need to think out loud. Next chapter, which will be big, I'm going to introduce a character that's basically shoehorned in because my cast is small and scattered. A female butler. The MC doesn't have much girls to talk to that's around "her" (heh) 'age' (double heh). It kinda conflicts with another character that shows up in the same chapter, a synthetic maid. But unlike the butler, the maid wouldn't be a left-field addition. I've got a whole year to think about how I'll handle this addition.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 01:21:32 No.96522990 Report

Quoted By:

>>96522912
I was heckling my own uncreative and overly-limited requests for lewds, suggesting I ought to expand and play to your strengths
I just look at your art and I wanna see all the best girls from that era. Gunsmith Cats, Gall Force, erryone

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 01:22:10 No.96523004 Report

Quoted By: >>96523141 >>96524843

inb4 CF starts begging attention whore anon to be his waifu

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 01:23:52 No.96523037 Report

Quoted By: >>96524843

I actually managed to get Murata to draw my comic

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 01:28:20 No.96523139 Report

Quoted By:

>>96520866
draw my mushroom

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 01:28:26 No.96523141 Report

Quoted By: >>96523350 >>96524843

>>96523004
In my fucking dreams. And don't pretend I'm not in good company. I was one of several in her introductory thread not-so-subtly testing the waifu waters. But just because she's tops doesn't mean begging is on the menu. We're all big boys. And we're also aware of how dumbarrassing it can be (for her especially) when that kind of shit happens in threads. you pull that thread, you end up with "don't reveal you're a girl!" policies.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 01:29:14 No.96523159 Report

Quoted By: >>96523175

AU where Parker is a morally corrupt degenerate

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 01:29:50 No.96523175 Report

Quoted By: >>96524843

>>96523159
Where'd I put my 3d glasses

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 01:31:36 No.96523218 Report

Quoted By: >>96523266 >>96533416 >>96533630

I've been wanting to get this story about child knights off the ground for forever but I realized I'm not sure how to make sword fights interesting in a "Panel with storybook text underneath" format.
Also rate my art

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 01:33:35 No.96523266 Report

Quoted By:

>>96523218
That's roughly the best way to do it, I think. They remind me of miis. You've just gotta work on the geometry so they look more even

gloryhol anon

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gloryhol anon Sun 05 Nov 2017 01:33:52 No.96523273 Report

Quoted By: >>96523306 >>96524388 >>96524922

>>96522912
draw them doing things.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 01:35:03 No.96523306 Report

Quoted By: >>96523368

>>96523273
Have you changed the dudes' designs lately? They seem to have kind of different facial proportions. More distinct now, I think.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 01:35:57 No.96523333 Report

Quoted By: >>96524435 >>96524469

>mfw I noticed every single character in my comic are white

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 01:36:35 No.96523350 Report

Quoted By: >>96523603 >>96524843 >>96543607 >>96543680

>>96523141
>And we're also aware of how dumbarrassing it can be (for her especially) when that kind of shit happens in threads.
We all know how embarrassing it was when you did it on discord

gloryhol anon

gloryhol anon Sun 05 Nov 2017 01:37:14 No.96523368 Report

Quoted By:

>>96523306
I tried to make them look more defined, yeah

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 01:37:27 No.96523377 Report

Quoted By: >>96523783

>it's the weekend
>have free time
>don't work on your comic and play video games all day and only take breaks for eating

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 01:37:33 No.96523383 Report

Quoted By: >>96523745

so this one time I read a beautiful line in GGZ and felt it necessary to put it on my characters, but I didn't post it here. I feel the need to post something so here you go

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 01:45:35 No.96523603 Report

Quoted By: >>96523852

>>96523350
If that's embarrassing, what would you call continuing to float said raft?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 01:50:43 No.96523745 Report

Quoted By:

>>96523383
That's definitely Woolsey-tier dialogue

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 01:51:16 No.96523769 Report

Quoted By: >>96523838 >>96526444

I got a cover idea for my webcomic can I get some criticism

Strawdud

Strawdud Sun 05 Nov 2017 01:51:57 No.96523783 Report

Quoted By: >>96523804

>>96523377
Are you me?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 01:52:43 No.96523804 Report

Quoted By:

>>96523783
No!

Yes.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 01:53:52 No.96523838 Report

Quoted By:

>>96523769
I would certainly watch the adventures of Goth Kunoichi Chibiusa and Oni Steven Universe as they deliver pizzas and fight monsters

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 01:54:35 No.96523852 Report

Quoted By:

>>96523603
>implying there's nothing embarrassing and uncomfortable to state you're attracted to a kid 13 years younger than yourself in a public discord
w e w

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 01:55:52 No.96523892 Report

Quoted By: >>96523958

>>96517727
Yeah people are shitting on you harder than you need to be shit on, but you need to stop making excuses in text. There's no face to save on an anonym-
oh you're
youre tripfagging.

oh.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 01:58:41 No.96523958 Report

Quoted By: >>96524006 >>96524019

>>96523892
Can you imagine how confusing this kind of discourse would be if everyone stayed anonymous?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:00:39 No.96524006 Report

Quoted By: >>96524054

>>96523958
Imagine a /hyw/ without such retards like cf, dewd, and bones running around, where there wasn't any discourse at all.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:01:03 No.96524019 Report

Quoted By:

>>96523958
>Argument happens
>A post exclaims an earlier post "wasn't me"
>Chaos ensues
It's easer to walk away anonymously

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:02:23 No.96524040 Report

Quoted By: >>96524079 >>96524085 >>96524149 >>96524759

Do we really have to keep talking about CF's inability to behave like a normal decent person in literally every thread?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:02:54 No.96524054 Report

Quoted By:

>>96524006
Bones doesn't cause discourse, Bones is the kind of spirit you should embrace because he's too wild to tame

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:03:59 No.96524079 Report

Quoted By: >>96524149

>>96524040
>normal
>decent
pick one

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:04:10 No.96524085 Report

Quoted By: >>96524149

>>96524040
maybe if CF stopped posting in these threads the problem would cease

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:07:29 No.96524149 Report

Quoted By: >>96524202

>>96524085
>>96524079
>>96524040
Eh, coldfusion is a good bumper to our threads. So, he is useful.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:10:02 No.96524186 Report

Quoted By:

>>96513181
I like it

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:10:41 No.96524202 Report

Quoted By:

>>96524149
Why do you think bumping is a good thing? A dead thread or none at all is better than one flooded with shitposts, as is this one

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:14:03 No.96524280 Report

Quoted By:

>>96520729
How the fuck do you market, though? I've had a very modest presence online for a long, long time but I gaining followers is incredibly hard unless you're oustanding.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:18:29 No.96524388 Report

Quoted By: >>96524816

>>96523273
Damn it's been a minute since I've been in one of these threads, you've improved.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:20:35 No.96524435 Report

Quoted By:

>>96523333
Why would you want it any other way?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:21:43 No.96524469 Report

Quoted By:

>>96523333
>Accidentally asian'd early on
>all set

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:32:23 No.96524728 Report

Quoted By: >>96524793

reminder that spending hours and hours on a single panel is borderline retarded. i don't care how nice the panel looks and how proud of it you are. the reader's eyes will be on for 5 seconds tops

never forgot this, it'll save your life

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:33:25 No.96524759 Report

Quoted By: >>96524821

>>96524040
he has a secret lover so probably not

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:34:50 No.96524793 Report

Quoted By:

>>96524728
agreed, unless it's one big huge splash panel

gloryhol anon

gloryhol anon Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:35:52 No.96524816 Report

Quoted By:

>>96524388
thanks dude

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:36:04 No.96524821 Report

Quoted By: >>96525812

>>96524759
Holy shit, I do? Fuck, figures it'd be a secret even from me. Can I get a hint?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:36:37 No.96524843 Report

Quoted By: >>96524883 >>96524924 >>96524975 >>96530224 >>96531218 >>96533568 >>96533900

>>96523004
Oof, no. I don't consider myself waifu material but maybe that anon who called me out a few threads back can be the judge of that. I alternate between being a spaghetti spilling, lonely, romance craving shut in and a Mimi Marquez stereotype who'll probably get married for tax purposes
>>96523037
Oh shit, that's dope Anon
>>96523141
I mean months and months ago on here people knew I was a girl just because my art style is feminine. Pretending to be a guy won't work, so why bother, you know? Everyone is here is respectful, this really is genuinely nice community. Were you really considering me as a waifu back that? That's kinda suspect
>>96523175
You need 3-D glasses to fuck an eye socket?
>>96523350
Double oof. Sorry Coldfusion, I'm staying away from guys in their 30s.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:37:55 No.96524879 Report

Quoted By: >>96525190

New topic, I'm shit at panel layout what kind of resources do the anons recommend ?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:38:11 No.96524883 Report

Quoted By: >>96525088

>>96524843
Absolutely disgusting attention whore post holy shit. Why are all women online such attention sluts?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:39:40 No.96524922 Report

Quoted By: >>96524975 >>96525141

>>96523273
Gotchu

As always, please roast my anatomy so I can improve

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:39:46 No.96524924 Report

Quoted By: >>96525088

>>96524843
You do realize that is the definition of our ideal waifu. How could we be with anything but a fellow spaghetti-spiller who is lonely and wants gushy romants?
I looked up this Marquez woman and I'm not familiar with her stereotype but she's pretty I guess

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:40:59 No.96524959 Report

Quoted By: >>96524998 >>96525066

So I finished uploading my webcomic to tumblr with navigation, buttons and shit
https://utsukishirosaura.tumblr.com/post/167137490344/part-1-cover
Also you can visit my regular tumblr for other art if you are interested
https://misssandy8.tumblr.com/
If I remember correctly somebody owes me a fanart

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:41:35 No.96524975 Report

Quoted By: >>96525001 >>96525011

>>96524843
It's a cold, lonely world. I prefer people just laying all their shit out on the table. Makes things a lot simpler.
women have mostly considered me eew-too-old since I was 16. Oh well
>>96524922
Wooo good ol' Honey. Love those shiny pants.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:42:44 No.96524998 Report

