>>106200648I am exceptionally well versed in Ren & Stimpy thank you very much, Ren & Stimpy imitates 1950's live for television kids shows, that's why it has those long pauses and then turns that into comedy, this doesn't. It seems like you're asking me to rip into this thing so I guess I will it fails to convey just about everything comedic in its approach except for the concept, the camera angles are atrocious, the non human faces don't emote, the music fails to set the tone 100% of the time, the voice acting good god, how hard is it to pronounce your words clearly get the marbles out of your mouth, Dave sounds insincerely emotional, etc, etc, I'm not asking for Harry Partridge here I just made an observation.
You wanna see some stupid shit a high school kid made that trounces this entirely watch this.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tejoKyCgBsYFinally, for a first attempt it deserves criticism so they can improve, you positively reinforcing all these errors and mistakes hurts them tremendously and you should be ashamed.