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ITT: We find technical flaws in finished professional work

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 10:30:23 2022 No.5858691 View Reply Original Report

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I'll start

1. Manly shoulders on female build
2. Weirdly positioned Kneecaps
3. Bad perspective on feet
4. Unequal spacing between eyes
5. Tits not big enough

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 10:31:57 No.5858695 Report

Quoted By: >>5858762

>>5858691
pyw.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 10:33:58 No.5858699 Report

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>>5858691
>gundam character
are you from /m/? pyw because I know the tards there can't fucking draw

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 10:39:19 No.5858706 Report

Quoted By: >>5859060

Art is never finished, only abandoned

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 11:08:27 No.5858762 Report

Quoted By: >>5858824 >>5859034

>>5858695
You don't have to be a politician to know that Trump was a dog shit president

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 11:36:00 No.5858806 Report

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>Manly shoulders on female build
t. been born in low T womb

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 11:37:48 No.5858810 Report

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>ITT: we seeth

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 11:38:33 No.5858811 Report

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>>5858691
kys dunning kruger

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 11:45:39 No.5858824 Report

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>>5858762
>Artwork/Critique
>B-BUT DRUMPF
do mutts really?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 11:48:23 No.5858831 Report

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>>5858691
Those shoulders are pretty insane.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 11:49:26 No.5858833 Report

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>>5858824
I was making a point you fucking dumbass

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 11:56:40 No.5858847 Report

Quoted By: >>5858851

>l-lets seethe over artist better than 100% of ic and already made it
How fucking embarrassing.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 11:59:08 No.5858851 Report

Quoted By: >>5858859

>>5858847
I think it's good to point out professional art has "flaws" or intentionally unorthodox design so artists that are learning don't feel like it is some kind of impossible standard to reach.
It's not crabbing to criticise someone that was never in the bucket to begin with.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 12:04:48 No.5858859 Report

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>>5858851
Most of the "flaws" OP pointed out were just OP not having a fucking clue and pointing at things he THINKS might be wrong. Not exactly the best start.

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Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 12:05:23 No.5858861 Report

Quoted By: >>5861140

If you had any art-related intentions with this thread you'd be trying to correct it, not point it out.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 12:06:50 No.5858866 Report

Quoted By: >>5858867

OP doesn't draw

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 12:08:38 No.5858867 Report

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>>5858866
Ur mom

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 12:24:46 No.5858896 Report

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dunning kruger thread

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 12:27:48 No.5858900 Report

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I'll play along. Redline the kneecaps if there's verifiably something wrong with them.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 12:28:01 No.5858901 Report

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is this a concept art piece?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 12:31:50 No.5858912 Report

Quoted By: >>5858938

>>5858691
are the eyes actually uneven or did you forgot how noses work in anime

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 12:38:02 No.5858925 Report

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>>5858691
I think the main problem is that it is westoid shit, therefore no matter how many times the artist tries to improve it, it will always be westoid garbage

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 12:45:40 No.5858938 Report

Quoted By: >>5859048

>>5858912
ok I don't think it's very off

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 13:00:31 No.5858953 Report

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aw sweet a schizo thread

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 13:11:21 No.5858962 Report

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>>5858925
Isnt it gundam?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 13:13:07 No.5858964 Report

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>>5858691
oh sweet, a schizoid crab thread

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 13:14:17 No.5858966 Report

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>>5858925
damn, we have an actual retard here. You and OP should suck each other's cock.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 13:23:41 No.5858978 Report

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>>5858691
Is this the next step of redlining? Not even corrections, just red circling with vague descriptors

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 13:25:48 No.5858981 Report

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>>5858691
>unequal spacing on eyes
Compared to the nose's line, not the face or general nose shape. Are you that much of a brainlet? lmao

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Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 13:32:28 No.5858987 Report

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>>5858691
The absolute state...

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 13:34:02 No.5858991 Report

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>>5858925
>westoid shit
You're the main reason why people hate japanese media and anything related

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 14:14:43 No.5859034 Report

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>>5858824
Looks like a lost bot from pol/ that gives generated responses.

>>5858762
Hey lil' fella go on back to pol/, shoo now.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 14:18:15 No.5859039 Report

Quoted By: >>5859042

>>5858691
>tits not big enough

That's a realistic choice and not something that is a flaw. If you think it is then I declare all males drawn without massive shlongs that drag on the ground, flawed.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 14:19:37 No.5859042 Report

Quoted By: >>5859057

>>5859039
This was written by a titlet.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 14:22:12 No.5859048 Report

Quoted By: >>5859184

>>5858938
Her nose isn't turned you brainlet. Its the shadow cast on the side of her nose facing away form the light source. She even has both nostrils showing facing forward

>>5858925
>anime eyes
>anime nose
>I don't like it so it is western

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 14:25:26 No.5859056 Report

Quoted By: >>5859062

dogshit thread, just to complain when they literally can't draw themselves.
love 4chan, pyw pussie. i bet its horrible. i know you won't cause you're a bitch

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 14:25:51 No.5859057 Report

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>>5859042
Nah actually DD 34. I just appreciate women with small breasts because if you can only draw one female and male body type, you're a sad sack of crap. I despise freakishly tall anime characters for the same reason. Literally everyone is basketball player tall because the artist can only draw one body type.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 14:26:13 No.5859058 Report

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this is a makimafag thread. everyone above this post was trolled.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 14:26:40 No.5859060 Report

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>>5858706
This.
I've read an artist interview before, I don't remember who, where he said something like "I'd still be working on a canvas and adding and changing things up until the minute it left the studio..."

