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Need art critique\advice for improvement

Anonymous Sat 02 Apr 20:29:42 2022 No.5991912 View Reply Original Report

Quoted By: >>5991916 >>5991917 >>5991921 >>5991964

Im schizophrenic so I use art as a way to get out some emotions that I cant describe with human words

But I still want it to look good, even if uncomfortable

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 02 Apr 2022 20:32:20 No.5991916 Report

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>>5991912

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Anonymous Sat 02 Apr 2022 20:34:51 No.5991917 Report

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>>5991912
Thats all I think

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 02 Apr 2022 20:41:59 No.5991921 Report

Quoted By: >>5991924

>>5991912
I like your stuff, looks soulful, what program do you use? As for actual advice, those hands could see some work, get out of your comfort zone and try new things, dynamic poses, interesting angles and perspectives... keep up the good work, anon.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 02 Apr 2022 20:43:28 No.5991924 Report

Quoted By: >>5991925

>>5991921
Practice is hard cause I either get lost in art or cant do it at all
but every time I do art I do try to give hands a different pose

I REALLY like arms
They are perfect biomechanical machines

I use photoshop and my mouse
Thats it

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 02 Apr 2022 20:44:36 No.5991925 Report

Quoted By: >>5991930

>>5991924
>my mouse
Damn. Keep it up dude, that's impressive

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 02 Apr 2022 20:47:07 No.5991930 Report

Quoted By: >>5991941 >>5991951

>>5991925
not a dude and thanks!

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 02 Apr 2022 20:51:49 No.5991941 Report

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>>5991930
my bad. Also, I see Punpun and Lain. Nice taste

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 02 Apr 2022 20:52:11 No.5991942 Report

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>>5991941
both are great inspirations

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 02 Apr 2022 20:56:38 No.5991950 Report

Quoted By: >>5991957

>>5991942
That is cool. You are talented IMO. Also, as the other anon said, you could try to improve the hand. That'd make it look a lot nicer, tho they aren't horrible.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 02 Apr 2022 20:56:39 No.5991951 Report

Quoted By: >>5991957

>>5991930
Make more pretty drawings, lady!

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 02 Apr 2022 21:01:07 No.5991957 Report

Quoted By: >>5991995

>>5991951
>>5991950
thank you!!!!

I know, hands need practice, any examples of how I should draw them?
I do them like this

Trapezoid + fingers consisting of 3 cyllinders

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 02 Apr 2022 21:01:17 No.5991959 Report

Quoted By: >>5991961

>>5991916
too many 3/4 view drawings you reuse the same text/pattern backgrounds be more creative than that and the hipster look at me i am mentally ill and i smoke theme gets boring fast bro

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 02 Apr 2022 21:04:24 No.5991961 Report

Quoted By: >>5991975 >>5992008

>>5991959
I know, Just really dont know what to do with backgrounds
The only reason I mentioned being schiz is because I believe ones motivation for art is important, as it highlights what a person wants to achieve with it

also smoke is cause I used to be obsessed on cigarettes for aesthetic reasons
not so much anymore, don't even smoke anymore cause got a tooth removed and doc told me not to smoke until it completely heals

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 02 Apr 2022 21:05:29 No.5991964 Report

Quoted By: >>5991967

>>5991912
i can tell you trans from your art. not hating, just pointing out the obvious
good art anyway

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 02 Apr 2022 21:06:34 No.5991967 Report

Quoted By: >>5991971

>>5991964
WAIT WHAT
how
literally how

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 02 Apr 2022 21:08:49 No.5991971 Report

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>>5991967
I've got an eye for things like this because of my ass burgers

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 02 Apr 2022 21:10:01 No.5991974 Report

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>>5991971
you can just say you can determine something like that from art and not elaborate further!

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 02 Apr 2022 21:10:07 No.5991975 Report

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>>5991961
stfu about your life or the glowies will track you down

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 02 Apr 2022 21:15:18 No.5991985 Report

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>>5991975
would glowies like my art?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 02 Apr 2022 21:25:22 No.5991995 Report

Quoted By: >>5992000

>>5991957
I think it comes to shape, gesture and depth, the fingers might be where the issue is at, particulsrly the gap between the pointing finger and the thumb. Finger lenght and knuckle placement are also at fault here, notice the almost triangular shape of the top of the back of the hand, every finger is different in length and position and that affects how it interacts and grabs things.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 02 Apr 2022 21:27:19 No.5992000 Report

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>>5991995
yeah thats close to how I do it
I think a lot of it comes to me not yet being at thinking in terms of just
space
And rotating such a complex object in space

So just
practice practice practice

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 02 Apr 2022 21:33:05 No.5992008 Report

Quoted By: >>5992014 >>5992021

>>5991961
there is more to you than "schizophrenic" the themes in your art are limited you are not exceeding any limits only comfort, check this thread >>5991013 look at the many possible combination of text/backgrounds/textures and use different colors the color pallet you use is almost identical

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 02 Apr 2022 21:37:15 No.5992014 Report

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>>5992008
A lot of them are really good, I actually started drawing less than half a year ago
so hopefully ill be able to draw like that someday
full of soul
without vomiting from bright colors

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 02 Apr 2022 21:41:37 No.5992021 Report

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>>5992008
Keep thinking about what you said about how I'm using almost identical everything
and I think it stems from me as a person rather than just style so unless I change, at least with colors, I don't think I can change that

I despise bright colors
I love gray-ish colors
dirty colors

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Anonymous Sat 02 Apr 2022 22:49:51 No.5992125 Report

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cool art but ur art is scary, I‘m scared now

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