>>5770008Honestly for the most part its decent.
Biggest issue imo is the lighting. The shading in general doesn't make sense, especially since the window full of natural light is in the background beaming in, but the shadows are going the opposite way.
Another minor issue is the tail which would protrude outward and she's laying down flat, so the fail comes off as flat as well, I'd turn her hips a little to make it make more sense.
From a composition perspective there's a few things I'd change.
First off, the window is too high value and takes your vision away from the important parts of the image which is Fubuki (the fox girl)
I'd probably flip the bed around as a whole so you can't see the window, but the light coming from it would illuminate her face (or whichever feature is being focused on). As is your eyes are drawn to the highest value highest saturated part of the image, which is in the background. This is offset somewhat by the lights on her thighs and breasts, but it doesn't really make sense.
The second composition change I'd make is her pose, while its good in theory its missing the critical aspect that makes these type poses good, and that is of course her feet. Feet are great for images like this, they convey emotion and show a delicate side of the maiden that we wouldn't normally see. The way a girl is flexing her toes can change a piece from girlish joy to an embarrassed girl about to lose her virginity to the love of her life. No matter how you look at it though, the feet are ESSENTIAL to any piece with a pose such as this where the legs are up.
And a minor nitpick because I literally just ran into this in a drawing I was doing a few hours ago. Torso is a little elongated, maybe cut it back a little or use a lower angle. Its an anatomical error though so its as low priority imo.
