>>5719365Depends. If you are going for painted or rendered look, I don't think it's going to matter, but if you want the lines to play into the illustration I think thickening them in some places like on the bottom parts where they meet the floor would be good.
Also, I noticed some other things:
Her raised arm isn't foreshortened correctly on the upper arm, and the dude laying on the floor needs to have his head be little bigger, it looks kinda small atm.
The connection of the leg to her pelvis is wrong, if you look at anyone sitting raising their legs, I feel like you'd need to have the entire leg pushed more to the left