>>5334432>anon manually reinventing quests>on the bitterest, most withdrawn board
I respect your chutzpah, hero>>5336948
Well that ain't good>go outside and make sure you're not in some kind of infinite black void>>5336964
Anon is wrong, but the easiest route to good dialogue is short sentences with emotionally charged language. Bad writing is primarily boring writing. 'Bad' books sell because something in them appeals to people.
If anyone else is worried about their storytelling read thishttps://www.theguardian.com/books/2016/may/20/what-makes-bad-writing-bad-toby-litt