>>5899945So this is a critic, I'll just point what I think is technically wrong to help you improve; don't take it personal or anything. The piece is interesting/intriguing actually.
The surrounding decoration is interesting, it's a bit rushed, you would have wanted to take more time.
Pubic/armpit hairs could have been shaved, for aesthetic's sake.
The piece lacks a title: that could help guide the interpretation (and perhaps justify the hairs idk kek)
The vast area behind her (water?) doesn't read well.
You could have played a bit more with contrasts in your linework to help create perspective: reduce contrast, details and amount of lines as you go farther.
The arrow injuries feel off / too geometrical.
The boobs, especially her right one, looks a bit flat.
There are inconsistencies regarding the (white) highlights direction over form.
Perhaps having the lady not touching the top/down borders would have been better?
