>>5783111Not sure what's with all the retards making text only posts to show you why your VISUAL artwork isn't great.
Look at the reference you have provided more closely and compare it with your artwork.
Notice these features:
Size of head to body, you have drawn either the head too smalll or the body too large
Key features of anatomy, Although you have a good skeleton there are a few things wrong such as the abstraction used for the pelvis. As you can see, the pelvis you have drawn ends up with an anatomy that is too rounded for the hips. The hips are more of a box than an oval. The ribcage is also more box like than egg shaped but many artists stylize it like that so I don't think it matters.
Your lines are nice though and there is a good understanding of anatomy from the shoulders up.
