>>5868140OP, I like your practice methods here. You seem to have pretty good contrast on the shaded B/W images on top
I like the attention to detail on the soldier. As far as rough sketches go it's a great start, you managed to inform most of the shapes in this relaxed wiggle you've got going.
I'd try redrawing some of it to see how you would refine it into a clearer image. Which details are important to you? Simplify it, change line thickness to imply depth.
Do a self-study and try some new techniques. Try drawing suggestions on some of the objects as a study so you can better perceive them in 3D, your guns will benefit greatly from that.
I might show you an example of some of these things if I get the time soon.
Gj either way.
>>5868637there is always at least one of these.
Get your unhelpful self and shut it up. You aren't helping anyone or yourself.