>>5999192don't trace lines, trace shapes. it'll help you think 3d dimensionally.
Use the parrallel lines of the figure to decipher the form, Waist > Bust point > shoulders > brow.
the face: Your futherest eye is to close and should warp around the skull more, the nose is to shallow it shouldn't appear "behind" the furthest eye, its a soft curved line from ther brow. the mouth is way to wide and off centre