Quoted By: >>96525074

>>96524959
Damn straight. I'll go ahead and start reading it, and when I'm done you'll get some fanart. Stick around the threads and I might not be the only one.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:42:58 No.96525001 Report

Quoted By: >>96525293

>>96524975
Post a photo of you so I can have a look if you're too eww-old looking.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:43:27 No.96525011 Report

Quoted By:

>>96524975
I think they just considered you "ew"

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:46:05 No.96525066 Report

Quoted By: >>96525094 >>96525150

>>96524959
How about you get actual blank paper?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:46:45 No.96525074 Report

Quoted By:

>>96524998
cool, meanwhile I'll go to sleep because it's like 4 am in my country

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:47:13 No.96525088 Report

Quoted By: >>96525116

>>96524883
Could be worse. Could be one of those threads where a male anon mass replies to everyone about fucked up situations and fetishes,like that one anon whose niece saw Gravity Falls porn on his laptop and he got pissed at her for being "a bitch and ratting (him) out"
>>96524924
She's a character from Rent. She's dancer at a club and is all about living in the now and having fun with friends. I think she's from Harlem, so sort of Bronx.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:47:28 No.96525094 Report

Quoted By:

>>96525066
>Squint
wow I didn't notice the grid lines, but.. yeah that's really... did you not have any normal paper? they have blank paper in Poland, right?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:47:48 No.96525100 Report

Quoted By: >>96525295

What are the WRONG reasons to make your main character a female?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:48:31 No.96525116 Report

Quoted By:

>>96525088
Ah, I can see why that would be undesirable. You're either into spaghetti waifu or social butterfly club dancers. Not usually both

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:49:36 No.96525141 Report

Quoted By:

>>96524922
It's the neck it's really slender while the rest of the body looks more portioned

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:50:02 No.96525150 Report

Quoted By: >>96525171

>>96525066
The grid is there for reason. I have astigmatism aka eye autism.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:51:06 No.96525171 Report

Quoted By: >>96525210

>>96525150
Interesting, how does that help? I have astigmatism, if there's something clever I've been missing out on...

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:51:31 No.96525187 Report

Quoted By:

people who make webcomics are autism. full stop.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:51:34 No.96525190 Report

Quoted By:

>>96524879
Looks pretty decent to me

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:52:33 No.96525210 Report

Quoted By: >>96525245

>>96525171
it helps with angles

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:54:22 No.96525245 Report

Quoted By:

>>96525210
Oh yeah I suppose it would. I often notice my drawings slanting off to the side without my wanting them to. I'm not sure how the paper would help though, since the paper itself can be tilted. Also, that's not what astigmatism means. The 'stig is when your eyes are the wrong length so the focused image shows up and the retina is either like "yo, over here. i'm back here" or "yo, back up, you're trying to project behind me"

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:56:26 No.96525293 Report

Quoted By: >>96525381 >>96525520

>>96525001
>Cmon, you're not going to fall for that are you?
>But what if it's a cute girl asking, and she likes guys with beards?
>You've embarrassed yourself enough times
>But all the stuff on my face is the right size and shape and in proportion!
>No. no photos on 4chan.
>Not even /soc/?
>Maaybe /soc/. But not with tripcode on.
>You're lucky I don't have a camera phone
talked it over with the giraffe and the rectangle on my shoulders. Gonna decline this time.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:56:26 No.96525295 Report

Quoted By: >>96525471

>>96525100
You think of them as a girl first and a character second. If they’re well rounded and have a good arc you’ll do fine, but if she’s just there to fill a slot she’ll just be a burden on an otherwise strong plot IMO.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 02:59:23 No.96525381 Report

Quoted By: >>96525483

>>96525293
>talked it over with the giraffe and the rectangle on my shoulders.
What the fuck are you trying to accomplish by acting like this? Are you autistic?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 03:01:58 No.96525471 Report

Quoted By: >>96526183

>>96525295
Hmm I'm not sure I understand. Like should her sex be ignored and brushed over?

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 03:02:15 No.96525483 Report

Quoted By: >>96525530 >>96525965 >>96526112

>>96525381
Weren't you listening? I'm very funny and good at jokes.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 03:03:22 No.96525520 Report

Quoted By:

>>96525293
coldfusion if you got a personality people might actually like you

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 03:03:41 No.96525530 Report

Quoted By:

>>96525483
>I'm very funny and good at jokes.

Strawdud

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Strawdud Sun 05 Nov 2017 03:04:16 No.96525557 Report

Quoted By: >>96526192 >>96529665

Actually almost done. About time too. It's almost been a month.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 03:05:00 No.96525580 Report

Quoted By: >>96525611 >>96525617

>>96507802
Link to the discord?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 03:05:56 No.96525611 Report

Quoted By: >>96544462

>>96525580
https://discord.gg/rXMbdqP

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 03:06:13 No.96525617 Report

Quoted By: >>96525751

>>96525580
yeah, link us to this discord so we can see how bad it is

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 03:10:30 No.96525751 Report

Quoted By:

>>96525617
it's better than the threads, which isn't saying much though

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 03:12:16 No.96525812 Report

Quoted By: >>96525845

>>96524821
the anon always giving you shit all day every day

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 03:13:32 No.96525845 Report

Quoted By: >>96525986

>>96525812
That's half the thread, though

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 03:17:54 No.96525965 Report

Quoted By:

>>96525483
You're an unfunny manchild.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 03:18:42 No.96525986 Report

Quoted By:

>>96525845
I'm ever so loved
but still not quite holding a candle to my previous main squeeze, the adventure time drawthreads. they gave me a FULL on roasting. imitation art, the whole schlemazel.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 03:22:54 No.96526112 Report

Quoted By: >>96526243

>>96525483
Can you at least post the audio sample of your radio voice? I remember being genuinely surprised you had an amazing voice

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 03:25:05 No.96526183 Report

Quoted By:

>>96525471
Not at all, it can still be an important part of her! Well it's about bad characters in general. Bad characters tend to be defined by the other characters. A lot of female characters end up being written based off of what the rest of the cast is already doing. Whether it's to be the sidelined princess or the obnoxious bitch they're reactive instead of proactive. A good protagonist is proactive. She can be feminine, just don't let it literally define your character.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 03:25:21 No.96526192 Report

Quoted By: >>96527109

>>96525557
Please explain, how you make those textures.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 03:26:39 No.96526243 Report

Quoted By:

>>96526112
Shit yeah. Oddly enough everyone who hates me always starts liking me when they hear me talk.
Uhh is Audioboo still up? They're saying they're gonna start charging money but let's see
yeah it's still there. https://audioboom.com/users/155390/posts
Most of this is a couple years old and just dumb requests on /co/

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 03:32:52 No.96526444 Report

Quoted By: >>96531293

>>96523769
so steven universe and roxie richter now work together in the pizza delivery...

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 03:44:19 No.96526818 Report

Quoted By:

>>96519232
http://character-limit-blog.tumblr.com

Here you go.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 03:47:13 No.96526924 Report

Quoted By: >>96527224

>tfw have scripts for a comic but cant draw a stinking shit.

Strawdud

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Strawdud Sun 05 Nov 2017 03:52:37 No.96527109 Report

Quoted By:

>>96526192
I select the default hatch_noisy brush and use it.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 03:55:42 No.96527224 Report

Quoted By: >>96527327 >>96528055

>>96526924
Could be worse anon...

If you can save up some money I would recommend hiring an artist. You might even make a new friend!

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 03:59:11 No.96527327 Report

Quoted By: >>96527416

>>96527224
but artists hate writers

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 04:01:49 No.96527416 Report

Quoted By: >>96527520

>>96527327
correction, artists hate writers who don't pay them and don't know how to write for comics

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 04:04:49 No.96527520 Report

Quoted By:

>>96527416
Oooh, i understand now

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 04:07:00 No.96527591 Report

Quoted By: >>96527737 >>96528241 >>96529359

Character lineup
Rate and critique

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 04:08:19 No.96527639 Report

Quoted By: >>96533608

I like the tall stacked one

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 04:11:41 No.96527737 Report

Quoted By: >>96528948 >>96529056

>>96527591
dude you have serious sameface going on, and even worse, samey silhouettes. these characters look way too similar to each other, not to be you really need to go back to the drawing board and look into the principles of character design some more

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 04:14:05 No.96527799 Report

Quoted By: >>96527989

>>96520866
thanks for nothing

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 04:19:45 No.96527989 Report

Quoted By:

>>96527799
?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 04:21:20 No.96528055 Report

Quoted By: >>96528727 >>96535114

>>96527224
How much would it cost anyway?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 04:26:06 No.96528241 Report

Quoted By: >>96529056

>>96527591
You should change them a bit so we can get a little inisght to their character. A wizard hat isn’t really enough. Stuff like bags of scrolls, bandages, straw hats, larger body sizes, and scars would help all the kids stand out from one another. Things to make one kid look tougher than the others and some glasses to make one look smarter. Hell you can even subvert expectations but a little personality goes a long way.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 04:42:54 No.96528727 Report

Quoted By: >>96535114 >>96543844

>>96528055
Mine was willing to work for $40 but it’s really about what you want and need. I hired my artist on reddit (the only time I was ever on that site) after making a post looking for artists.

It’s more of a partnership now. Just be honest with your budget and someone will come forward. If you’re investing even as low as just $5 a page it’ll help you stand out from hundreds of other writers. It shows that you genuinely believe in your script.

