>>5817694There's a tangent with the border and the right speartip, and the middle spear is almost piercing the eye of the guy on the right, the pointing of the spears appears very energetic, and yet the characters seem relaxed and just gazing around, I would say the layers should be separated more with value differences decreasing more with the two background characters, I also don't like how the weapons seem to be just glued to their hands. Lastly, hollow Knight has such a gorgeous artstyle, and yet, nothing of it was adapted here and the grain effect blows.