>>5925432It looks like peter draws type of doodling from youtube. The main problems arise from sloppy lines and values. Most of your lines look like scribbles. They are not hatching or uniform in length, space between or stop and start points. Take the left side, middle of the image where the jawline for the creature is. See the hatching there? Thats just scribbling. None of the lines start properly at the edge. Some are curved, some are straight, many have tails where you pull the pen back slightly before lifting off. You are in 'get it done mode' and dont care about the line quality. The crosshatching just under the big jaw is another example. When cross hatching, you want to do specific patterns. It's not just 'do one way, then another'. It's usually to indicate values and larger spaces between hatchings created lighter values and tighter spacing is darker. MOre lines is more value as well. You can also do curved hatching, feathering, having the hatchings radiate out from the same starting point, etc. The point is, its deliberate. It's methodical and informs the viewer about the shape or value or texture of the object. Yours is just criss crossing lines scribbled in. The gaps are different with some almost like they ar emissing lines, etc. You can clearly see back and forth scribbling at points.
Additionally, many lines go out of the line boundaries of the area you are hatching. This is sloppy and hurts cohesion of the piece. Take your time and stop and start inside the area you are adding value to. A cross hatching from, say, under the jaw, shouldnt go up into the mostly white jaw area. This happens throughout the piece. You have waves of lines in the top right for texture, but some cross over lines and clearly a mistake. Same for the wood-like texture in the bottom left with radiating circular lines. They obviously werent supposed to cross, but you were rushing and messed it up.