Also remember that you can also split the profits and use that as a way to get an artist interested. Just don’t make the promise of pay all you have to offer.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 04:51:14 No.96528948 Report

Quoted By:

>>96527737
Interesting exercise to make me see my characters in a new way, thank you.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 04:54:35 No.96529056 Report

Quoted By:

>>96527737
Also did one for sameface.
>>96528241
I get it, it's the accessories that make the character.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:04:55 No.96529359 Report

Quoted By: >>96529551

>>96527591
I might be in the minority in saying the consistent designs are just fine, I'll be able to tell them apart by hair color
Except apparently some characters change hair color and in one case eye color. Unless that represents past and present self and doesn't go back and forth with frequent flashbacks, it'll be confusing

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:10:18 No.96529513 Report

Quoted By: >>96529751 >>96532735 >>96535076 >>96540587

shitty comci that i made

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:11:31 No.96529551 Report

Quoted By: >>96529601

>>96529359
Nah, the child ones that look the most similar are related. Or at least the ones I intended to look similar.
The four adults are two characters in past and present.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:12:30 No.96529571 Report

Quoted By: >>96529756

>thought i had done a huge amount of worldbuilding
>decide to put it all in a wiki
>turns out i haven't done very much worldbuilding at all, and much of what i thought i'd done can't yet be written because i haven't done other necessary groundwork. (i.e. some characters are planned surprisingly in depth, but still don't have a settled name.)
ah yes

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:13:38 No.96529601 Report

Quoted By:

>>96529551
Alright then like I said, as long as there aren't constant flashbacks, it should be okay going by color

Strawdud

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Strawdud Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:16:15 No.96529665 Report

Quoted By: >>96529756 >>96529766 >>96529968 >>96531276

>>96525557
...AAAAaaaaaand done. I'm going to give it a look over tomorrow with fresher eyes, but I should be done with the comic.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:19:33 No.96529751 Report

Quoted By: >>96541838

>>96529513
On related note, I'm making an urban fantasy+paranormal comic

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:19:47 No.96529756 Report

Quoted By:

>>96529571
Nothing quite as annoying as trying to write a script without knowing a character's name yet
>>96529665
Wooo! It was great. I'm looking forward to catching up, because part of me thinks the whole thing could have just ended with the DEBT! punchline

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:20:28 No.96529766 Report

Quoted By:

>>96529665
>that was the punchline

Strawdud

Strawdud Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:29:56 No.96529968 Report

Quoted By:

>>96529665
I'm probably going to change the ending a bit. I was going to have Merchant name Pike because she can't tell him her name, so he just gives her the name as joke for breaking his pike.

I also just want to end the comic on page 60.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:41:45 No.96530224 Report

Quoted By: >>96530338

>>96524843
>I'm staying away from guys in their 30s.
but..wisdom comes with age..

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:47:08 No.96530338 Report

Quoted By: >>96531218

>>96530224
I had all the same wisdom when I was young, plus youthful health and energy. There is literally no reason to date me if younger-me is available.
He's not, but still. that's going to be hanging over any relationship I ever actually have.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:05:56 No.96530790 Report

Quoted By: >>96532761 >>96533671

When will coldfusion learn?

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:09:49 No.96530891 Report

Quoted By: >>96531088 >>96531176

Hey unrelated to previous post but before gwin to bed, I just wanted to post my got dang fanart page now that it has updated
http://kiwidayn.comicgenesis.com/fanart.html and just point out that I have so much wonderful, gorgeous fanart that it just about lags a browser to death and I really need to rig up some thumbnails.. and that fact just humbles and puts me to shame at the same time.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:18:30 No.96531088 Report

Quoted By: >>96531147

>>96530891
My favorite thing is how almost every piece of fanart looks more appealing than the actual comic.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:21:16 No.96531147 Report

Quoted By:

>>96531088
whatchu mean 'almost'?
That's what I meant by the 'puts me to shame' part.
I know I have felt urges from time to time to draw fanart of less-appealingly-drawn but well-designed characters from cartoons and some comics, as if to 'fix' them.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:22:25 No.96531176 Report

Quoted By: >>96531223 >>96531237 >>96532761

>>96530891
You get off on grinding our gears don't you boy???? Im curious but do you have a significant other? someone in your life? Are you sexually active?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:24:15 No.96531218 Report

Quoted By:

>>96524843
>>96530338
>I had all the same wisdom when I was young
>When I was young

Okay hold on, how old are you exactly?

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:24:26 No.96531223 Report

Quoted By: >>96531272

>>96531176
What? I don't.. wanna grind anyone's gears
how many times do I have to unsubtly post about being unhappily single and alone before you pick up on it?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:24:55 No.96531237 Report

Quoted By:

>>96531176
no one here should be sexually active, fuck off normie REEE

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:26:22 No.96531272 Report

Quoted By: >>96531306

>>96531223
You need some bro god damnit you need some. Get out there 30 is the new 20!!!

Strawdud

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Strawdud Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:26:34 No.96531276 Report

Quoted By: >>96531328 >>96532368

>>96529665
Going for pg 60. I guess I'm not done.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:27:28 No.96531293 Report

Quoted By:

>>96526444
You know my influences too well anon

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:28:06 No.96531306 Report

Quoted By: >>96531334

>>96531272
I certainly assumed it would be, based on how well my parents aged, but I took some pills that fucked up my chemistry pretty badly and never recovered.
Just live with heartburn, people. that's my PSA. Don't fuck with your acid pumps.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:29:10 No.96531328 Report

Quoted By: >>96531382

>>96531276
wait wait what if the punchline is she points to the pike, and merchant is like ah yes of course
and then assumes a name that's comically incorrect

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:29:23 No.96531334 Report

Quoted By: >>96531514

>>96531306
>fucked up my chemistry pretty badly and never recovered.
the fuck? how did heartburn pills fuck you up?

Strawdud

Strawdud Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:32:02 No.96531382 Report

Quoted By: >>96531527

>>96531328
I don't have the set-up for it. It would have worked in the dungeon, but now that they're outside and the pike is absent, I can't do it.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:38:35 No.96531514 Report

Quoted By: >>96531553 >>96531596

>>96531334
It turns out they shut off more glands than just the acid ones.
They give this cimetidine/tagamet shit to men with prostate issues when it's time to either kill your libido or write your will. Why they're still allowed to sell it I don't know. The warning was in absolutely microscopic text.
Regardless, I've had a real fun six year journey finding out just how many bodily functions are glandular, wondering why it hasn't worn off, wishing doctors would help, uh.. some of you may remember when my cataracts got really bad and I couldn't see subtle dark colors against black backgrounds. turns out hormones are involved in keeping your lenses clear. Got fake lenses now.
If I can keep even one person from taking the same shit though, I guess that's worth it. better me than you. I was never going to amount to anything.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:39:39 No.96531527 Report

Quoted By:

>>96531382
nearby stream, with a pike (fish) leaping out of it? I guess that's too esoteric

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:40:56 No.96531553 Report

Quoted By: >>96531681 >>96531766

>>96531514
how the FUCK did you get cataracts at 30 years old? and how many pills did you take? is this why you're such a soy boy?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:42:52 No.96531596 Report

Quoted By:

>>96531514
>I was never going to amount to anything.
Well, can't argue with that

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:46:53 No.96531681 Report

Quoted By: >>96531766 >>96531773 >>96531807

>>96531553
I had the genetic precursor for them already, but like I just kind of explained, the pills shut off the production of the hormones that keep lenses from clouding up. Basically it's given me the glandular system of a crappy old man. I took the shit for 2 weeks and the effect was evidently permanent. Hypothyroidism, the whole lot.
>soy boy
I dunno what you're talkin about. I'm probably the meat-eatin'est bible-huggin'est sasquatch around these parts. I just feel like shit now and never have energy, and all my copious and glorious hair is falling out. This isn't really difficult need-a-phD-to-understand medical shit here.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:50:58 No.96531766 Report

Quoted By: >>96531841

>>96531553
>>96531681
Soy is actually a bad idea for men, particularly with hormone issues. The jury is still somewhat out on the effects of phytoestrogens, but it doesn't look good.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:51:10 No.96531773 Report

Quoted By: >>96531864 >>96532116

>>96531681
What are you into anyways? I take it your not gay

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:52:25 No.96531807 Report

Quoted By:

>>96531681
Your art isn't very good

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:53:55 No.96531841 Report

Quoted By: >>96531864

>>96531766
>tfw chink
>tfw manlet twink
>tfw soy is a huge part of my diet and culture
this explains everything, but it's probably too late for me

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:55:20 No.96531864 Report

Quoted By: >>96532002

>>96531773
You lookin' to set me up? We can talk on Discord maybe. I'm not too proud for that.
>>96531841
Yeah but you're gonna live for fucking ever. gas-inefficient SUVs like me don't quite make it to 200,000 miles.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:55:38 No.96531873 Report

Quoted By: >>96531902 >>96533689

>>96506725
>been trting ctrl+f "webc" for webcomic since last thread
>find this by chance
Nice
>look through it
>literally /cf/, the ColdFusion general
Do we really have nothing else to talk about?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:57:02 No.96531902 Report

Quoted By: >>96532021 >>96532056

>>96531873
I did the same thing. Chances are a lot of others did too, that's why somewhat empty.
I hope people on the discord fill each other in when this sort of thing happens, or about threads in general.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:58:23 No.96531932 Report

Quoted By: >>96531954 >>96531965 >>96531982 >>96531988

not really comics but did some weird reaction drawings tonite

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:59:01 No.96531954 Report

Quoted By:

>>96531932
>when coldfusion asks you out on a date

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 05:59:31 No.96531965 Report

Quoted By: >>96531982

>>96531932

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 07:00:16 No.96531982 Report

Quoted By:

>>96531932
love it
>>96531965
You could make a whole little game out of these or something

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 07:00:23 No.96531988 Report

Quoted By: >>96532051

>>96531932
Where can I find your art?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 07:01:18 No.96532002 Report

Quoted By: >>96532029

>>96531864
I don't know alot of little girls and my nieces aren't to big on the dating scene right now.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 07:02:09 No.96532021 Report

Quoted By: >>96532050

>>96531902
In our offense, we could have made a thread ourselves between now and then. But I was too lazy for that.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 07:02:40 No.96532029 Report

Quoted By:

>>96532002
oh you

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 07:03:47 No.96532050 Report

Quoted By: >>96532077

>>96532021
I'm not sure how the mods would have liked that
In any case, we'll have a new one sometime tomorrow I bet. Whether we choose to call it #419 or #420 is up to whoever does it.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 07:03:47 No.96532051 Report

