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Dumping the first 33 pages of my comic. I wanted it to be breakneck speed, but looking back on it I definitely went too hard on that, with all the switching perspectives. A couple places could use a few more panels to better show the movement of what's going on, so if you can't tell what's happening on a page just ask. I'll go slower with the pace and develop all the characters more on the second day of the competition. Please let me know what you think.