So /ic/fags really need to abandon the idea that every piece has to be a perfect masterpiece with zero flaws.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 14:29:19 No.5859062 Report

Quoted By: >>5859078

>>5859056
This thread is dogshit because no one else posted other pro artwork with questions about it and just fixated on the retarded op.
But the idea of discussing and criticising pro art is good. I don't know why anons take it personally when some random pro artist gets his worked criticised. It's like you are their fucking agent coming in to defend them.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 14:38:09 No.5859078 Report

Quoted By: >>5859125

>>5859062
if you think this helps people then you should quit drawing.
This is just an ego boost for dumb people who want to be "hurrdurrr I can critquee pros"

If you can't tell then you're an idiot

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 14:46:14 No.5859092 Report

Quoted By: >>5861151

>>5858691
>An art critique thread in ic - Artwork/Critique
>NOOOOOO you can't critique other people's art, PYW PYW PYW!!!!

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 14:57:55 No.5859125 Report

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>>5859078
People can point out why your criticism is wrong and then you learn. They can use actual reasons to influence you and examples or excerpts from instructors or other artists if they don't want to post their own work.
>If you can't tell then you're an idiot
These words are a useless screen for someone with nothing of value to add.

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Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 15:10:45 No.5859147 Report

Quoted By: >>5859160 >>5859496

>>5858691
The shoulders aren't too large at all, nor the breasts too small. Just admit you've never seen a woman.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 15:19:17 No.5859160 Report

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>>5859147
>Lisa MANoban

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 15:25:32 No.5859176 Report

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Knees, shoulders, feet perspective are fine

is this bait?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 15:30:00 No.5859184 Report

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>>5859048
nta but the shadows on her cheek and neck are on the other side. It's OK, though, I also thought it was supposed to be the shadow at first. No idea what the intent is.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 17:30:25 No.5859426 Report

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Everything is fine except for the eyes which are kind of misplaced, but it's fine because any artist worth their grain of salt acknowledge that front view isn't 100% symmetrical.
So, again, fuck this post, fuck Op, and fuck the dunnings in this thread.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 17:37:17 No.5859438 Report

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>>5858691
Is this that sort of thread where we are supposed to get more forgiving about our skills because even professionals can fuck up?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 17:54:23 No.5859487 Report

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>>5858691
>We find technical flaws in finished professional work
Wow, you are pretty pathetic aren't you? The perfect case of tearing others down to feel better about yourself instead of building yourself up.
Just cut your dick off now and call yourself Ma'am because you are clearly not a man.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 17:59:10 No.5859496 Report

Quoted By: >>5859797

>>5859147
Wide shoulders on a woman look good, but that’s just disgusting

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 20:14:01 No.5859783 Report

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>>5858691
>5. Tits not big enough
but... what if I like flat women anon?
I'm for the K life history strategy you know

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 20:19:07 No.5859797 Report

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>>5859496
>but that's just disgusting
Now you feel how any woman looks at you

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 21:08:01 No.5859952 Report

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>>5858691
>We find technical flaws
you first

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 21:30:09 No.5859989 Report

Quoted By: >>5861156

>>5858691
>2. Weirdly positioned Kneecaps
Do you mean the literal vertical position on the legs or the orientation? Because for the former she's in a half walking pose so her right leg is leaning behind, and the latter her knees are just bending inwards because femininity or something
>3. Bad perspective on feet
It's a bit rough but it looks about right for feet in high heels
>4. Unequal spacing between eyes
As others have pointed out, no
The more I look at it I think it's the shape of the face itself/chin that's throwing it off, something is misaligned but the spacing isn't the issue here

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 19 Jan 2022 21:47:42 No.5860024 Report

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nice retarded thread

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 20 Jan 2022 09:28:47 No.5861131 Report

Quoted By: >>5861145

>>5858691
I know this is a retarded bait thread and OP is a NGMI tard but this is the only time I'll ever get to post this
It always bugged me that Dr. Peace's revolver wasn't pointing where he's looking. Pretty sure they did the gun first and then just slapped it into his hand instead of bothering to redraw it. The NMH franchise still has some of my favorite art though

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 20 Jan 2022 09:32:37 No.5861140 Report

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>>5858861
The fact that all he's doing is pointing it out is probably the most pathetic. He can only state his uneducated takes and say dumb shit like "weirdly positioned" and "tits too small" but can do nothing to elaborate or demonstrate his technical ability - or let's be fucking honest here, his complete lack thereof.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 20 Jan 2022 09:35:44 No.5861145 Report

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>>5861131
Even with the context of his hand it makes no sense. Who pulls the trigger with the very tip of their finger?

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 20 Jan 2022 09:39:47 No.5861151 Report

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>>5859092
Hello OP. Throwing stones in a glass house again are we?

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 20 Jan 2022 09:42:34 No.5861156 Report

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>>5859989
>The more I look at it I think it's the shape of the face itself/chin that's throwing it off, something is misaligned but the spacing isn't the issue here
It's the eyebrow, anon. OP still a fag though.

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