Quoted By: >>96532069 >>96532078

>>96531988
http://laserwing.tumblr.com/ mostly
http://veryimportantsparkles.tumblr.com/ also
http://popkas.tumblr.com/ as well

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 07:03:59 No.96532056 Report

Quoted By: >>96532116

>>96531902
We only talk about the threads to shit talk them and laugh when drama goes down. Personally, I'm disappointed with how much CF we've had in this thread without any loli-mesustration tier shit coming out of it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 07:04:32 No.96532069 Report

Quoted By:

>>96532051
Thanks

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 07:04:49 No.96532077 Report

Quoted By:

>>96532050
>#420
roll em up boys

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 07:04:50 No.96532078 Report

Quoted By:

>>96532051
Ooh you're trying a new style out. I love it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 07:06:15 No.96532116 Report

Quoted By: >>96532767

>>96532056
It's almost like most of that is overblown or made up.
Every time I see a screencap it's like... yes, and?
>>96531773
Obviously women with no filter who are always talking about their periods.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 07:10:55 No.96532204 Report

Quoted By: >>96532222

>>96521118
Don't use doll bases or whatever crap, man. Draw real people.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 07:12:33 No.96532222 Report

Quoted By: >>96532298 >>96532350

>>96532204
Hey I said it was an abomination and I recognized it had flaws, what do you want from me?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 07:16:19 No.96532298 Report

Quoted By: >>96532350

>>96532222
leaving the threads is a good start

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 07:20:07 No.96532350 Report

Quoted By: >>96532384

>>96532222
Just understand that you need more practice. Draw. More. People. Different angles, different poses. Understand the meanings and movements behind musculature and especially spinal curvature. Basically just keep drawing what you see until you get it.

Also >>96532298

Just draw and study, stop saying dumb shit here.

Strawdud

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Strawdud Sun 05 Nov 2017 07:21:18 No.96532368 Report

Quoted By: >>96532411 >>96540018

>>96531276
I'm going to have to finish this in the morning

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 07:22:10 No.96532384 Report

Quoted By: >>96532832 >>96532952 >>96543293

>>96532350
it's a deal
>spinal curvature
my current nemesis. Been working on realistic slump. Next step is getting a good 'ready for action' spine where it's bent backward but kind of forward again. You know?
>leaving
dude not even bragging or anything but in case you haven't noticed I kind of -am- the threads.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 07:23:13 No.96532411 Report

Quoted By:

>>96532368
Oh that's clever. Surprised that didn't come up before

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 07:40:47 No.96532735 Report

Quoted By:

>>96529513
if you've got a problem with appreciating little girls then you've got a problem with me

other than that great stuff. do more

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 07:42:33 No.96532761 Report

Quoted By: >>96532884

>>96530790
>>96531176
This is your obsessor, Coldfusion
Call them pretty or something

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 07:43:04 No.96532767 Report

Quoted By:

>>96532116
>It's almost like most of that is overblown or made up.
Almost, but not quite. You'd be singing a different tune if this wasn't a blue board.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 07:47:49 No.96532832 Report

Quoted By:

>>96532384
>I kind of -am- the threads.
can't really argue with this, he's probably 35% of this thread, and that's lowballing it

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 07:51:49 No.96532884 Report

Quoted By: >>96532909

>>96532761
I just get tired of seeing him not change

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 07:53:18 No.96532909 Report

Quoted By:

>>96532884
I get tired of seeing him in general.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 07:55:48 No.96532952 Report

Quoted By:

>>96532384
>dude not even bragging or anything
(You)

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE

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Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Sun 05 Nov 2017 08:20:18 No.96533344 Report

Quoted By:

>>96520866
/HYW/ is pretty much a casual care free do whatever thread already.

If you like magical girls you might like drawing Alice, the original magical girl of the Capeworld setting. Heir to the Croatoan empire, the descendant of New England Puritans whisked away to the magical world of Croatoan, teacher of Japan's taiyo shojo-women with magical powers stemming from when the goddess Amaterasu bled over the country during WW2 and tinted the souls of several women with her divine blood.

In the setting's present she's a kind old lady looking to train a successor, but she's been a lot of things throughout her life-a teacher, a crime fighter, a general.

You can read about her in the Magical Woman short comic and its accompanying text story Shika in Croatoan.

http://www.capeworldcomics.com/chapter/magical-woman/

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Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Sun 05 Nov 2017 08:27:04 No.96533416 Report

Quoted By:

>>96523218
>Not sure how to make swordfights interesting.

Have it all be about the poses and what they mean. Don't try to draw the fight. Try to draw a symbol of the fight.

Take the big Arthur vs Mordred fight. It's pretty simple on the surface. Arthur has a spear, Mordred has a sword. Arthur spears Mordred, Mordred kills Arthur. But the symbolism goes a long way and that's why so many artists have done the fight-Arthur not using Excaliber, Arthur getting in the first strike, Mordred killing Arthur with his dying breathe even as he loses, if you're going to depict a fight in one scene this is how you want to do it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 08:44:49 No.96533568 Report

Quoted By: >>96533620 >>96533900 >>96539631

>>96524843
>Mimi Marquez
>Comparing yourself to a stripper junkie with HIV

Well shit. I guess there's something to be said for honesty but shit.

So you're bipolar? My mom's bipolar.

>Staying away from guys in their 30's

Just remember how sexual marketplace value works for men and women. Men steadily rise while women peak early and then once they hit the wall.

gloryhol anon

gloryhol anon Sun 05 Nov 2017 08:47:44 No.96533608 Report

Quoted By:

>>96527639
aww she looks adorable!

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 08:48:50 No.96533620 Report

Quoted By: >>96533658

>>96533568
>Men steadily rise while women peak early and then once they hit the wall.
keep telling yourself that, grandpa

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 08:49:52 No.96533630 Report

Quoted By:

>>96523218
By putting cute girls in it and have them do the fighting, complete with fanservice shots.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 08:53:03 No.96533658 Report

Quoted By: >>96533695

>>96533620
>Saying this with a straight face when there are countless examples of crusty old rich men plowing super models.

Men and women are both shallow in different ways. Men typically care a lot about looks (not that women don't as well, but its not as strong for women as it is for men) while Women care for resources.

So long as a guy doesn't fuck up and gets a good job that'll give him a gradually appreciating value as he ages his sexual marketplace value is gong to increase.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 08:55:02 No.96533671 Report

Quoted By:

>>96530790
Pedos typically have low self control and high impassivity.

So the answer is no. He will never learn.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 08:57:04 No.96533689 Report

Quoted By: >>96533700

>>96531873
>People are talking too much about Coldpedo
>Proceeds to post about Coldpedo

You are part of the problem. Talk about something else.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 08:57:49 No.96533695 Report

Quoted By:

>>96533658
>not that women don't as well, but its not as strong for women as it is for men
This is actually not true. It goes like this:
Men go for looks and lack of resources, women go for looks and resources.
t. human

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 08:58:38 No.96533700 Report

Quoted By: >>96533750

>>96533689
>Talk about something else.
Literally can't, there's nothing else TO talk about.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 09:00:04 No.96533711 Report

Quoted By: >>96533750

>you will never be the next Homestuck

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Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Sun 05 Nov 2017 09:04:23 No.96533750 Report

Quoted By: >>96533794 >>96534853

>>96533700
Well if I can throw my hat in the ring I'm always looking for feedback on my stuff at http://www.capeworldcomics.com/.

Or how about this. This week was the first week I've missed updating the site. My artist just got busy, and I've been working on scripts so I couldn't update Shika in Croatoan. Do you guys ever miss an update? Do you have any backup plans for missing an update? I know you should keep a buffer, but what if you don't have one?

>>96533711
Homestuck is hipster prolefeed. It makes money, but its hipster prolefeed. Take comfort in knowing that you will never be the next Homestuck. You will die with dignity.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 09:10:09 No.96533794 Report

Quoted By: >>96534016

>>96533750
I don't have a set schedule for updates. I have a job and I don't want making comics to feel like one.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 09:23:08 No.96533900 Report

Quoted By: >>96534097 >>96539631

>>96533568
>>96524843
any RENTfags here able to explain why the liked the characters at all? I found them all to be solipsistic entitled cunts. It's no one's fault but you're own that you're a jobless homeless degenerate druggie, how the fuck am I supposed to sympathize with these assholes? At least Sasuke had his whole family killed, and luffy's selfishness caused his mentor/hero to give up his arm for him, but it's like the writers for RENT felt we would automatically feel bad for them if they were AIDs ridden starving artists.

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Sun 05 Nov 2017 09:36:37 No.96534016 Report

Quoted By:

>>96533794
I can understand that. I'm the other way though. I want my comic to sort of feel like a job, because even if I can't one day turn this into a job I can use this to help me getting a job. This is something I can point to when I try to get a writing job and say this is my work, this is what I do.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 09:47:48 No.96534097 Report

Quoted By: >>96534489

>>96533900
>>>/a/

gloryhol anon

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gloryhol anon Sun 05 Nov 2017 10:46:07 No.96534489 Report

Quoted By: >>96534853 >>96534923

>>96534097
thread is dying, posting some wip

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 11:23:50 No.96534853 Report

Quoted By: >>96535028 >>96536443

>>96534489
Is that first page? What’s it about?

>>96533750
I really like the pages that show the superheroes off later down the line, but the caveman exposition machine is a bit heavy. It’s a lot to take in and at a point I’m not really invested in the story it’s hard to wade through.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 11:32:15 No.96534923 Report

Quoted By:

>>96534489
No, the thread begs for death. It doesn't ask for much, so we should give it what it wants just this once.

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Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Sun 05 Nov 2017 11:47:01 No.96535028 Report

Quoted By: >>96535040 >>96539219

>>96534853
Thanks for the feedback. I'm trying to cut down on the exposition in future pages, I recognize that's been one of my flaws. I'm hoping that it'll be easier to take in as a whole story where you see that all the talk about gods

I think I should have led in with the good guy and bad guy having their fight and then flashed back to everyone talking months earlier at the cavefire. I agree that the opening is pretty dry as is.

