>>6006590Left feels like braids; right is ok-looking.
But unironically anon, needs Loomis: proportions are disturbing, you're far from a small deviation on a 1/3, 1/3, 1/3 basis. Pretty sure the eyes are too big too, but would need to see with better overall proportions.
Also, those lines under the check bones, and other lines on the face: try to use hatching instead of continuous lines, or lower the values further, unless you do want her to look that old.
And finally, don't hesitate to master study for the hairs. Cheers,