>>119124746I see your vision.
Rape and badshit happen, Jane and her get driven closer together, based on the look Daria is going to pigout on Thanksgiving, that feeling of stuffed relief, comfort with Jane, goes into her subconscience.
Daria and Jane start to develop feelings for each other after that, meanwhile Daria is GRADUALLY softening up a bit due to comfort eating(She's a little underweight to start so it takes time) and eventually that develops into a kink of Jane feeding Daria so she can relive that relief and comfort and so Jane can snuggle her chubby little cynic.
And it's slowpaced and realistic as fuck, which is not only the HOTTEST type IMO, but it'll lure in the normal fags. The first 25k words are essentially setup, so I could easily see the full story passing 100, 150k, perhaps more. And it is Angsty, which I love, keep that theme throughout, darkness is good, I had a SU WG fic idea that was filled with angst and deep character stuff, but Archfiend wouldn't go for it and started doing drabbles or something.
A nice, slow paced WG story, which is a good story in it's own right, a good angsty Jaria and dealing with trauma story, so we get both a good story and erotica, and the normal fags don't even realize exactly what they're reading later on because the angst and characters have them hooked.
Brilliant, I love this fucking writefag, your everything I'd want in a writer
