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Anonymous Sat 15 Jan 23:17:09 2022 No.5851026 View Reply Original Report

Quoted By: >>5851034 >>5851219 >>5851221 >>5851319 >>5851321 >>5851323 >>5852387

hello can you help me with my drawing
I really tried here, but I think I got lost
this one is very difficult but I wanted something else than just standing

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jan 2022 23:23:01 No.5851034 Report

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>>5851026
sorry can't help you

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jan 2022 01:23:37 No.5851219 Report

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>>5851026
her left leg is a lot shorter than her right

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jan 2022 01:24:29 No.5851221 Report

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>>5851026
you dont have the spark, sorry friend, youre not worth helping.

Wisdomsend

Wisdomsend Sun 16 Jan 2022 01:50:00 No.5851272 Report

Quoted By: >>5851281

Her back foot is broken. Look at run cycle key frames to reference this pose

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 16 Jan 2022 01:54:36 No.5851281 Report

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>>5851272
well this was one of my refs

I'll adress the other things in the morning. i am going to sleep now bros.

Wisdomsend

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Wisdomsend Sun 16 Jan 2022 02:09:00 No.5851303 Report

Quoted By: >>5851323

Overall, the easiest fix would be making her back leg longer.

However it’s a proportional problem at the torso.
Since you thickened her hips her advancing thigh looks shorter than it really is.

Also you straightened her torso way too much while the ref has a nice gesture flowing from the back foot to the left arm’s armpit.

It’s small things and among them stylization choices but they have to be coherent or the pose breaks down.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jan 2022 02:19:39 No.5851319 Report

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>>5851026
>>5851281
i like the style but you made her arms shorter and her right leg bigger.
you should also make her lean forward a bit.

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Anonymous Sun 16 Jan 2022 02:22:51 No.5851321 Report

Quoted By: >>5851337

>>5851026
I think the above anon is right, the torso is a little flat. Adding some volume around the back to bring out the latissimus dorsi might help with the shoulder connection. If she's mid-stride, I think the front foot should also be tilted up as if she's about to take a step, and the back foot should maybe be tilted back as if it just left the ground.
Tilting the body forward might help make it more dynamic, but it's not totally necessary.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jan 2022 02:23:12 No.5851323 Report

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>>5851303
that looks wrong, the leg is supposed to look shorter due to foreshortening.

>>5851026
OP, work on your foreshortening.

Also notice in your reference shes leaning forward more. Your figure is straight up which looks unnatural, humans lean forward when they run

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jan 2022 02:31:12 No.5851337 Report

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>>5851321
okay, the one on the right is how she should look given the reference.
but i think op wants to focus on booba and ass so its less horny.
he probably wants the one on the left.

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Anonymous Sun 16 Jan 2022 15:34:02 No.5852366 Report

Quoted By: >>5852375 >>5852380 >>5852400

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Anonymous Sun 16 Jan 2022 15:40:37 No.5852375 Report

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>>5852366
i think you should try seeing how irl women look, or heck, stick to your reference.. the thickening everywhere looks out of place

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Anonymous Sun 16 Jan 2022 15:42:43 No.5852378 Report

Quoted By: >>5852388 >>5852400

>>5852375
ehh I just wanted to draw like this

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jan 2022 15:44:33 No.5852380 Report

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>>5852366
Hmm, I'm not a fan of the abs or how they are drawn with the drawing/body. Everything seems stiff compared to the sketch. The colors are "meh" too. It looks like you aren't having fun making this picture. Compared to the sketch.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jan 2022 15:48:51 No.5852387 Report

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>>5851026
stop being a coomer faggot and learn to draw

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jan 2022 15:49:40 No.5852388 Report

Quoted By: >>5852393

>>5852378
We'll you will have to work on your line-work. If you want to draw like that. From what I see you are only using brushes so what did you expect? A Japanese artists will usually redraw a picture 2-3 times.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jan 2022 15:51:52 No.5852393 Report

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>>5852388
alright while it would be cool to be able to make such clean lines, I meant the body type more

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jan 2022 15:57:19 No.5852400 Report

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>>5852366
notice how in >>5852378 only 5 defined abdominal sections are visible: a large volume below the navel, and 4 over it

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