>>114294931Let me just post the rearrange I'm thinking of and you can tell me if it's going in a better direction then what is currently in the doc.
Picking up from
>>114291882"Well I haven't really thought about-" /co/le puts his hand on his pocket "Ah, I'm really sorry, it's my work phone. They wouldn't call me if it wasn't important." As /co/le exits SG sits there in silence looking a little pout-y as she examines the menu.
The director yells "CUT!" and the cameras stop rolling.
SG turns from pout-y to a look of discontent as she watches /co/le prep for the next scene without her.
Clara rushes over and begins touching up SG's makeup and Lily walks by dressed as a waitress setting a glass of water on the table as well as the script.
SG picks up the script and tumbs through it as super speed before asking "What is the point of all this?"
Clara: "To make you look good for the camera."
SG: "No, I mean, all of this."
Lily: "You're in the movie now, you're playing the role of /co/le's love interest who catches him with another woman and blows the whole thing out of proportion by making wild accusations. You know, relationship drama."
Clara: "People gobble that up, art imitating life and such."
SG's face turns red thinking about anything imitating what she's been saying lately. As she thumbs the script again she thinks out loud "Is this really supposed to be imitating me?"
Clara has finished the makeup and is holding a mirror for SG while she answers "The director wanted to write your characters in a way he thought it'd be easy for you to portray."
SG points at the script "Oh, come on. I can't come off as this bad."
Lily cocks an eyebrow "Yeah, you kinda do. What with the giant shadows crawling all over the set before."
Clara: "And the way you're always eyeing Cole. (Not that I could blame you.)"
SG makes a pained expression as she looks at herself in the mirror. Things are not going as she envisioned.
Let me know if this direction works better. Character limit.