tldr ; Tell us what you think of the art and where it's going

We're designing characters for a story video game, basically a visual novel really, that deals with depression using supernatural banality as it's framework. Like a story about Luffy overcoming his hangups about bartering for ship repair work, or goku dealing with the depression that forms in his heart between death screaming matches.

We've created a few memes made off last requests, and i'll be posting them. Please tell us what you think of the characters, and what would make them better.

Last time we were told to add shading to his skull and lines on the hands to simulate more handbones, and we've done that, as i'll show in the next few postings, along with posings of the cast