>>5774364Looks ok, a little fucked but you're learning. What you need, is to get better sketching pencils. That lighter graphite makes it look like fucking shit. If you're gonna do traditional art, invest in yourself a bit.
>>5774833Why bother posting art that isn't even halfway finished? If you aren't trying to follow any specific guide or regimen to constructing faces, you need to be copying better artists drawings, drawing from imagination at this stage will Fuck you up. If you are copying, then don't stop a quarter the way through like some ADD ridden asshole. Fuck off back to /beg/ and stay there if you aren't even going to try.
