>>111181415longer shots
there’s a ton of reaction shots that are over in less than a second, plus the fan letter to ad and the bizarre closeup on alastor in his song
delete “damnit” after “oh my god my drugs”
completely redo the alastor/husk scene so you can actually tell where they fucking are
put more effort into that fucking cg car
fix the perspective issues on the guy that steals ad’s drugs
severely tone down the comedy sound effects