>>113303007Not that anon, but here are some of the writing problems:
-The core concept of a hotel that works as a rehab center. It makes no sense. It sort of sounds like they just came up with a series name they really liked, and then they tried to give some kind of dumb justification to that name instead of coming up with a better plot and a title.
If this hotel's supposed to rehabilitate the citizens of hell so effectively that it solves an actual overpopulation problem, how many people is Charlie planning to host inside that hotel? How rapidly is she planning to cure people?
-The first scene is kind of vague to a person who hasn't already read a synopsis of the story. Some people who saw the pilot didn't immediately realize that the scene showed the aftermath of a purge event. They thought the corpses on the streets were just Hell being a hellish place as one would expect.
The scene could convey its point better if you first show some pleasant shots of Hell being a surprisingly normal place, then everyone runs or hides as the angels attack, then cut to the aftermath after the show logo.
-The reveal that Angel Dust had already met Charlie and agreed to cooperate with her off-screen before the events of the pilot. I don't think it was a good idea to just casually mention their connection nearly halfway through the episode; I feel like the pilot should've showed their first meeting and how they decided to team up.
-Alastor teleporting characters into the hotel was oddly edited, and kind of an awkward way to introduce the supporting cast.
