>>5745546hey anon looks cool.
the 4 and 5 panels of the second page are weak.
The 4th one highlights the part the thing is in a desert, and that we already know, it is looking at the surroundings and thats ok but maybe choose another view.
About the body figure you are also sending messages that might take away from your idea. We are seeing already several interesting things: The fall, the blob, the blob becoming human like, the spooky planet and then the body. If you make the body too female like viewers might give that too much attention in the wrong sense. That's a naked, adult, idealized female figure and you should keep in mind in what that does. You can't use male and female characters interchangeably without changing the meaning of things. Unless you wanna build story for your star alien waifu.
always plan something "female" for your female characters. If you looked at any manga they do this. Otherwise, it would just look like the author was horny.
