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Finally made a fucking rage comic

Anonymous Wed 16 Mar 01:12:34 2022 No.5963859 View Reply Original Report

Quoted By: >>5963865 >>5963866 >>5963957 >>5964024 >>5965378 >>5967635 >>5967644 >>5967828

Tell me what to improve, dudes

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 16 Mar 2022 01:14:43 No.5963865 Report

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>>5963859
everything

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 16 Mar 2022 01:15:20 No.5963866 Report

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>>5963859
Maybe stop doing hairy lines?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 16 Mar 2022 01:32:22 No.5963887 Report

Quoted By: >>5963904

>Hairy lines, iron them out.
>Body kinda wonky in third panel.
>Could merge panels 4 and 5.
>Panel 5 could be conveyed better.
>A lot of blank space, could condense the panel contents to fit the box better.
>Can't really tell the characters in the comic apart due to storytelling.
>Could use some color, or maybe change of shades for example?
>Try and watch that your writing stays even and readable from a further distance (maybe make the brush thicker?). It's a careful craft.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 16 Mar 2022 01:46:06 No.5963904 Report

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>>5963887
To be honest, it was kinda rushed. Friends challenged me to do it in under 30 minutes, so I got sloppy. The blank space part, panel merging, and storytelling are all things I'll work on. I'll totally take the hairy lines part into consideration; I've been doing that for years. Thanks overall for the criticism though!

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 16 Mar 2022 02:18:38 No.5963957 Report

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>>5963859
You know the artist who made the original rage comics was a fully established talented artist before he made stick figure comics for fun, right?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 16 Mar 2022 02:39:50 No.5963975 Report

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>>5963957
Yeah, 3ab's a fucking legend. Wonder how he's doing today. I know he keeps to himself because he's scared of internet fame, and rightfully so. Godspeed to him.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 16 Mar 2022 03:24:30 No.5964024 Report

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>>5963859
I didn’t even read it to the end, I stopped on 4th panel cause I got bored and the art style is a bit unappealing to me. Expressions are dramatic so you have that going for you

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 17 Mar 2022 00:32:27 No.5965378 Report

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>>5963859
Turn off your anti-aliasing

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 18 Mar 2022 06:41:19 No.5967635 Report

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>>5963859
This is a cmic strip, but not a rage comic

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 18 Mar 2022 06:49:52 No.5967644 Report

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>>5963859
Try being funnier. If you think this is funny you should go on hikes, go camping by lakeside, maybe raise an animal. Do this and your mind (and art) will improve and you will not be tempted to draw for petty attention.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 18 Mar 2022 10:32:40 No.5967828 Report

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>>5963859
You're at least a decade too late for rage comics.
Are you one of those newfag FNF bandwagon hoppers?

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