>>103034619Things that happened in this chapter.
1. Ed and Isabella made up.
2. Isaac was brought into the fold.
3. Max found out Dimitri used to be in the club.
4. cute blind lady showed up, went on a date
5. hijack possessed someone, dodgeball, more possession, then he fucking died
6. Isabella got a new spirit, already learned how to use it
7. PJ showed up at school and was introduced to the club.
8. probably a fuckload of other things
Stuff happened. It was a busy day. It was just too long and scattered. A good chapter would cover 2 or 3 of these things, and spreading them out and mixing them together like this makes it a clusterfuck because the lack of focus really shines.
Ideal chapter would have things focus on Hijack and the dodgeball game, end with them unable to find the spirit, and then you can tackle the "spender is possessed" problem the next day. Or something.