Glad you're liking the present stuff though. After Shika in Croatoan wraps up I'm going to do a story on the Statesmen about Deseret trying to form her own superhero team within the Statesmen and the hi-jinks that ensue from that.

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Sun 05 Nov 2017 11:48:54 No.96535040 Report

Quoted By:

>>96535028
...that all the talk about gods has a payoff in the characters and how they handle their superpowers.

I can't wait to power up the bad guy. He kills a mammoth with one punch (a creature he's feared his entire life) and wears its skull as armor with the tusks as arm mounted hook weapons. He's going to look awesome.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 11:54:07 No.96535076 Report

Quoted By: >>96535772

>>96529513
Dude! Where I can find you work? Its solid af.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 11:58:58 No.96535114 Report

Quoted By: >>96543844

>>96528055
I can confirm >>96528727.

I've been paying my artist $40 a page and got some high quality work back every single time. Just be sure to budget finances well, because you're looking at a cool 5k a year if it's a full time thing.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 13:16:07 No.96535772 Report

Quoted By: >>96535880

>>96535076
>solid work
well thanks but i don't really considered it good but here you go, bunch of half assed stuff here
https://hibikiwibee.tumblr.com/

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 13:30:23 No.96535880 Report

Quoted By: >>96535941

>>96535772
Dude are you from russia?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 13:36:20 No.96535941 Report

Quoted By: >>96536290

>>96535880
no, what gave you that thought ?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 14:18:41 No.96536290 Report

Quoted By:

>>96535941
I dunno, just had this feeling from first page. Weird.

gloryhol anon

gloryhol anon Sun 05 Nov 2017 14:34:56 No.96536443 Report

Quoted By:

>>96534853
i'm doing short horror comics, it's gonna be an anthology. I'm doing this because I wanted to stray away from my Gloryhol comic of mine

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 14:37:35 No.96536479 Report

Quoted By: >>96536574 >>96536761 >>96537510 >>96541205

If I'm allowed to make a suggestion for a new link to add to the list of resource, May I suggest: http://drawabox.com/

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 14:46:23 No.96536574 Report

Quoted By:

>>96536479
Nice link, thank you.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 15:05:23 No.96536761 Report

Quoted By:

>>96536479
stop shilling ISIS

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 15:58:58 No.96537510 Report

Quoted By:

>>96536479
>dude boxes LMAO
go home Nakamura

gloryhol anon

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gloryhol anon Sun 05 Nov 2017 17:29:39 No.96538933 Report

Quoted By: >>96541237

done with page one of my SPOOKY comic.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 17:36:59 No.96539064 Report

Quoted By:

>>96511675
Dave Sim's 25 year, 300 issue epic spent fewer panels and words on its epilogue than you have, and it was intentionally made to drag so you could feel the distortion of time at death.

I want you to think about that. You won't, but I want you to.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 17:46:07 No.96539219 Report

Quoted By:

>>96535028
See this? This is how you respond to criticism with grace.

Is Capeworld the anti-Coldfusion? Is he the best tripfag?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 18:07:45 No.96539551 Report

Quoted By:

let it die

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 18:13:15 No.96539631 Report

Quoted By: >>96540107 >>96541270

>>96533568
Off the top of my head I didn't have a different comparison, I just meant that "Out Tonight" probably describes me
Worse, BPD
I'm avoiding men in their 30s because I had a shit experience with an immature one. Made me realize going after older guys because I think they have more experience and are mature is stupid
>>96533900
I dunno, anon. My mom's a huge Broadway fan and I grew up on the soundtracks for Rent, The Lion King, Chicago, etc. I think the characters are flawed but interesting
>Tfw a homeless crossdresser and someone pays you $1000 to kill a dog
But really it's the music that keeps me. Like I said, Out Tonight is my getting ready song, and I tear up like a bitch at Will I. I see them as artists and assholes first and AIDS carriers second, because it's realistic to the time the story is set in.

Strawdud

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Strawdud Sun 05 Nov 2017 18:38:41 No.96540018 Report

Quoted By: >>96541270

>>96532368
Page 60 and done.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 18:40:31 No.96540046 Report

Quoted By:

>>96519038
>making a porn comic
>hentai
Unless it's furry the japs dominate the porn comic too much

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 18:44:41 No.96540107 Report

Quoted By: >>96540253

>>96539631
I'm a huge broadway fan too, but this is the only musical I've seen with such shitty characters. Flawed isn't the concern, the women in Chicago were all very flawed murderesses. Simba was a naive idiot (albeit a kid at the time), Wicked's Elphaba was a discriminated-against outcast, but none of them were written with this flimsy sense of expecting the audience to feel bad just because of their flaws. We sympathize with them for attempting to overcome their inner shortcomings. In Rent you're beaten over the head with how you should sympathize with these bums "fighting the man", yet it's their own irresponsible actions that led them to where they are. Despite their complaints about their circumstances, they seem focused on having fun instead of actually addressing their problems. There's no sense of real growth, just these pieces of shit bohemians who aren't even prolific in their respective artistic endeavors.

I'm not stone cold, there were parts that I could sympathize with, but overall I can't understand the hype this musical gets. It seems like more of a woman's musical though.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 18:53:56 No.96540253 Report

Quoted By:

>>96540107
Well to be honest the story really isn't that engaging. I just stick to the soundtrack and listen to the characters through the songs, maybe that's why I like it
I've heard it described as Hair for Gen Y/X/whatever, I guess the angsty art types growing up during the AIDS crisis, so I guess that makes sense
My mom is a hugeee fan though, was constantly going back in the 90s when the tickets were like $10. Used to stand outside afterwards for autographs. Every christmas we put on the soundtrack while decorating the tree, La Vie Boheme and Christmas Bells are our favorites to karaoke to

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 19:12:21 No.96540587 Report

Quoted By:

>>96529513
made me chuckle

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 19:44:35 No.96541205 Report

Quoted By:

>>96536479
that's not in there already?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 19:46:18 No.96541237 Report

Quoted By: >>96542084

>>96538933
I like her face a lot. It's a little inconsistent, but it's pretty and neat to look at. If this is a spooky comic then it'll be great watching her react dramatically to teh scares

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 19:47:49 No.96541270 Report

Quoted By: >>96541386

>>96539631
The sensible thing to do is pay attention to maturity and ignore numbers. It works in both directions.
>>96540018
did the writing still happen? This is super sweetles. Wasn't expecting this ending at all. Love it.

Strawdud

Strawdud Sun 05 Nov 2017 19:53:19 No.96541386 Report

Quoted By: >>96541667

>>96541270
https://tapas.io/series/Merchant--Pike

Uploaded.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 20:05:28 No.96541640 Report

Quoted By: >>96541710

My ideas so far

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oEa4yRVKq8fsDXZRWomDm0NelXbKn1u-_loYit1sYYk/edit?usp=sharing

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 20:06:51 No.96541667 Report

Quoted By: >>96541741

>>96541386
>+debt
>splash!
>advertisement cape
>the name part
everything about this is completely great and you should feel great
overlook is one word by the way

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 20:08:55 No.96541710 Report

Quoted By: >>96542130 >>96542146

>>96541640
She looks cuter every time you draw her. Also more proportionate. and I love that outfit. also good line weights
I dunno what kind of homo would confuse her for a lad, but in general that sounds like a really fun comic idea and I'm looking forward to it. (People probably aren't going to click that link though so maybe you could two-sentence it)

Strawdud

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Strawdud Sun 05 Nov 2017 20:10:16 No.96541741 Report

Quoted By: >>96542001 >>96542149

>>96541667
>overlook is one word by the way
Why do I even bother sending it to my friend to proof read it?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 20:14:40 No.96541838 Report

Quoted By: >>96542001

>>96529751
My heart wanted this to have a channel jitter so i put a little jitter on this

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 20:23:14 No.96542001 Report

Quoted By:

>>96541741
wrong friend obviously. Then again, I don't notice every mistake either when I proofread.
>>96541838
I'm seeing a lot of that lately. Is that just a filter now? I've done it by hand before by overlaying red blue and green versions of the image and then nudging them slightly out of place

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 20:27:29 No.96542084 Report

Quoted By: >>96542118 >>96544872

>>96541237
>a little inconsistent
>a little

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 20:28:50 No.96542118 Report

Quoted By: >>96542192

>>96542084
Never heard of understatement eh?
Please never serve in World War II alongside the RAF.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 20:29:22 No.96542130 Report

Quoted By:

>>96541710
Honestly if you watch enough anime, you'd know anything that looks feminine in any way can still be a boy. This also applies irl in current year.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 20:29:53 No.96542146 Report

Quoted By: >>96542180 >>96542494 >>96542499

>>96541710
If they're not willing to open it then they're not worth my time

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 20:29:58 No.96542149 Report

Quoted By:

>>96541741
>friend overlooks over look

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 20:31:20 No.96542180 Report

Quoted By: >>96542364

>>96542146
Entitlement like that won't help you advertise your product. If you can't be bothered to show off more then you're not worth my time and viewership.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 20:31:59 No.96542192 Report

Quoted By:

>>96542118
I fought on the side of the Grammar Nazis.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 20:40:04 No.96542364 Report

Quoted By:

>>96542180
Bye bye!

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 20:46:38 No.96542494 Report

Quoted By: >>96542618 >>96542669

>>96542146
this is a great attitude to have. haters gonna hate, just keep doing you

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 20:46:46 No.96542499 Report

Quoted By: >>96542635

>>96542146
>advertising a visual product with text links
>unwilling to describe your comic
this thread never fails to amaze me

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 20:52:12 No.96542618 Report

Quoted By: >>96542786

>>96542494
is this cf?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 20:52:54 No.96542635 Report

Quoted By:

>>96542499
It's called "how's your webcomic" not "everybody shill your wannabe manga." Get over it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 20:54:39 No.96542669 Report

Quoted By: >>96542786

>>96542494
t. Marvel comics

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:01:37 No.96542786 Report

Quoted By: >>96542965

>>96542618
>>96542669
t. bullies

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:02:01 No.96542798 Report

Quoted By: >>96542965

>>96511592
Ganbatte ColdFusion!

