>>5914502Welcome to /ic/ where nobody posts work and if they do nobody critiques it
>>5914506Use a better brush
>>5914708>>5914727>>5914845Kino
>>5914790Dudes a bit long in the face or something. Spend less time on freckles and more time on values and texture and shapes and stuff
>>5914984I mean technically he shouldn’t have a shadow there if there’s fire behind him. Shadows should be on like his right side of the nose and he should have some fire highlights particularly on the left side of his face.
>>5915142Aesthetic at first but kind of eh the more I look at it. Are you trying to get into screenprinting?
>>5915195Equally as boring. What’s up with DTIYS threads and being obsessed with goddamn freckles.
>>5915199Idk about using that thin of a brush particularly for the vertical forehead strokes. Would look cooler probably if you got into crosshatching translucent layers and stuff instead of just a bunch of obvious parallel lines.
>>5915298Idk too dark in the shadow part. The quick impression stuff is ok but kind of annoying. The randomly blended looking part on the forehead is weird
>>5915486I dig the weird eye strokes and pencil lining and slightly caricaturized features
>>5917413>>5917508Good job
>>5917469Why does ic have such generic taste in references?
I don’t like the brush you used tbphwyf
>>5917930Ok pencil shading. Maybe look into getting more creative with hatching and stylizing
>>5918566Be less clean and digital maybe. Depends on what you’re trying to do. Also could use more blending and/or transition tones for the cheek and mouth bumps
>>5918575Are you all using a fucking freckle brush or what? Why does everyone that does freckles all have the same looking ones?
>>5918672Yes. Nobody wants to draw anything but the same generic model faces in studio lighting. Post any draw thread of anything challenging or silly or sellable and get ignored or insulted. Post the same boring face every few months and whammy.
