>>93625660Ch.95 is relatively good because something is HAPPENING, especially some genuine development for Augustus but there are problems there that become much worse in just the next chapter.
There's overstatement when Lucy has a silly blood splotch to signal that she hurt herself by jumping off a building or when, after being in too much agony to move, she starts yelling at the top of her lungs,
There's nonsensical plotting too. It apparently tries to make Augustus pulling out his phone suspenseful re: the threat of him turning her over to Alejandro, but we already know she's back in Rosevile apparently healthy so obviously he didn't do that, let alone the fact that he hadn't been credible as a genuine bad guy for many chapters, or that Lily told Mike she was going to be fine way back in the chapter she disappeared.
And that's just the part of the chapter people really liked. There's more nonsense when Abbey, who previously knew he had an anger problem was told Janet it came in intense flashes that left him feeling guilty, now reacts to a calculated scheme being revealed with rage and suddenly dumps Daisy in the middle of the cafeteria. It wasn't clear at the time but this was just to get rid of him to clear the way for PauloxDaisy hammerblows in the plot.
There's actually plenty wrong with ch.95. People like it because best boy got to be happy and because there's some somewhat interesting experimentation with extra-long pages for dramatic effect.