Hope you continue to draw and make comics.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:08:50 No.96542936 Report

Quoted By: >>96542965

>>96512148
>we
Speak for your fucking self.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:10:03 No.96542965 Report

Quoted By: >>96544111

>>96542786
>>96542798
>>96542936
Whatever you say, cf.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:15:50 No.96543082 Report

Quoted By: >>96543870 >>96544097

>>96518040
Go for it.

Post your prototypes.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:19:29 No.96543167 Report

Quoted By: >>96543217 >>96543312

shit

this really is the /cf/ general. We should of died for good last thread

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:21:35 No.96543217 Report

Quoted By: >>96543293

>>96543167
He is the physical manifestation of some loser's inner demons

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:25:21 No.96543293 Report

Quoted By: >>96543890

>>96543217
he's the manifestation of everything wrong with /hyw/.
>shit writing
>shit art
>no improvement
>sexually deviant tendencies
>doesnt take criticism well
>no idea how human socialization works
>ngmi

he said it right here >>96532384 , cf IS /hyw/

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:26:00 No.96543312 Report

Quoted By: >>96543702

>>96543167
Which is more important to you: drawing or drama?

Be the change you wish to see in the world.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:31:05 No.96543418 Report

Quoted By: >>96543477

>>96521282
Better then discussing shitty the Dewd.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:31:32 No.96543425 Report

Quoted By:

I want Nosebro and CF to get in a fight!

Lets take the HYW thread to /ic/

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:33:04 No.96543464 Report

Quoted By: >>96543559 >>96544142

Can't we get one of those autistic youutbers that make internet controversies blow up to give a take on CF?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:33:33 No.96543477 Report

Quoted By: >>96543732

>>96543418
to be fair that almost never happens though, he's becoming more and more scarce.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:34:24 No.96543497 Report

Quoted By:

>>96521616
>ColdFusion 2.0.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:37:01 No.96543559 Report

Quoted By:

>>96543464
Give Keemstar an anonymous tip

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:39:17 No.96543607 Report

Quoted By:

>>96523350
HOLY FUCKING HELL, sure was ballsy of you ColdFusion to say such a thought.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:41:24 No.96543652 Report

Quoted By: >>96543680 >>96543688

Who has the screencap of CF flirting with Lucy and calling her a raccoon?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:42:34 No.96543680 Report

Quoted By:

>>96543652
>her

>>96523350
also who was this mystery 18 y/o?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:42:43 No.96543688 Report

Quoted By: >>96543733 >>96543796

>>96543652
Anon, you missed the point. The best part of that exchange was the fact Lucy's a man.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:43:10 No.96543702 Report

Quoted By:

>>96543312
Drama, it's the only thing that fuels a general. Actual content is for real threads.

the dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe

the dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:44:53 No.96543732 Report

Quoted By: >>96543795

>>96543477
And I've been posting a lot less here because I've been busy doing a crossover with /coc/ characters.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:44:55 No.96543733 Report

Quoted By: >>96543752 >>96543900

>>96543688
I'd say that's more "i want to hug" instead of "i want to fug" territory. But
>wanting to hug trannies
still makes you kinda gay

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:46:04 No.96543752 Report

Quoted By: >>96543834

>>96543733
Lucy's not even a tranny, he's just a straight up dude who insists on using his oc's name as his handle

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:47:52 No.96543784 Report

Quoted By: >>96544017

please post, bones, bring the trinity back together for old times sake. CF will be waking up soon

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:48:32 No.96543795 Report

Quoted By: >>96543961 >>96544073

>>96543732
You mean that shitty webcomic you posted on /aco/ calling your own characters superior and throwing rocks at anything that isn't your creation?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:48:34 No.96543796 Report

Quoted By:

>>96543688
>ancient history just to force drama
What's your comic?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:50:20 No.96543834 Report

Quoted By:

>>96543752
Basically this, altho it has its advantages, like people follow you for believing you're a girl at first and once they realize you're a guy they feel bad in unfollowing

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:50:39 No.96543844 Report

Quoted By:

>>96528727
>>96535114
Really? Time to scout /ic/.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

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ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:51:54 No.96543870 Report

Quoted By:

>>96543082
redrew her >>96518775 here. well, a sketch anyway. I'm still not satisfied honestly, she needs more of a visual hook. her hair should be more distinctive.
as for the prototype, pic attached.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:52:49 No.96543890 Report

Quoted By: >>96543942

>>96543293
I didn't even notice that.

Wow, fuck you Coldfusion.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:53:22 No.96543900 Report

Quoted By:

>>96543733
it really was just brocializing attempts. Sorry it got misinterpreted though. That happens from time to time.
I was the first one to point out Lucy is obviously a guy. Plenty of guys are named Lucy.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:55:20 No.96543942 Report

Quoted By: >>96544009 >>96544090 >>96544537

>>96543890
>fuck you
Dude I'm not PROUD of that. I dislike being most of a thread. But it happens, especially as attendance dwindles and other people actually have lives, unlike me.
Comfort yourself by remembering that I'm also all the posts that get good feedback and appreciation.

the dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe

the dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:56:01 No.96543961 Report

Quoted By: >>96544170 >>96544249

>>96543795
No? I just hate golden girl and other /co/ projects that go town the fetish trash drain.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:57:51 No.96544009 Report

Quoted By: >>96544097

>>96543942
dude, you do realize everyone can tell when it's you giving feedback, and if someone can tell they're getting feedback from you they really dont appreciate it

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:58:00 No.96544017 Report

Quoted By: >>96544110

>>96543784
>wanting the Kiddy Diddler Domination Force at their most powerful
This is madness!

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 21:59:53 No.96544061 Report

Quoted By: >>96544097 >>96544129

>>96518775
>I could probably draw you a diagram of most of the human musculature from memory
Prove it. Post a speed drawing video where we can see what you're drawing and that you're not looking at any references.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:00:38 No.96544073 Report

Quoted By:

>>96543795
if true please post screencaps

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:01:07 No.96544090 Report

Quoted By:

>>96543942
>in case you haven't noticed I kind of -am- the threads.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:01:19 No.96544097 Report

Quoted By: >>96544140 >>96544141

>>96544009
you realize you're telling the other guy in the elevator he farted, right? I'm not hallucinating the positive reaction
going by the incorrect accusations, people have a very difficult time telling who's whom. The difference is, none of the angry people ever actually post with a name.
>>96544061
Did it a while back, my good man who I assume is also >>96543082 gotta go read the thread.
You'll have to take it on my honor I didn't look at a diagram, but I sure made enough mistakes. I already remember a lot of them so it was a good learning experience (gotta remember abs are wider than I think they are)

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:02:04 No.96544110 Report

Quoted By:

>>96544017
Bones isn't a part of the Kiddy Diddler Domination Force though, you're thinking of Goriland guy

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:02:04 No.96544111 Report

Quoted By: >>96544148 >>96544170 >>96544195 >>96544202

>>96542965
>cf isn't allow to have fans
Come on, anon. Take off your goggles of hatred and realize ColdFusion can write a decent story.

I mean, look at ONE and MobPsycho 100. Shitty art, decent story.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:02:57 No.96544129 Report

Quoted By: >>96544222

>>96544061
How could you tell from a video that he's not using references? He could just record the part of the screen where the ref is.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:03:27 No.96544140 Report

Quoted By:

>>96544097
Your art isn't very good

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:03:29 No.96544141 Report

Quoted By:

>>96544097
>but I sure made enough mistakes
As usual

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:03:28 No.96544142 Report

Quoted By: >>96544170

>>96543464
Hit up Metokur, he's going to do more deviants soon.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:03:39 No.96544148 Report

Quoted By: >>96544418

>>96544111
'preciate the 'pliment, but before you get over 9000 replies to the contrary, I ought to admit I can't (or at least haven't) write a decent story. Just decent jokes and puns. My characters mostly just dick around while I try to think of something for them to do.

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Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:04:57 No.96544170 Report

Quoted By: >>96544361 >>96544423

>>96543961
It's sad that I've done more with Daredevil in my Capeworld stories than all those "/co/ reinvents golden age characters" threads combined. I'm particularly proud of tying his costume into Australia's Rainbow Serpent mythology. Although I'm sure SJWs would eat me alive for my depiction of Aborigines if my webcomic wasn't literally who tier.

Boomerangs are such cool weapons. It's a shame that it's mostly a bad guy weapon outside the Batfamily.

>>96544111
>Coldfusion can write a decent story

I'll bite. Give me a brief summary of his story. Sell it to me. I admit I'm sort of afraid to ask, but what the hell.

>>96544142
If you do tell Jim I said hi.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:06:19 No.96544195 Report

Quoted By:

>>96544111
>ColdFusion can write a decent story

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:06:33 No.96544202 Report

Quoted By: >>96544241 >>96544246 >>96544250

>>96544111
Okay fine, I guess Goriland and Dewd count as fans. As for that comparison, that's not even fair. Comparing ONE to CF is like comparing Evangelion to Asterisk War. One is great and the other is anything but.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:07:18 No.96544222 Report

Quoted By:

>>96544129
The video would be shot at an angle so we can see where he's pointing his eyes

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:07:47 No.96544241 Report

Quoted By: >>96544337

>>96544202
Eva sucks though.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:08:02 No.96544246 Report

Quoted By:

>>96544202
>Goriland and Dewd count as fans.
Dewd has gone on-record saying he hates CF, lol. CF's only fans are other pedos

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:08:12 No.96544249 Report

Quoted By: >>96544335 >>96544665

>>96543961
Hate me all you want then Dewd, because I'm working on a much more extensive comic about her and got commissioned to draw her atleast 3 times the following month.

