>>107330057Not that anon but i'm willing to give some critique
-the anatomy while stylized fairly well has some goofs, her breasts look like they don't match her body's angle and aren't properly squeezed together at the middle nor pushed up with a correct cleavage line, her armpit cuts way up into her shoulder instead of following the pectoral/deltoid line, there is no indication of clavicles shaping the neck and shoulders, her ear lacks structure(basic as it could be), the right thigh is strangely thin and straight, the calves and ankles are disproportionate and inconsistent with eachother, The left arm has a weirdly small and isolated bicep and the right arm is oddly lumpy and the structure of the elbow looks messed up
-her pose makes it seem as if she were on a neven surface but her hand and feet are not on the same level, her hand touches at a very flat and dead on angle while her feet seem to be resting at a slant.
-there's some really dirty linework here and there, and very unsure strokes in places there should be, like her thighs. You seem to be going over your lines too much.
