Hi. I'm the guy who signed on to write for you. I apologise for not communicating with you, but I have no idea what you want your series to be. I get that you want cartoon Shin Chan style humor with the dialogue, but the series is a run-of-the-mill adventure show with a lewd twist. It kind of clashes especially since they barely talk to each other. The only character I was able to work with was Fatty, and the lewd stuff just feels like a dumb gimmick. I personally think that you need to fully think the series through, especially since you said that you have no idea what "pussy", the macguffin that drives the series, is.
Also, what were you going for with Miriam?