She's not even a clear concept and already has exponentially more appeal than all your work combined

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:08:12 No.96544250 Report

Quoted By: >>96544337

>>96544202
>Eva
>Great

It's Archie plus giant robots with Bioshock Infinite level writing and all the deconstruction stuff it did was done first and better with MS Gundam.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:10:13 No.96544300 Report

Quoted By: >>96544333 >>96544490 >>96544794

We need a reaction image for whenever CF posts or is mentioned, like with Shadman.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:11:51 No.96544333 Report

Quoted By: >>96544473

>>96544300
someone should just make a large image of all of cf's public follies

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:11:55 No.96544335 Report

Quoted By:

>>96544249
>She's not even a clear concept

Golden Girl is the one with the enormous boobs right? I mean all of them are technically that, but I mean she's the sidekick looking one with the enormous boobs right?

Is there anything more to the /co/ creation girls besides fetish? I mean there's nothing wrong with that, although I wish they'd do more besides giga boobs. When they get bigger than head size they don't look attractive to me, they look deformed.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:12:05 No.96544337 Report

Quoted By: >>96544369

>>96544241
>>96544250
You're right coldfusion, your shit is so much better.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:12:41 No.96544359 Report

Quoted By: >>96544462

Any chance I can get an invite to this Discord you're all lurking in?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:12:47 No.96544361 Report

Quoted By:

>>96544170
>Sell it to me.
Literally impossible.

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:13:18 No.96544369 Report

Quoted By: >>96544716

>>96544337
None of us are Coldfusion. Eva just sucks. Get some better giant robots in your life Anon. Like Getter.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:15:09 No.96544418 Report

Quoted By: >>96544476

>>96544148
>'preciate the 'pliment
Cease this at once

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:15:21 No.96544423 Report

Quoted By: >>96544476

>>96544170
>Give me a brief summary of his story
Animu-esque ocs go on a long and rambling weeby adventure with no rhyme or reason but a lot of female child nudity

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:17:07 No.96544462 Report

Quoted By:

>>96544359
here
>>96525611

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:17:41 No.96544473 Report

Quoted By: >>96544982

>>96544333

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:17:44 No.96544476 Report

Quoted By: >>96544547 >>96544551 >>96544716

>>96544418
yeah okay I wasn't sure about that one myself.
>>96544423
There's mans too. More in the original, fewer in N. Mainly because of the second-generation aspect and the old cast had more daughters and little sisters than sons.
Otherwise that's a good description.

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Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:18:12 No.96544490 Report

Quoted By: >>96544709 >>96544716

>>96544300
How's this?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:19:46 No.96544537 Report

Quoted By: >>96544639 >>96544648

>>96543942
I wanted to give you the benefit of the doubt and I know I'm sort of hyprocritical for spamming the threads with my girly sketches and request pic like that Cutie Honey one I did for you, but fuck, man. That's not a good look for you.

Imagine being this haughty

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:20:18 No.96544547 Report

Quoted By:

>>96544476
im not calling it male nudity until i see a penis. i'm not buying that you just want to show "innocent" and "non-sexual" naked little girls on their periods until you start having your male ocs walk around with their cocks hanging out

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:20:33 No.96544551 Report

Quoted By: >>96544590 >>96544648

>>96544476
>there's male nudity too so that makes the underage girl nudity ok
someone post the page where a 15 year old girl is masturbating then gets eaten out in a cave

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Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:22:30 No.96544590 Report

Quoted By: >>96544648

>>96544551
>All that
Please god no. Tell me he didn't.

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:24:18 No.96544639 Report

Quoted By:

>>96544537
>Spamming my threads with my girly sketches and request pics

Don't be ashamed of that. This is a thread about posting work. Post all the work you have. It sure would beat internet drama.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:24:38 No.96544648 Report

Quoted By: >>96544709

>>96544537
Okay obviously I'm saying it wrong, because I'm trying to be the opposite of haughty here.
I would appreciate help if you can see where I'm communicating wrong.
>>96544551
masturbating after seeing a couple dudes get intimate, spread-legged massages. Point is it's not totally one-sided genderwise.
>>96544590
dude it was romantic and dramatic. She was starting to become legitimately concerned she was bothering her love interest by always doing the stereotypical thirsty anime girl thing, and when her urges got too strong she just ran and hid, rather than do something that would make him hate her
he came and comforted her and reminded her that there's more (or in a way, less) you can do than penetration
she did a 'cat getting its lower back scritched' face, and all was well. I stand by that story and that lesson. Not tryin to get didactic or anything, but people always act like relationships mean right-away-fucking.

the dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe

the dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:25:41 No.96544665 Report

Quoted By: >>96544709 >>96544810 >>96544955

>>96544249
Ok cool, tell me when you have at least 5 issues, chapters, whatever, of her instead of having it go down the drain and moving on to the next hottest character like every other fucking /co/ original character.

>exponentially more appeal than all your work combined
Yeah, two big sources of appeal right in your face, trust me, I can get why more than a few anon's would latch on to such a project, "the dick is stronger than the mind." or whatever they say

Also the fact that she's underaged as an added "bonus"

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:27:56 No.96544709 Report

Quoted By: >>96544746 >>96544857

>>96544648
>Dude it was romantic and dramatic

I stopped reading right there.

See >>96544490

>>96544665
>Golden Girl is underaged

She is?

I didn't think any of the characters were developed enough to actually have ages let alone be creepily underaged.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:28:14 No.96544716 Report

Quoted By: >>96544895

>>96544369
>Eva
>giant robots
lolwut
>>96544476
>yeah okay I wasn't sure about that one myself
It was pretty terrible.
>>96544490
Almost but not quite.

the dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe

the dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:29:39 No.96544746 Report

Quoted By: >>96544895

>>96544709
>She is?
I've browsed enough of the /coc/ threads to see them agree that she is "ambiguously aged" which means that they will never say so that they won't feel bad about masturbating to her.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:31:02 No.96544786 Report

Quoted By: >>96544839

>all these tripfags

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:31:12 No.96544794 Report

Quoted By: >>96544982

>>96544300

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:32:06 No.96544810 Report

Quoted By: >>96544836

>>96544665
>fucking
THIS IS A CHRISTAIN BOARD.

WATCH YOUR MOUTH.

the dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe

the dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:33:00 No.96544836 Report

Quoted By: >>96544884 >>96544933 >>96545003 >>96547066

>>96544810
Nigga have you read my comic?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:33:06 No.96544839 Report

Quoted By:

>>96544786
>all this virtue-signaling

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:33:44 No.96544857 Report

Quoted By: >>96544904 >>96545040

>>96544709
>I stopped reading right there
Why? ColdFusion in that panel deconstructed sterotypical romance scene.

Next you'll say, you stopped watching End of Evangelion after Shinji masturbated to a comatose Asuka, right?

gloryhol anon

gloryhol anon Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:34:23 No.96544872 Report

Quoted By:

>>96542084
:/

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:34:59 No.96544884 Report

Quoted By:

>>96544836
Here and there.

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:35:17 No.96544895 Report

Quoted By: >>96544925 >>96545132

>>96544746
I haven't browsed many co creation threads myself. I was like "oh look co is creating stuff", thought the brown one with the robot gloves was kind of hot, and got dissapointed there wasn't any real super hero setting creation going on and left.

>>96544716
Evas totally count man even if they are lobotomized armored flesh golems. Biomecha are a dime a dozen in super robot stories.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:35:39 No.96544904 Report

Quoted By:

>>96544857
wait, I thought that was Rei
have I been misremembering that classic scene all these years? That changes it completely.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:36:51 No.96544925 Report

Quoted By: >>96545085 >>96545216

>>96544895
>Biomecha are a dime a dozen in super robot stories.
Not arguing, just curious, where? I never see them.
also Eva is surely Real Robot.
You only ever see biomecha down at the human scale. nobody wants a 60-foot-tall robot maid

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:37:15 No.96544933 Report

Quoted By: >>96544965

>>96544836
>white boi using the n word

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:37:26 No.96544938 Report

Quoted By: >>96544994

New thread nibbas
>>>/ic/3196632

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:37:42 No.96544946 Report

Quoted By: >>96544963 >>96545009 >>96545052 >>96545132 >>96545161

spent the weekend making a huge amount of pages, going to dump them.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:38:15 No.96544955 Report

Quoted By: >>96545132

>>96544665
You seem upset. Could it be you're jealous?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:38:46 No.96544963 Report

Quoted By: >>96545018 >>96545493

>>96544946
Please no, I'd rather see pointless shitflinging with dewd and cf than your boring shounen clone.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:38:48 No.96544965 Report

Quoted By:

>>96544933
he changed the -er to -a
completely above board

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:39:35 No.96544982 Report

Quoted By:

>>96544473
We are hitting levels of wew lad that shouldn't even be possible
>>96544794
Accurate, but over the top.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:39:50 No.96544994 Report

Quoted By:

>>96544938
>/ic/
no prease
then again, /ic/ is a pink board, right?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:40:09 No.96545003 Report

Quoted By: >>96545132

>>96544836
No and I never want to.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:40:15 No.96545009 Report

Quoted By: >>96545037

>>96544946
I haven't seen dialogue this bad since Chaos in the Tropics. You have no writing voice of your own, you just copy anime.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:40:32 No.96545018 Report

Quoted By: >>96545036

>>96544963
>a comic inspired by shounen is going to have the feeling of being a shouen
who would have thought

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:41:14 No.96545036 Report

Quoted By:

>>96545018
"""""inspired by"""""

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:41:15 No.96545037 Report

Quoted By:

>>96545009
I bet I like anime better than whatever his voice is.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:41:23 No.96545040 Report

Quoted By: >>96545216

>>96544857
>Next you'll say, you stopped watching End of Evangelion after Shinji masturbated to a comatose Asuka, right?
I never started watching it because Eva is garbage and as cancerous as SAO.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:41:38 No.96545052 Report

Quoted By: >>96545133 >>96546274

>>96544946

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:42:36 No.96545085 Report

Quoted By: >>96545151

>>96544925
>nobody wants a 60-foot-tall robot maid
Knights of Sidonia would like to have a word with you

the dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe

the dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:43:59 No.96545132 Report

Quoted By:

>>96544955
With a webcomic where my drawn waifu's are factually better than golden girl in every way?

