>>5861982Work more on hair. It looks like worms not like hair. Try to merge them so it will look more natural and not like cap. Depending on material of finished pice it's important how you make hair.
Don't know your refrence so (photo of figure or pic from anime?) it's hard to give accurate critique. Generally more refs from diffrent angles the better. Of course it's better to start with real human head and study fundies.
Do next.