>>116666451I'm saying the opposite: it's melodramatic and trying far too hard to "gotcha" bad writing cliches to the point that it's trashy itself. All the pages being posted are "WHY DIDN'T THEY JUST DO THE THING!" except with a shitload of preamble leading up to it, spelling the idea out to the audience for an insane amount of time.
I know a lot of the target audience is autistic and wouldn't grasp it if the comic didn't explain stuff directly, but still, it reads like someone said "I will be the hero of comics who never falls into the pitfalls Linkara talks about!"
TL;DR, it insists upon itself.