HAH no.

Also my comic has more porn.
>>96544895
Yeah, I like /co/llette, she's pretty cool.
>>96544946
I agree with the other anons, your characters need more personality to there voices.

>>96545003
Meh, I get that, it's cool yo.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:44:02 No.96545133 Report

Quoted By: >>96545162 >>96546274

>>96545052

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:44:36 No.96545151 Report

Quoted By:

>>96545085
Yeah you know what, I have to take that back. That would be awesome.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:45:04 No.96545161 Report

Quoted By:

>>96544946
>'ill' and not 'I'll'
>'you are kid' and not 'you are, kid'
>'have not' where 'haven't' would sound better

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:45:05 No.96545162 Report

Quoted By:

>>96545133

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Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:47:34 No.96545216 Report

Quoted By: >>96545259 >>96545398

>>96544925
Getter Robo post-G in the manga (elements of which carry over to Armageddon, New Getter, and Shin vs Neo) Tekkaman (shut up he was in SRW he counts), Zeorymer, Aura Battler Dunbine (sort of. the mechs are made from bits of giant insects and try to eat their pilots when they go hypermode)

And I got a giant magical biomech planned for Capeworld dug up by archaeologists on a medieval world that used to be the capital planet of a transdimensional civilization called Agathion.

>>96545040
Woah man I'm not a fan of EVA either but lets not go crazy. It's nowhere near as bad as SAO.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:49:06 No.96545259 Report

Quoted By: >>96545464

>>96545216
getter robo was part organic?
tekkaman is just human-sized, right?
>giant magical biomech
I stopped reading right there.
Looking forward to it

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:54:18 No.96545382 Report

Quoted By: >>96545399

Abybody going to make a new real thread on here?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:54:18 No.96545384 Report

Quoted By: >>96545394 >>96545480 >>96545516

>Dewd gets triggered with Golden Girl

You have sealed your gravestone

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:55:05 No.96545394 Report

Quoted By:

>>96545384
He's just trying to fit in with the crowd by making sure he's against the right things.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:55:20 No.96545398 Report

Quoted By:

>>96545216
Don't lie to him, Getter is only organic in Go's ending.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:55:21 No.96545399 Report

Quoted By: >>96545819

>>96545382
quick, someone make a new coldfusion general thread

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:58:13 No.96545464 Report

Quoted By: >>96545635

>>96545259
>Getter Robot was part organic?

It's complicated. At low levels of Getter Ray saturation a Getter is just a robot powered by green/pink lasers. At high levels the robot starts evolving like an organism and will try to eat the pilot. It's why a lot of times Shin Getter acts like its alive with how its eyes move-because it IS alive.

>Tekkaman was human sized

Yes but SHUT UP HE WAS IN SUPER ROBOT WARS GAWD.

>Looking forward to it

Agathion's pilots are kabbalah themed. Each one stands for a different sephirot. And it has the tree of life on its chest as an emblem.

It's going to be cool.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:59:11 No.96545480 Report

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>>96545384
Nah, he just is upset an oppai loli is better than all his persona and work combined
And that there's even threads dedicated to her but non dedicated to Dewd and his Happy Tree Friends

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 22:59:38 No.96545493 Report

Quoted By: >>96545548

>>96544963
fun fact, no matter what project i'm working on, it's probably going to be inspired by manga. so, better this than something like rotten strawberries

the dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe

the dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe Sun 05 Nov 2017 23:00:20 No.96545516 Report

Quoted By: >>96545588

>>96545384
https://youtu.be/3vUNqs-4-Oo

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 23:01:37 No.96545548 Report

Quoted By: >>96545746

>>96545493
There's a difference between being inspired and just regurgitating the same shit and putting nothing new on the table.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 23:02:52 No.96545588 Report

Quoted By: >>96545616

>>96545516
>shilling your own autism

That's got to be the most noticed piece of work you have ever submitted

the dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe

the dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe Sun 05 Nov 2017 23:04:30 No.96545616 Report

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>>96545588
Thankfully not, my TOME reviews are the things that get more views.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 23:05:27 No.96545635 Report

Quoted By: >>96545697

>>96545464
well if we're using SRW rules, then zoids get to count. Possibly the coolest cyborgs ever, starting with animals that are already naturally metal and just stripping off parts, replacing them with man-made artificial ones plugged into their central core organ, until you have something totally new but can still call it alive.

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Sun 05 Nov 2017 23:07:50 No.96545697 Report

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>>96545635
It saddens me how little play Zoids gets in Super Robot Wars. The Eldoran kids get more play.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 23:09:53 No.96545746 Report

Quoted By: >>96545930 >>96545974 >>96546003

>>96545548
True, this is something I've wanted to say to her for a long time but everytime I have criticized her work she goes on suicide watch and it's just depressing to see her like this.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 23:12:53 No.96545819 Report

Quoted By: >>96545905

>>96545399
Too late, he's got a pink board thread now. We're all doomed.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 23:16:17 No.96545905 Report

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>>96545819
no, you don't get it. the pink board thread is his very own containment thread, this is a good thing

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 23:17:17 No.96545930 Report

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>>96545746
If it makes her suicidal to improve then she's already dead in the water artistically.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 23:19:18 No.96545974 Report

Quoted By: >>96546003

>>96545746
Exactly. I have a lot of criticism to offer but she just gets pissy over any negative feedback

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 23:20:20 No.96546003 Report

Quoted By: >>96546074 >>96546149 >>96546259 >>96546274

>>96545746
I don't get mad at criticism, I get mad at bait telling me my work is invalid cause i'm trans, or people telling me I'm not allowed to just have fun. I always say I do this for fun, but people will say i'm just using that as an excuse to deflect hate/crit.

>>96545974
give me the crit then.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 23:23:04 No.96546074 Report

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>>96546003
Being a trans isn't a relevant aspect of your persona, you should just have an ambigous gender and not really care about it.

Also your work requieres a higher amount of polish and actual experimentation in order to be anywhere near readable

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 23:25:51 No.96546149 Report

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>>96546003
>cause i'm trans
I don't care who you are, I think your work is bad and uninspired. Don't use that as a defense mechanism.

Your comic doesn't have an ounce of originality, give it a voice be. more. original.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 23:29:54 No.96546259 Report

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>>96546003
Honestly I've seen you get mad at both. I really feel for you since you get unfairly shat on, but you also get pissy to the max and are clearly still a little kid in the ways that matter.
The right reaction to that is not ridicule, but assistance. But this is 4chan, so you're gonna get both.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 23:30:17 No.96546274 Report

Quoted By: >>96546391 >>96546417 >>96546823

>>96546003
The few backgrounds look consistently empty and rarely have any presence. You just give us random castles with no mood or interesting details to them, they just look like building blocks with patterns painted on. >>96545052
The lack of detail also negatively impacts pages like >>96545133 . I thought the lines in the first panel were just supposed to be some sort of speed lines at first.

As for the writing, there's nothing wrong about being shounen inspired, but nothing about this shounen story makes it stand out. It doesn't have a unique aesthetic/style like Soul Eater, nor does it have a compelling world like One Piece, nor does it have a strong hook like BNHA. The characters feel very generic, like they were lifted from a list of shounen character archetypes, and lack strong voices or motivations.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 23:34:34 No.96546391 Report

Quoted By: >>96546453 >>96546619 >>96546702

>>96546274
post work

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 23:35:37 No.96546417 Report

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>>96546274
Valid crit
It is cute though

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 23:37:01 No.96546453 Report

Quoted By: >>96546606

>>96546391
>Transfag is ready to get defensive

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 23:42:45 No.96546606 Report

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>>96546453
you wanna talk defensive, take a look at the logs from the discord

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 23:43:09 No.96546619 Report

Quoted By: >>96546700 >>96547058

>>96546391
i'm not opening myself up to that, she rips into anyone who crits her lol

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 23:46:41 No.96546700 Report

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>>96546619
didn't do it to me.
didn't seem to take the advice right away, but eventually did going by the art improvements
maybe it's all about how you phrase it

strawbles

strawbles Sun 05 Nov 2017 23:46:50 No.96546702 Report

Quoted By: >>96546823

>>96546391
please let it be known this was not my post, the crit you made was completely valid, it was screenshotted.

strawbles

strawbles Sun 05 Nov 2017 23:51:35 No.96546823 Report

Quoted By: >>96546854

>>96546702
ment to also reply to >>96546274
thanks again

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 23:53:00 No.96546854 Report

Quoted By: >>96546956

>>96546823
yeah see you're okay sometimes. It's best to focus on those.

strawbles

strawbles Sun 05 Nov 2017 23:57:49 No.96546956 Report

Quoted By: >>96546991

>>96546854
>need to establish character motivations, flesh out world
>planned on doing that next 2 chapters
>realize thats like 3 months til those pages get released

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 05 Nov 2017 23:59:15 No.96546991 Report

Quoted By: >>96547066

>>96546956
truly comicmaking is agony and rhapsody in one.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 06 Nov 2017 00:01:44 No.96547058 Report

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>>96546619
>can dish it out but can't take it
pottery

strawbles

strawbles Mon 06 Nov 2017 00:02:00 No.96547066 Report

Quoted By: >>96547170

>>96546991
Id love to just make a new comic, but i've spent too much time on this one, scrapping it would be a waste.

>>96544836
thanks for blocking me on discord after throwing an autism fit in the dms.

the dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe

the dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe Mon 06 Nov 2017 00:06:32 No.96547170 Report

Quoted By: >>96547198

>>96547066
Your comic will always be worse than mine.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 06 Nov 2017 00:07:41 No.96547198 Report

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>>96547170
girls, girls, you're both beautiful. and you're both less autistic than that guy who throws a fit if you say anything less than supportive about trannies. Clearly he has issues with his "girlfriend"

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 06 Nov 2017 00:13:14 No.96547329 Report

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>bones never made it to the party
RIP, hearthstone took his soul

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 06 Nov 2017 00:23:35 No.96547542 Report

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let this be the last

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