>>5927783>There is no sense of personalityThis is the only part I'm surprised about, I was thinking/hoping that it had a lot of personality
>and your lack of effort is obvious.You're dead on with this. I have a fucked up attention span and it makes it easier to focus when I make fast progress. I'll force myself to start taking it slower.
>Your lack of fundamental is obvious, please, take the time to practice your art.I do and have been. The left of picrel is a couple years ago, right is now. I started the comic when I reached a place where I could draw a scene from imagination and most of the time someone else could look at it and understand what's happening. If you pay close attention you can see when I stopped working on it for weeks and just did studies. I've always practiced in concurrency with it.
I know my art isn't good, but it's a forever grind and I had to choose some arbitrary point to start working on a project.
Thanks for the reply.
>>5927917>There is nothing sequential, your words are too dumb to read and everything else is awful too.Haha maybe I shouldn't have opened with the single character that talks like that