>>130218246>>130218191The steel beam bit is fine, I include it for completion's sake. But the rest is pretty bad.
On second page, you can hardly see Mary piercing the other symbiote girl because it's all cluttered by shards and sounds effects. Also notice how Elekta punching Mary is not the focus. The artwork is literally framed in a way where we can't see the actual punch.
On page three, it's even worse. Notice how in the first panel, Mary's blade-hands are pointing down, but on the second page, they're suddenly pointing up. I mean, symbiote weapon arms can change directions but that's not shown explicitly (because we don't see most of Mary in the second panel anyway) and I don't even know if that was intentional or just an oversight. Also notice how we never actually see Mary flinging Elektra around (I assume that's what happens because we don't fucking see it!). We only see Elektra being thrown in the wall, with any kind of guess as to what happened in between the panels.
On the fourth page we once again don't see Mary supposedly ramming into Elektra and throwing her out the window, once again only Elektra getting thrown out and landing onto a car.
Throughout all of these pages, characters actually hitting each other is glossed over. The focus is characters getting tossed into stuff with le epic explosions. And again, most of the action is told not through art, but through Elektra's narration.
