alright, after sitting and watching this again, here's my personal review of what's going on so far. i'm not paying much attention to "muh plot" RN since nothing has really happened, so it's really just editing and voices.
editing (for an amateur project) is spot on, even giving how anal it's been for the disc trannies running the project. there's a few blips, of course, but it's pretty darn good.
voices are okay. the diamonds (IMO) hands down have the best voice both singing and speaking, which gave me a very good 1st impression.
>Channel - can't say for now since she's only been in the start>Stevenanon - both okay singing and speaking, i agree that his accent may make it a bit hard to understand but for the most part i understand what he says so it's not bad>Pearl - good speaking, okay singing>Garnet - has the potential to be good speaking, but has bad singing>Amethyst - decent speaking, bad singing>Greg - bad speaking (i didn't expect greg to sound british and i dont think it works)>Peridot - pretty good dialogue (glad they could get my favorite character's voice right)>Bismuth - decent speaking>Lapis - who's decision was this?sound editing could be better, though. a few spots were a bit hard to hear.
i'm with
>>112320269 on the humor part- it's 4chan, people say nigger and faggot like they drink water here. the only joke that hit for me was the n-word joke. for the rest, i guess you could say i get them but don't find them to be particularly funny. or if there was an attempt at a joke, i didn't see it as a joke and just more so allusions to 4chan.
also piggybacking off of what
>>112320269 said, it seems like something that would come off of r/greentextstories. It's like you told a bunch of redditards to make a movie about 4chan. sure, they know a bit about it to put "le funny pepe", but they're not 4chan.
in all, it could use some work. it's not cringe to me because i've seen things that WERE cringe. but i'm a bit excited to see what's next.