>>79125967Not them, but the entire flow of your story is awkward and your visual storytelling is lacking. You need to write out your plot, draft up some thumbnails, and scrutinize. "How does the reader feel? Where are we? Can the reader tell that without expositional dialogue? What's the hook? Why should the audience care about my characters? How can I make this sequence more engaging? How can I be more creative with my characters' abilities and attributes? What's my tone?"
On the last two, I read through your comic and wondered how different it would be if the protagonist was a Dullahan instead of a robot. The answer is "not much." There's an entire opening action scene and the robot protagonist is both mostly covered up (making them basically just a person with a funny robot head) and doesn't do anything except fall apart. It's not exciting, weird, tense, creative or even funny. There was a lack of ingenuity and the tone was unclear, making the first few pages boring despite being "action packed".
