>>96447852You came late posting, and I came late reading. so I guess we're even.
Jokes aside thak you a lot for the storytime anon! hope your school days will be pleasant.
I expected the story to be way, way worse from the descriptions. The final result was actually pretty nice except maybe for the "edgyer" pages, but I guess Brandon just wanted to make the villain seem really dangerous without using too many pages.
There's room for improvement, but it's a pretty good start.
>>96446458This page is super cool but what's exactly going on? was that scream from Erma, her mom or the doctor?
and is it to be intended like a "he screamed sooo much everybody everywhere heard it" gag (probably not considering the red) or do all supernatural monsters become awarewhen a new one of their kind is born?
