>>5790107That's muuuuch better than before, great!
The shadows are a bit too dull (black);perhaps because of the camera.
You could still refine your understanding of the form; copying a polished Bargue or high-quality academical drawings might help. Don't bother with color;this is purely a matter of value/form here;even drawing a grid instead of rendering might be good enough.
Once you perfectly understand the form, you'll be able to simplifying it with more elegance/confidence.
Well done!
>>5790145You've already got some decent technical skills;provided you can grind the bits your missing, you have great chance to do it.
>>5789630That guy:
https://www.youtube.com/c/StefanBaumann always stresses the importance of having a central focal point, that is, an area of focus in a painting.
That fish partially in the shadow (the low one), you could tone done the shadow part a bit more, it's currently popping as if it was in light.
He's a bit of a your-grandma-teacher kind, but he has quite a few valid essential points;he's been at an easel/in front of a class for decades.
