>>5830789the outline on the left box is getting my attention, when the center figure was suposed to be the focal point
you have a almost pro tier of drawing, but this design don't help so much, maybe is the composition , i don't know how to explain, this giant box doesn't help the atmosphere, if it is a abandoned facility with natural light coming from the top in the rain, maybe you should put some raindrops inside, some wet floor, some rust
