>>5860775The dryad girl is alright , could perhaps use somewhat better lineart but its alright.
For the comic you could likely use construction and taking more time.
I can tell you you had some sort of under drawing for the top part of the comic (his hand was down but you erased it) but i dont really see any construction.
I do see some construction for your (what i assume to be) dryad , the one where the "I am NOT Learning" text is written on.
Here is some advice:
-Try spending more time on your drawings , have a construction , set down perspective ponts like a VPs and horison line and stuff , and perhaps even try multiple passes of the same piece. At the very least use construction.
-You may want to consider doing and multiple thumbnails/variations of a piece before commiting rather than going for the first thing you draw
If you have grinded fundies for 10 years plus , you likely cultivated a lot of discipline , even if you went down a incredibly inefficient path. You will likely learn faster than most just because of that.
Also what resourses did you use to learn?
Personal recomandations in terms of learning resourses are:
Perspective made eazy (Ernest Ralph Norling)
Figure drawing - Design and detail (Michael Hampton)
While I am not the best artist by any means , I hope this advice may help
